1、新高考英语对话翻译练习班级 考号 姓名 总分 （第一组）1.“想试试吗?”我说，碰了碰玛丽娜的手。“好吧，”玛丽娜用她那尖利、不确定的声音说。_2.“你不用着急。慢慢来，”我温和地说。她的整个脸顿时变得明亮起来，肩膀也放松了。_3. Derek补充道：“我讨厌看到他生病，我知道需要做些什么才能让他恢复健康。”_4.她接着说，“我紧紧地拥抱着他们，感觉到自己内心突然有了一种力量”。_5. “从来没有人投诉过我，”感到受辱的那名医生宣称。_6.“诸位，这是一个钱的问题，”我郑重其事地说。_（第二组）1.他自豪地回答说：“我可以带我的家人去看马戏了。”_2.“我觉得你在抛弃我。”她痛苦地回答。_（第
2、三组）1.“你还是需要好好休息一下。”我建议道。_2.“他和斯坦夫人有个计划，”她解释说。_3.妈妈提醒我：“一切都会好起来的。”_4.“我们明年会回来的，”他承诺道。_5.“暂时不要采取行动，”他警告说，“太危险。”_（第四组）1.“他还活着，”Bettie坚持说。“但除非他把药列在单子上，否则他活不了多久。”_2.“我以为我们可以成为朋友，”他抱怨道。_3.“.但当这个可怜的男孩没有被选中时，我崩溃了，”他承认。_4.罗先生用红边的眼睛安慰他说：“我也会想你的。”_（第五组）1.“不，不，”我抽泣着说。泪水模糊了我的视线。“很好，真的，”我叫道，“拿去吧。”_2.我打开窗户大声向对面喊道：
3、“我知道我们以前见过面，但我不记得在哪里。”_3.车上的女人跳了出来，尖叫着，“你这个白痴！你为什么不看看你要去哪里？”_4.“起来把你的钱和珠宝给我！”那人喊道。_5.她叹了口气，“你打碎了我们的明花瓶。”_6.“你真漂亮，”我低声说，我的舌头勉强配合。_（第六组）1.他真诚地为他所做的事情道歉。_2.突然，妈妈尖叫道：“我的钱包哪里去了？”_3.老人躺在冰冷的地上，痛苦地呻吟着。_4.“晚安”妈妈在Mike的耳边轻声说，轻轻地离开了房间。_5.她扶起老人，耐心地安慰他。_6.他大口大口地喘着气，把这个令人激动的消息告诉了村民。_附：参考答案（第一组）1.“Want to try one o
4、n?” I said, touching Marinas hand. “OK,” Marina said in her sharp, unsure voice.2. “You dont have to rush. Just take your time,” I said in a gentle way. Her whole face instantly brightened and her shoulders relaxed.3. “I hated seeing him sick and knew something needed to be done to make him healthy
5、again.” Derek adds.4. She continued, “I hugged them tightly, feeling a sudden strength inside me.”5. “I had never received one single complaint against me,” claimed the humiliated doctor.6. “Its a question of money, folks,” I announced.（第二组）1.He proudly responded, “I can take my family to the circus
6、.”2. “I feel like youre abandoning me,” she responded bitterly.（第三组）1.“You still need a good rest,” I suggested.2. “He and Mrs Stein have a plan,” she explained.3. “Everything happens for the best,” Mom reminded me.4. “Well be back next year,” he promised.5. “Dont do anything yet,” he warned. “Too r
7、isky.”（第四组）1.“Hes alive,” Bettie insisted. “But he wont be much longer unless he has the medicines on that list.”2. “I thought we could be friends,” he complained.3. “. But when the poor boy didnt get picked, I broken down,” he admits.4. With red-rimmed eyes, Mr. Rowe comforted him, “I will miss you
8、, too.”（第五组）1. “No-o-o,” I sobbed. My vision was blurred by tears “Its fine, really,” I cried, “Take it.”2. I opened my window and shouted across. “I know weve met before, but I cant remember where.”3. The woman in the car jumped out, screaming, “You idiot! Why didnt you look where you were going?”4
9、. “Get up and give me your money and jewelry!” the man yelled.5. She sighed, “You broke our Ming vase.”6. “You are beautiful,” I whispered, my tongue barely cooperating.（第六组）1.He apologized sincerely for what he had done.2.Suddenly, Mom screamed “Wheres my purse?”3.The old man lay on the cold ground
10、, groaning painfully.4.“Good night” Mum whispered to Mikes ear, leaving the room quietly.5.She lifted up the old man, comforting him patiently.6.He gasped out the exciting news to the villagers.附：对话四大误区1.废话连篇，对情节发展和刻画人物性格没有帮助。“Hey, how are you?” “Im fine, how are you?”“How is the weather?” “Terrific
11、! Nice day for a walk, isnt it?”这样的对话在现实生活中很真实，但是小说毕竟是艺术加工，无助情节推动的，不能刻画人物性格的日常寒暄和偏离文章主线的对话绝对不用。2.追求花哨，过度使用对话标签“That is fantastic news,” he said happily.此句中完全没有必要加上一个happily来表达说的方式，因为句中的fantastic一词足以说明说话人了表情，过度强调会让读者的注意力集中在“说话的方式”而不是“说话的内容”。建议改为：“That is fantastic news！” he said/screamed/exclaimed.一个
12、感叹号和一个fantastic已经足以让读者想象当时的情景。适当的“艺术留白”也是需要的，这样会留给读者想象的空间。还有一种避免过度的dialogue tags的方法是运用“动作描写”，尤其是表情上动作来取而代之。如：Her eyes reflected the candlelight as she smiled at her son.“Everyone is unique. Just follow your heart and be yourself!”当她对儿子微笑时，她的眼睛反射着烛光。“每个人都是独一无二的。只要跟随你的心，做你自己！”3用词不当，错误使用对话标签I cant beli
13、eve it, Emma gasped. (gasp意思为“喘气”)Thats funny, Henry chuckled. (chuckled.意思为“轻笑”)评析：以上两句话也是在大量的学生习作中发现的。这里把动作描写和动作标签混淆了，试想谁能gasp（喘息）、chuckle（轻笑）出一句话？除非他或她有特异功能。纠正方法如下：I cant believe it, Emmasaid with a gasp.（对话标签Emma said+ with介词短语）Emma gasped.I cant believe it.（动作描写+句号）I cant believe it.Emma gasped
14、.（对话句+动作描写,注意对话句式句号）Thats funny!Henrychuckled.（感叹句结束+动作描写）Thats funny, Henrysaid, chuckling.（Question tag+分词做伴随状况）请特别关注以上对话的标点符号。4对话标签多此一举：对话对象十分明确，仍使用对话标签“I told you already,” I said, glaring.评析：此句貌似豪华，其实对话中的主语“I”已经清晰地说明了说话者，完全没有必要用对话标签“I said”来说明说话对象。纠正方法：加上一点动作描写就可以避免这种错误，并且提升语言的生动性。I glared at h
15、im.“I told you already.”对话优化技巧：让你的对话标签不平庸四个小技巧在对话标签中加入语气，嗓音，情感让你的描写更生动传神。第一种：加语气“I would love to,” said Emilyin a pleasant tone.“我很乐意这样做，”艾米丽用一种愉快的语气说。这里用到了“in a pleasant tone.”，即“用一种愉快的语气”，基本结构为：in a/an+形容词+tone如：in apleasant愉悦的/firm坚定的/rude粗鲁的/sad悲伤的tone也可以用in a tone of +名词的搭配如：in a tone ofsurpris
16、e用一种惊讶的语气in a tone of curiosity用一种好奇的语气in a tone of impatience用一种不耐烦的语气in a tone of command用一种命令的语气第二种：加嗓音“I didnt mean to,” she murmuredin a low voice.“我不是故意的，”她低声说。这里用到了“in a low voice”，即“小声地说道”或者“用一种.声音”，基本结构是：in a/an+形容词+voice如：in ahigh /low / sweet/loud/soft /weakvoice用一个高/低/甜/响亮/软/弱的声音第三种：加情感“
17、I.I. dont think Im right for the part,”I repliedwith embarrassment.“我.我.认为我不适合这个角色，”我尴尬地回答。这里用到了“with embarrassment”，即“（伴随着）难堪”，基本结构是：with +情感名词。如with excitement（伴随着）激动。加副词“我再也不会那样做了，”我回答。如何丰富这句话里的对话标签呢？“I will never do that again,” I answeredfirmly.加上了副词firmly（坚定地）这句话也可以这么写：可将副词提到句首。Firmly，I answered，“I will never do that again.”5
