1、Mount Englishlistening and speakingreadingwriting学情分析学情分析缺乏审题和解题技巧1. 学生易忽略题目中人称学生易忽略题目中人称和时态。和时态。2. 缺乏读题能力。缺乏读题能力。3. 存在一段式的写作方式存在一段式的写作方式4. 缺乏句子之间的过渡词缺乏句子之间的过渡词课程标准课程标准5 5级写作技能级写作技能 激活相关信息; 整理思路; 组织素材; 列出提纲； 起草短文； 组织语言； 修改短文; 正确使用标点符号和字母大小写。本课涵盖的写作技能本课涵盖的写作技能 激活相关信息; 整理思路； 组织素材； 列出提纲; 起草短文； 组织语言； 修改
2、短文；Before writing Post writing While writing Collect words about food Collect phrases about suggestionsand reasonsCollect linking wordsSearchListConnectCheckAssessmentShare设计说明设计说明学习目标学习目标Learning Objectives (学习目标)By the end of the class the students will be able to :1. Focus on the structures of wr
3、iting.2. Use more and correct linking words .3. Make a list of expressions about healthy diet.4. Give reasonable suggestions to keep healthy. 5. Love healthy life.Before writingIn the eveningStay up for watching TV.In the afternoonWatch TV the whole afternoon.In the morningDont get up immediately af
4、ter waking up.Watch TV in the bed.Without breakfast.Daily activitiesBefore writingBefore writingWhat problems may he have if he always has this kind of lifestyle?Does he need a change?What suggestions can you give him?Is he healthy or unhealthy?Before writingYou had better have more eggs and milk.Wh
5、y do we need eat more eggs and drink more milk?Because milk can help _.Because eggs _ protein.bones growcan give usBefore writingYou need do more exercise.Why do we need do more exercise?Because doing exercise can keep us _.Because doing sports regularly can help us _ virus.activefight aginsthealthy
6、 habitshabits effectGood _ ,_ life._Before writinghabitshealthy drink more boiled waterget up earlybrush teeth twice a daywash your handsbefore mealsbecome fitbe activekeep your teeth healthyprevent from the flu.healthy habitsgive suggestionsTo be _ ,to be _._reasons or benefits_Before writinghealth
7、yhappyhad better(not).need doneed to .should (not).remember(not).Its importantnecessary for.to do.Dont.give . energyhelp bonesfight aginst diseaseskeep . activebe good for. avoid cancerBefore writing情景交际情景交际1. 你妹妹晚上喝了咖啡睡不着，你可以这样劝她：你妹妹晚上喝了咖啡睡不着，你可以这样劝她： _2.当你想说喝牛奶对你的健康有益，你应当这样说：当你想说喝牛奶对你的健康有益，你应当这样说：
8、 3.你的朋友生病，你建议他多喝点热水，你可以这样说：你的朋友生病，你建议他多喝点热水，你可以这样说： Before writingget upIts good to get up. Getting up early can _ .Before writinggive upHe should give up smoking.Smoking can _ .While writing假如你是李华，收到英国笔友假如你是李华，收到英国笔友Helen的邮件，请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数的邮件，请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数80左右左右。LDear Lihua, How are you doing? Ive
9、 been staying at home for a month because of the outbreak of COVID-19. During the period, I have become much fatter than before. Whats more, I often get tired and cant sleep well. Do you usually have a healthy diet？Can you share me some ways to keep healthy? Then explain them to me. Looking forward
10、to hearing from you. Yours, Helen 注意事项：1.回复邮件时可适当发挥，邮件格式已给出，不计入总数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名以及地名。While writing审题审题(search)审审1. 体裁2. 人称3. 时态假如你是李华，收到英国笔友假如你是李华，收到英国笔友Helen的邮件，请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数的邮件，请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数80左右左右。Dear Lihua, How are you doing? Ive been staying at home for a month becau
11、se of the outbreak of COVID-19. During the period, I have become much fatter than before. Whats more, I often get tired and cant sleep well. Do you usually have a healthy diet？Can you share me some ways to keep healthy? Then explain them to me. Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours, Helen 信件信件第
12、一、二人称第一、二人称一般现在时一般现在时While writing列提纲列提纲(list)BeginningI am glad to hear from you.Here are some pieces of advice for you. BodyFirstly,you had better . If you ., . In order . you need .Secondly, remember . Though the junk food is attractive, .Third, . plays an important in .Because. EndingIn a word ,
13、 to be healthy to be happy.Best wishes to you . While writing While writingShow the mind map While writingShow the mind map While writingShow the mind mapWrite down the linking words and phrases which can make the passage more fluent. While writing表示顺序：表示顺序：_表示并列：表示并列：_表示递进表示递进: “: “而且而且”_”_表示原因表示原因
14、: _: _表示目的：表示目的：_表示对比：表示对比：_表示转折：表示转折：_表示举例：表示举例：_表示总结：表示总结：_First, Second, Third, at the same time, as well as , and , alsobesides, whats more because, as a result of.so thatin order towhile, on the other handhowever, but, though,unlikesuch as for examplefor instancein short, in a word, in conclusi
15、on, 连成段连成段(connect)While writingBeautiful sentences: 1All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 只工作只工作, 不玩耍不玩耍, 聪明孩子也变傻。聪明孩子也变傻。2The first wealth is health. 健康是人生第一财富。健康是人生第一财富。3An apple a day keeps the doctor away. 一天一苹果一天一苹果, 医生远离我。医生远离我。4. Diet cures more than doctors. 自己饮食有节，胜过上门求医。自己饮食有节，胜过上门
16、求医。5. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy, wealthy and wise.早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。While writing词数词数要点要点时态时态语态语态拼写拼写人称人称主谓主谓一致一致查错改错Post writing查查(check)印象分印象分-书写规范书写规范1. 标题居中标题居中2. 每段开头空四个字母每段开头空四个字母3. 齐线书写，斜度一致齐线书写，斜度一致4. 忌涂改过多忌涂改过多Post writingPost writing检查检查评价标准 档位分值标准五档13-
17、15分1、符合所提供的各种信息，有创意；2、句子正确通顺，或只有个别小错；3、单词拼写错误不超过4四档10-12分1、与所提供的各种信息基本符合；2、表达错误较少，表达较通顺；3、单词拼写错误不超过6个三档7-9分1、与试卷所提供的信息基本相符；2、句子表达错误较多，但尚可读懂；3、单词拼写错误不超过10个。二档4-6分1、与试卷提供的信息不符；2、只有少数句子表达正确；3、拼写错误在10个以上一档3分以下只有个别词语可读，但通篇不知所云。Post writingShow TimeHelen,Li Huaadvice_谚语谚语Post writingShow Time1.本节课我学到的写作技能
18、：2.本节课从同伴中我学到的好词好句：Health is more important than wealth.Rome is not built in one day.Only you can change yourself.1. Add more chunks to your own word bank and memorize them 完善个人词块库完善个人词块库2. Revise your compositions and exchange them with your classmates 自改，互改作文自改，互改作文3. （选做）（选做） Write a composition
19、on health.Before writing Post writing While writing Collect words about food Collect phrases about suggestionsand reasonsCollect linking wordsSearchListConnectCheckAssessmentShare板书板书设计设计healthy habitshabits effectGood _ ,_ life.Find out useful chunks(词块词块) in the passage and complete the mind map._Before writinghabitshealthyeat too mucheat junk foodwithout breakfastsmoking or drinkingeat the only food you like have a sweet toothbecome fatterget ill easilyteeth become weakfeel terriblecause cancernot enough nutrients for body
