1、1中考复习课中考复习课-写作写作Title ：My Favorite School Activity by Doreen WangMay 18th, 20172Step 4 Before writing- Examining the topicMy Favorite School Activity3Which is your favorite school activity?military training4Which is your favorite school activity?flee market5Which is your favorite school activity?bas
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3、d-inWhich Which one?one?12headOpeningIntroductionbodyBodyDetailstailEndingConclusionStep 2 Free talkHow can we write an article?13Step 3 articleSample AMy Favorite School Activity My favorite school activity is Graduation Night, or Grad Night for short. It is before graduation and usually held at a
4、park. It begins at 7:00 p.m. and ends at 2 a.m. of the next day. We have fun there.It is the end of my junior school and it is very meaningful. Grad Night is the last time that I will spend with my junior school friends. Grad night is my favorite event during my junior school life. Ill never forget
5、it.Presentation 1- Comparing two s Sample BMy Favorite School Activity My favorite school activity is Graduation Night, or Grad Night for short. It is one night of the weekend before graduation and is usually held at a park. Id like to share something interesting with you. One thing of the big event
6、 was that it took place from 7:00 p.m. to 2 a.m. of the next day. As teenagers, we had not many chances to have fun outside. However, this group activity provided us with the chance.There we let off fireworks, played instruments and also took photos. Another thing was that it stood for the end of ou
7、r junior school life. Throughout the difficult times before the finals, we felt relaxed. This made this final evening very enjoyable. Also, it was the last time for us to hang out as kids together. Grad night is my favorite event during junior school life. Ill never forget it because I understand th
8、e importance of friendship for the first time.headClear structure(结构)bodytail14My Favorite School Activity My favorite school activity is Graduation Night, or Grad Night for short. It is one night of the weekend before graduation and is usually held at a park. Id like to share something interesting
9、with you. One thing of the big event was that it took place from 7:00 p.m. to 2 a.m. of the next day. As teenagers, we had not many chances to have fun outside. However, this group activity provided us with the chance.There we let off fireworks, played instruments and also took photos. Another thing
10、 was that it stood for the end of our junior school life. Throughout the difficult times before the finals, we felt relaxed. This made this final evening very enjoyable. Also, it was the last time for us to hang out as kids together. Grad night is my favorite event during junior school life. Ill nev
11、er forget it because I understand the importance of friendship for the first time.What?When?headbodytailWhere?TransitionsWhy?How?What to do?Compound sentences15Step 3 Presentation 2- Good qualities of an article 1. clear structurehead(Para 1):What? Who? When? Where? body(Para 2):What to do? tail (Pa
12、ra 3): Feelings?2. more details3. proper transitionsSchool trip: get together, take photos, chat, play games, enjoy the beauty of spring, relax ourselvesWhat?How?Sports meeting: opening ceremony, take part in many games, take photos, in high spirit, cheer for, win/lose/fight/beat, try ones best to d
13、o, celebrate, teamwork, team spirit,New Years Party: decorate our classroom, get to school early, wear our own fashionable clothes, enjoy all kinds of shows, play guitar, excited, relaxed, happy, proud, confident, unforgettable, be crazy about, have fun,Basketball game: organize our class team, prac
14、tise, insist on, cheer for, work hard without rest, teamwork, team spirit, think of others,Art festival: look forward to, prepare for the dressing, be busy doing, give up rest time, feel excited and nervous, be surprised at, 4. Compound sentences复合句（复合句（1-21-2句即可）句即可）16Step 4 Before writing- Examini
15、ng the topic审题审题purpose:2. main contents:1.the c_ of the activity; 2.my a_ and f_ 3. 1st/ 2nd/ 3rd person? _4. tense: A. simple past tense; B. simple present tense 5. general idea of each paragraphPara 1-Para 2-Para 3-my favorite school activityI; weWrite down the _, _, _ of the activity and the _ w
16、ho took part in it.Describe the _ we did and the _ we had. (Pay attention to the _!)State(陈述陈述) the _ of the activity.describe_ourse内容内容 chievementeelingsdetailspeoplenamemeaningtimeplacethingsfeelings17Step 5 While writing- Forming your own articlesMy Favorite School Activity My junior school is co
17、ming to an end. I had a lot of sweet memories. Of them, Id like to share with you my favorite story about a/an _. _ _ I like _ best. It was so exciting/ touching/ amazing that_/ I would never forget it because_/ I really had a great time because_/ 结构清晰（开头，主体，结尾）结构清晰（开头，主体，结尾） 内容完整（过程，感受）内容完整（过程，感受）
18、时态正确时态正确 表达多样（简单句，复合句）表达多样（简单句，复合句） 过渡自然（过渡词过渡自然（过渡词/ /句）句） 字迹工整字迹工整 Head(Para 1):What? Who? When? Where? Body(Para 2):What to do? Tail (Para 3): Feelings?18Step 6 After writing- peer evaluatingPeer Evaluating List 互评表互评表标标 准准分 值被评估者被评估者三段结构完整三段结构完整5 5有活动内容和感受有活动内容和感受8 8时态正确时态正确3 3语法和单词拼写无误语法和单词拼写无误3 3出现过渡词句出现过渡词句3 3字迹工整字迹工整3 3总总 分分252519结束语当你尽了自己的最大努力时，失败也是伟大的，所以不要放弃，坚持就是正确的。When You Do Your Best, Failure Is Great, So DonT Give Up, Stick To The End20感谢聆听不足之处请大家批评指导Please Criticize And Guide The Shortcomings演讲人：XXXXXX 时 间：XX年XX月XX日
