1、 Unit 4Breaking boundariesPeriod 4演讲稿属于应用文的一种。 写作时要首先点明演讲的主题和目的，以便抓住听众的注意力；主体部分可以通过事例、细节描述等有步骤地展开对主题的介绍；结尾总结时，要对主题进行概括、强调。本单元的写作任务要求写一篇人物介绍类的演讲稿，所以，文章除了要符合一般演讲稿的特点和要求外，还要指明人物、时间、地点、事件及结果等要素。写作时可以主要从以下三个方面入手：1介绍人物的身份、职业、成就及其产生的影响；2描述人物如何打破界限，尤其是该人物与众不同的方面；3阐述自己的感受： 从人物事迹中学到的品质以及对人物的评价。基本框架第一段：对人物进行简单
2、介绍，点出演讲主题；第二段：根据写作具体要求详细介绍此人物；第三段：概括自己或人们对此人物的评价。增分佳句1Today, Im going to introduce., who is.2He/She made a contribution to.by doing.3Although he/she was.what set him/her apart from the others was that.4His efforts made other countries have a better understanding of.5I admire him/her for.and Im deter
3、mined to learn from him/her.6She was a lively young woman with patience and imagination.7Everyone who knows him likes to make friends with him.8He is such a learned person that we all admire him very much.9She took an active part in social activities.10Showing great interest in drawing, she made up
4、her mind to be a painter.11He fell in love with science and devoted himself to it.12She finished middle school in 1980, after which she went to university.典型例题 写作要求感恩，是我们生活中永恒的话题。学会感恩，学会热爱生活，我们将会感受到更多快乐。你校学生会和校团委准备举行一次以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。要点：1.感恩对象(父母、老师、朋友)；2为何感恩(至少提出两点原因)；3如何感恩(至少给出一
5、种途径或建议)。注意：1.词数80左右；2只能选择一个感恩对象；3可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯；4开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Good afternoon, everyone，Its a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The title of my speech is “Thank you, _”_Thank you! 审题谋篇第一步：审题构思很关键第二步：核心词汇想周全1be_blessed_with 有幸得到2get_upset心烦意乱3cheer_up振作起来4in_return回报5appeal_
6、to呼吁6a_small_talk闲谈第三步：由词扩句雏形现1像你们中的许多人一样， 我很幸运有一位母亲，她是爱的源泉。(定语从句) Like many of you, I 2我的母亲是位普通的家庭主妇。My mother is 3我非常感谢她的体贴，尤其是在那些压力很大的日子里。I 4当我难过的时候，她会倾听我，安慰我，直到我振作起来。 ,_she listens to me and comforts me until_I_have_cheered_up5我很幸运有这样一位关心我的母亲。Im 6大考的时间快到了。The time for the big exam 7这是作为回报表达我们的爱的
7、一个机会。(it作形式主语) .8我呼吁在座的各位为我们亲爱的母亲们努力学习。I for our dear mothers.9我有另一个消息要告诉在座的各位。I here.10与母亲简短的谈话或者给母亲一杯茶都会让她开心。 will make her happy.第四步：句式升级造亮点1把第三步中的句4改为让步状语从句 .2把第三步中的句6和句7合并为定语从句 .第五步：过渡衔接连成篇Good afternoon, everyone，Its a great honor to have the opportunity to be with you today. The title of my s
8、peech is “Thank you, _”_Thank you!实战演练假定你是李华，将参加主题为“My Favourite Hero”的演讲比赛。请你根据以下表格提示写一篇演讲稿。人物郑和朝代明朝事迹1.1371年出生，著名的航海家；214051433年先后七次下西洋，进行贵重物品的贸易，如金、银、丝绸等；3发展了中国与其他国家和地区间的贸易，促进了文化和技术的交流，促进了那些国家和地区的发展。评价注意：1.词数80左右；2可以适当增加细节，使行文连贯。_答案一词形转换和动词的形式变换(用所给词的正确形式填空)第二步：核心词汇想周全1be_blessed_with 2get_upset3
9、cheer_up4in_return5appeal_to6a_small_talk第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.have_been_blessed_with_a_mother_who_is_a_source_of_love2.an_ordinary_housewife3.highly_appreciate_her_kind_consideration,_especially during_those_stressful_days4.When_I_get_upset5.so_fortunate_to_have_such_a_caring_mother6.is_approaching7.Its_a_c
10、hance_for_us_to_express_our_love_in_return8.appeal_to_all_of_us_here_to_work_hard9.have_another_message_for_everyone10.Either_a_small_talk_with_our_mother_or_a_cup_of_tea_for_her第四步：句式升级造亮点1.Whenever_I_get_upset,_she_listens_to_me_and_comforts_me_until_I_have_cheered_up2.The_time_for_the_big_exam_is
11、_approaching,_which_is_a_chance_for_us_to_express_our_love_in_return第五步：过渡衔接连成篇One possible version：Good_afternoon,_everyone，Its_a_great_honor_to_have_the_opportunity_to_be_with_you_today._The_title_of_my_speech_is_“Thank_you,_mum.”Like many of you, I have been blessed with a mother who is a source
12、of love. My mother is an ordinary housewife. I highly appreciate her kind consideration, especially during those stressful days. Besides, whenever I get upset, she listens to me and comforts me until I have cheered up. Im so fortunate to have such a caring mother.The time for the big exam is approac
13、hing, which is a chance for us to express our love in return. I appeal to all of us here to work hard for our dear mothers. I have another message for everyone here. Either a small talk with our mother or a cup of tea for her will make her happy.Thank_you!实战演练One possible version：Hello, everyone. I
14、would like to say Zheng He is my favourite hero in history. He was born in 1371, and became a famous voyager later. He built a great fleet of ships, which was the biggest in the world at that time. From 1405 to 1433，Zheng He went on seven trips to the Western Ocean, trading valuable goods, such as g
15、old, silver and silk. Whats more, the voyages have developed the trade between China and other countries and regions and encouraged the exchange of cultures and technologies, which contributed to the development of those countries and regions.Zheng He is really an international hero and his vayages are such a huge achievement that people still remember him as a pioneer in opening up cultural contacts between different peoples around the world.Thank you!学科网（北京）股份有限公司
