1、Unit 3 On the Move-Writing单元整体分析By the end of the lesson, students will be able to1. generalize the structure of writing personal stories;2. write their own sports story;3. talk about their understanding of sports through Nick and Eileen Gus stories.How many Winter Olympic sports do you know in the
2、video?Know more about the topicSports in Winter Olympicsice hockey冰球冰球short track speed skating短道速滑短道速滑figure skating花花样滑冰样滑冰freestyle skiingski jumping跳台跳台滑雪滑雪biathlon 现代冬现代冬季两项季两项Eileen GuChinese freestyle skier2003Born in San Francisco, America2016started her career as a skier2021made history as
3、the first female to win three medals at her first XGame2006started to learn ski.2019earned her first World Cup victoryannounced that she would be representing China competitivelyRead for information2022won the gold in Beijing 2022Do you have any sports stories to share with us?Lets watch Eileen Gus
4、story.What was her reason for starting free ski?When did she win her first world champion?What is her wish for the future?Who influenced her most?Does her story inspire you? Eileen GuachievementsWho influenced her most?Her wish for the futureReason for free skiShe won her first world champion in Jan
5、uary 2019 in Italy.Compared with racing ski, her mom thought free ski was safer.She wants to inspire younger girls who may not know about the sport or extreme sports.Bobby BrownWhat did she do when facing failures and stress in the competition in Italy?She took a deep breath and thought about .Read
6、the notice and answer the questions. What kind of stories does the website want? Why is the website looking for stories?The website wants sports lovers stories from all over the world.Because it wants to inspire its readers.TenseIntroductionIntroductionABodyBody BconclusionconclusionCSport ice hocke
7、y Reasonto deal with the terror of walking or skating on ice three years agoKey experiences, I was terrified.2. My teacherpersuaded me to try.3. I loved it and was .4. We are .5. I was so proud .6. .hope to be champion .FeelingsHope for the future“My ultimate goal is to be an ice hockey teacher and
8、help people learn to play this game.”StructureLogicTenseExpressionintroductionBodyConclusionDeep thinkingWhat contributes to Nicks success in his story?braveryothers helphard workloveteamworkpersuade (vt.)He then persuaded me to try ice hockey.paraphrase: He then gave me some good reasons for trying
9、 paraphrase: He then gave me some good reasons for trying ice hockey and made me do it.ice hockey and made me do it. c a u s e s o m e o n e t o d o something by providing good reasons1. She has no definite views of her own and is easily persuaded.2. Her parents persuaded her son to learn medicine a
10、t university.How do Nicks story and Eileen Gus speech inspire you?To deal with the terror of walking or skating on ice, I decided to join a skating club.I loved it and was soon practising with my local team almost every evening.I was so proud when my team won the competition.“I fell in both of my fi
11、rst two runs, but I was able to take a really deep breath and really thought about why I was doing the sport and what I loved about it. A I ended up winning that competition.” Taking a sport can not always go smoothly, whether for professional athletes or the amateur. The important thing is to have
12、passion and persistence, and the result will turn out to be satisfying.Wishesfootball/ basketball/ volleyballrunningrope skippingStoryinfluenced by othersat firstthenat lastinteresthave talents for .proudcourageperseverancewin competitionsimprove healthpersevere easy/ challengingfun/ excitedSportsWh
13、y startExperiencesFeelingslessonsRecall your sports story and write down the key words.advantages of some sportsWhy start:My father is a basketball fan, and I was influenced by him. I was crazy about those basketball stars ever since I was a little boy. Benefits of sports: Physical: increase general
14、 health, lose body fat, build muscles and strengthen bones, increase overall appearanceMental: enhance concentration, develop vital skills in problem solving, manage time and attain goals, build confidence through both success and disappointment, relieve tension and stressSocial: learn social intera
15、ction, teamwork and cooperationAdvantages of some sports: minimal injuries, affordable, play all year round, dont need to round up a team to play, play alone and actually enjoy it, play in an indoor arena.Wishes:When I grow up, I want to be Ive been a sports nut since I was old enough to hold a ball
16、. Thats why when my PE teacher presented me with the idea of joining the swimming team. I decided to give it a shot and challenge myself a bit more. So I started swimming practice last June. At first I only regarded swimming as a hobby to enhance my physical fitness. But soon I found I fell in love
17、with it. Then, last week, I had my first swimming competition, in the 100m breaststroke. Standing tall at the head of the lane made me feel both nervous and excited. After the sound of the whistle, I dived in and began to swim with all my strength! Finally, I came in the third place. I was so happy
18、for my achievement, and it proved that hard work pays off. I will keep on swimming, perhaps for the rest of my life. Not only because it makes me healthier and stronger, but also for the confidence and sense of achievement it has brought. One possible answer 01Great ideas:Advanced expressions:02Crit
19、eriaDetailsPoints(1-5)Your adviceContentkey information, detailsOrganizationstructure; orderly sequencing of information; coherence and cohesionLanguagestyle, vocabulary, sentence varietyGrammartense, consistency, sentence structure, punctuation, spellingHandwritingneat and legibleKobe Bryants sport
20、s storyobstaclessolutionsterror of walking on icecontinuous practiceKeep on getting involved in sports actively.Assignment Exchange your sports story with each other and learn from each other. 1.Use the rubric to assess your partners work.2.Find at least three good points of his/ her work.3.Give at least three suggestions.
