1、话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 分析河南近分析河南近10年中招真题书面表达可知，年中招真题书面表达可知，“经历与感受经历与感受”这一话题主要考查：自己的经历与感受，如这一话题主要考查：自己的经历与感受，如2017年年“I did it！”， 2016年年“The biggest personal change Ive ever made”；他人的经历对自己的影响，如他人的经历对自己的影响，如2011年通过刘伟的故事得到什年通过刘伟的故事得到什么样的启示。么样的启示。命题探索话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 教材链接话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 (2017河南河南)我们每天都要做很多
2、事情，有些还很棘手。请我们每天都要做很多事情，有些还很棘手。请以以“I did it！”为题并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，为题并根据要点和要求，用英语写一篇短文，描述一件你完成的棘手事情描述一件你完成的棘手事情。典例剖析典例剖析审审标标题：题：棘手的事情我做到了棘手的事情我做到了审审文体：文体：记叙记叙文文审人称：第一人称审人称：第一人称审时态：一般过去时审时态：一般过去时一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 1.要求：要求：1)你做了什么事情；你做了什么事情； 2)你是如何做那件事情的；你是如何做那件事情的； 3)你你做完那件事情后的感受做完那件事
3、情后的感受。2. 要求：要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数词数80左右。左右。审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 1. Two years ago, I didnt have the courage to answer questions in class.2. It was that time that I decided to help more people in need.3. My father told me a story on my way home a
4、nd he helped me to plan my time properly.1角度角度介绍经历介绍经历一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 4. She encouraged me to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others.5. The young man next to our table spoke and laughed loudly.6. I was about to take a shower when the phone rang last n
5、ight.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 1. 三年前，我没有勇气承认自己的错误。三年前，我没有勇气承认自己的错误。_2. 就是在那个时候我决定努力学习。就是在那个时候我决定努力学习。_3. 在回家的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包。在回家的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包。_Three years ago, I didnt have the courage to admit my mistakes.It was that time that I decided to study hard. On my way home, I found a wallet on
6、 the ground.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 仿仿 写写 话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 4. 我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动。我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动。_5. 坐在我旁边的女孩大声说话很长时间。坐在我旁边的女孩大声说话很长时间。_6. 我正准备打扫教室的时候我的好朋友进来了。我正准备打扫教室的时候我的好朋友进来了。_My teacher encouraged me to take an active part in afterclass activities. The girl next to me spoke loudly for a long ti
7、me.I was about to clean the classroom when my best friend came in. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 1. She lost her favorite notebook.She lost her favorite notebook. How upset she was!2. I could hardly think clearly after that terrible earthquake.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearl
8、y after that terrible earthquake. 八八(下下)Unit 5 P382角度角度介绍感受介绍感受一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 3. I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.I often feel stressed because I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.4. I won the first prize in the reading competition
9、.I won the first prize in the reading competition. I was really happy that day.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 1. I got a better result in the monthly exam. (扩写感受扩写感受) _2. He didnt know what to say. (扩写感受扩写感受)_3. I dont want to speak in front of so many people.(扩写感受扩写感受)_I got a better result
10、in the monthly exam. How excited I was！He was so nervous that he didnt know what to say.I feel so worried and afraid because I dont want to speak in front of so many people. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 扩扩 写写 话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 4. They said there were no tickets left.(扩写感受扩写感受)_5. I talked back to my pa
11、rents yesterday. (扩写感受扩写感受)_They said there were no tickets left. I was unhappy that day.I talked back to my parents yesterday. I feel regretful now. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 1. His story taught me not to give up my dream and work hard to make it come true.2. From his experience, I real
12、ized that helping others can make the world more beautiful and can let others respect us at the same time.3. His words touched my heart and I would remember them forever.3角度角度他人经历对自己的影响他人经历对自己的影响一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句好好 句句 记记 背背话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 1. 这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。_2. 从她的经历中，我意识到了微笑在日常生活中的
13、重要性。从她的经历中，我意识到了微笑在日常生活中的重要性。_3. 他温暖的话给了我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持。他温暖的话给了我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持。_This experience taught me not to look down upon others.From her experience, I realized the importance of smiling in daily life. His warm words gave me courage and confidence and I would remember his support forever.
14、一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句句句 子子 仿仿 写写 话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 Last year, I met a difficult situation. I _(棘手棘手的事情的事情). I didnt know what I should do at first. And I felt _(对事情的感受对事情的感受)Then I _(应对的办法应对的办法). failed the exam/ couldnt understand what the teacher said in class/.asked the teacher for help/ reviewed
15、the lessons carefully/.disappointed/ stressed/.经历及感受经历及感受一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段语段练习语段练习1话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 Finally, I _(最后的结果最后的结果). I _(对结果的感受对结果的感受)was so satisfied/ was excited/. got a high score in the final exam/ made progress in English/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 _(简单描述励志的简单描述励志
16、的经历经历). As a student, Ive learned a lot from his/her story. Liu Wei lost his left arm by accident but he didnt give up his dream of being a pianist/ She/ He failed many times to do the research, but she/ he didnt give up/. 他人经历对自己的影响他人经历对自己的影响一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语段练习语段练习2话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 We may mee
17、t a lot of difficulties in our life, but we should _(影响影响1). No matter how hard life is, _(影响影响2) believe that our dream will come true by working hard/ never lose confidence in ourselves/. we wont fail unless we give up our hope/ we should keep on going/. 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 I did
18、 it!How nervous I was when I was told to give a speech in front of my classs! It was my first speech and I didnt know what to do.My teacher encouraged me and gave me some useful advice. After I chose a topic I liked best, I watched videos about how to be a good speaker and I learnt a lot of skills.
19、Then I practiced and practiced. Finally, the big day came.I did it! Everyone loved my speech. I was so proud of myself.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 写作练兵写作练兵 人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，人生中有很多第一次做的事，如第一次游泳，第一次赢得比赛第一次赢得比赛你记忆最深的是什么呢？请根据以下要点你记忆最深的是什么呢？请根据以下要点和要求用英语写一篇短文。和要求用英语写一篇短文。1. 要点：要点：1)这件事
20、情是什么；这件事情是什么； 2)这件事情发生的过程；这件事情发生的过程； 3)你的感受。你的感受。2. 要求：要求：1)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称；文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称； 2)词数词数100左右。左右。2020 新变化新变化话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 _写作练兵As we all know, everyone has his unforgettable memories. I still remember the first time I climbed the mountain. Three years ago, all students in my class wer
21、e asked to climb a mountain. It was my first time to do things like this. I felt very excited at first. We set off at 8 am. in the morning and I supposed it might be an easy journey. However, as time went by, someone wanted to give up. 话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 _写作练兵The teacher encouraged us to reach the to
22、p of the mountain. Although in the end we were tired, we were really attracted by the scenery at the top and our feelings cant be expressed by words. From that time, I learned not to give up when facing difficulties. Only when I keep doing it and finish it can I have a sense of achievement. 话题话题11 经
23、历与感受经历与感受 当不定式当不定式(短语短语)、动名词、动名词(短语短语)或从句在某个句子中作宾或从句在某个句子中作宾语时，为保持句子结构平衡，避免句式结构的混乱，常用语时，为保持句子结构平衡，避免句式结构的混乱，常用it作作形式宾语，而将真正的宾语放在句尾，此时形式宾语，而将真正的宾语放在句尾，此时it仍只起先行引导仍只起先行引导作用，本身无词义。作用，本身无词义。巧 用it作形式主语和形式宾语话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 教材链接1. it作形式主语：作形式主语：We should learn English well. Its important. It is important
24、 for us to learn English well.2. it作形式宾语：作形式宾语：We must finish the task on time. We find it hard. We find it hard to finish the task on time.巧 用it作形式主语和形式宾语句式连接范例句式连接范例 话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 教材链接1. 我们做决定的时候到了。我们做决定的时候到了。_2. 这个问题太难以至于不能解决。这个问题太难以至于不能解决。_3. 我发现通过这种方式学习很容易。我发现通过这种方式学习很容易。_It is time for us
25、to make decisions.The question is too difficult to solve. 小试牛刀小试牛刀 I find it easy to learn in this way.巧 用it作形式主语和形式宾语话题话题11 经历与感受经历与感受 教材链接4. We should take action from now on. Its important.(用用it作形式作形式主语主语)_5. Is it necessary to wait in line? What do you think？(用用it作形式作形式宾语宾语)_Its important for us to take action from now on. Do you think it necessary to wait in line?巧 用it作形式主语和形式宾语
