1、【版本：人教册别：必修二】 Reading for Writing: Describe a place that you likeUnit 4 History and Traditions u通过检查点拨Reading部分的语言点、篇章结构以及语言特征，引导学生写descriptive passage framework. .uReading for Writing. . 根据阅读文本中词、块、句、篇章结构以及语言风格的学习，输出一篇实用的descriptive passage。Learning ObjectivescontentsLeading-inWritingReadingAssignm
2、entIIIILeading-inEnjoy a video about Hulunbuir Suppose youre required to contribute to the column Beautiful China SeriesHulunbuir , to advertise the city. Please write a descriptive passage.Naadam Festival“Northern Jade Land”bonfire partyReadingRead and Find Cultural notes, Vocabulary & Collocations
3、 (1) lrelands beautiful countryside has always _ its people and traditions. The country has _ of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside _ all, offering something for each of the senses. The peaceful landscape of the “Emerald Isle” and its many green counties is _, with its _ gr
4、een hills _ sheep and cattle. And down by the sea, the _of the ocean waves and _ of the seabirds _ the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, _ the sun on your skin, and breathe in the _of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song. had a great influence on
5、 a long historyexcites and inspires a true feast for the eyes rolling dotted with roarcriesmake upfeel sweet scent 对.产生 巨大 的影响 悠久的历史给人以激情和灵感一场真正的视觉盛宴起伏的点缀着咆哮声鸣叫奏响感受芬芳With all this beauty, _Ireland has _ strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of _ this, stop by a
6、village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer. _, _ a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew. If youre lucky, you might be able to _ some traditional music and dancing, too. And if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are _experience local culture and customs _.its not surprisi
7、ng thatexperiencingdevelopedBetter yetenjoyenjoymore than likely tofirst-handRead and Find Cultural notes, Vocabulary & Collocations (1)是不足为奇的造就体验更为美妙的是欣赏品尝非常有可能亲身地Cultural noteThe color “green” has long been associated with Ireland. The islands green countryside inspired the name, “the Emerald Isle
8、”, after the green precious stone. Emerald IsleRead and Think Structure (1) lrelands beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets._The peaceful landscape of the Emerald Isle” and its many gree
9、n _ And , _. On a quiet morning , _, and _while_Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all, offering somethingfor each of the senses. a true feast for the eyes, with its rolling green hillsdotted with sheep and cattle.waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.the roar of
10、 the ocean feel the sun on your skinsweet scent of fresh flowersbreathe in the birds greet the new day with their morning song. introductory sentencespatial ordersighting descriptionhearing descriptiontouching descriptionsmelling descriptionhearing descriptionRead and Think Structure (2)With all thi
11、s beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music, dancing, and dining. To have a chance of experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with _ Better yet, _. If youre lucky, you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. _. a g
12、lass of wine or a local beer. enjoy a delicioustraditional Irish Beef StewAnd if you introduce yourself to a friendly face, you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.tasting descriptionending sentenceRead and Think Language Features (1) lrelands _countryside has alw
13、ays had a great influence on its people and traditions. The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets. Its beautiful countryside _ all, offering something for each of the senses. The _ landscape of the _ and its many _ counties is a true feast for the eyes, with its _green hill
14、s dotted with sheep and cattle. And, down by the sea, the _of the ocean waves and _ of the seabirds make up the music of the coast. On a quiet morning in the mountains, feel the sun on your skin, and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds _the new day with their _. beautifulpeaceful
15、greenrollingexcites and inspires “Emerald Isle”roarcriesgreetmorning songadjetivesadjetivesadjectivesfeelings descriptionquotepersonificationRead and Think Language Features (2)With all this beauty, it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include _. To have a chance of
16、 experiencing this, stop by a village pub and relax with _. Better yet, enjoy a _ _. If _ lucky, _ might be able to enjoy some traditional music and dancing, too. And if _ introduce _ to a friendly face, _are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand. music, dancing, and di
17、ning a glass of wine or a local beer delicious traditionalIrish Beef Stewyoureyouyouyourselfyoudetails and examplesadjectivessecond person pronounWriting Suppose youre required to contribute to the column Beautiful China SeriesHulunbuir , to advertise the city. Please write a descriptive passage.Naa
18、dam Festival“Northern Jade Land”bonfire partyHow to write a descriptive passage?TitleIntroduction:Ending:Descriptionmake the reader eager to read (a striking image; something surprising; a quote or question） let the reader know that the passage ends; help the reader remember your writing transitions
19、(spatial order)details and examples (use sensory details and examples and peoples feelings) rhetorical device (personification; quote; metaphor; simile)use more adjectives (measurements; shape; color; pattern; origin; purpose;) second person pronoun (you) Useful expressions for sensory detailsa true
20、 feast for the eyes 一场真正的视觉盛宴一场真正的视觉盛宴rolling green hills 起伏的绿色山丘起伏的绿色山丘be dotted with 被被点缀着点缀着music of the coast 海岸交响乐海岸交响乐the roar of the ocean waves 海浪的咆哮声海浪的咆哮声the cries of the seabirds 海鸟的叫声海鸟的叫声feel the sun on your skin 感受阳光照在脸上的感觉感受阳光照在脸上的感觉breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers 闻鲜花香甜的气息
21、闻鲜花香甜的气息greet the new day with their morning song 用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天用清晨的歌声迎接新的一天enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew 品尝传统美食爱尔兰炖牛肉品尝传统美食爱尔兰炖牛肉enjoy traditional music and dancing 欣赏传统的音乐舞蹈欣赏传统的音乐舞蹈FeelingUseful Expressionssurprised (someones) jaw drops 某人惊掉下巴某人惊掉下巴 Eyes widened 目瞪口呆目瞪口呆 One can har
22、dly believe ones eyes to be taken by surpriseexcited being raring to go 迫不及待迫不及待 on the edge of ones seat cant wait to .disappointed let me down fail me I wish./If only. Useful expressions for emotionsFinish A Draft Northern Jade LandHulunbuir Grassland Situated in the northeast area of Inner Mongol
23、ia, Hulunbuir Grassland is rightly called the _. Hulunbuir gets its name from Hulun Lake and Buir Lake which run through this region. The _landscape is _ under the blue sky and white clouds, the grassland is like a _ carpet _Mongolian yurtas, colorful flowers, cattle and horses. “Northern Jade Land”
24、peacefula true feast for your eyessoft, greendotted withquoteadjectivesFinish A Draft Down by the winding streams, you can _. To experience local traditions, _ can participate in _to _ Mongolian style wresting as well as a _. _, to enjoy delicious traditional ethnic food, like _, fried rice surely i
25、s something you cant miss.listen to the singing of the birds and breathe in the sweet scent of and fresh grass and blossoming flowersfeel the sun on your skin, youNaadam Festivalenjoybonfire partyBetter yetroasted lamb leg, milk teapersonificationsecond person pronoundetails and examples Northern Ja
26、de LandHulunbuir Grassland Situated in the northeast area of Inner Mongolia, Hulunbuir Grassland is rightly called the “Northern Jade Land”. Hulunbuir gets its name from Hulun Lake and Buir Lake which run through this region. The peaceful landscape is a true feast for your eyes under the blue sky an
27、d white clouds, the grassland is like a soft, green carpet dotted with Mongolian yurtas, colorful flowers, cattle and horses. Sample Writing Down by the winding streams, you can feel the sun on your skin, listen to the singing of the birds and breathe in the sweet scent of and fresh grass and blosso
28、ming flowers. To experience local traditions, you can participate in Naadam Festival to enjoyMongolian style wresting as well as a bonfire party. Better yet, to enjoy delicious traditional ethnic food, like roasted lamb leg, milk tea, fried rice surely is something you cant miss.Sample Writing Assignment1. Recite the sample writing emotionally.2. Finish another descriptive writing on Page83, Activity4.
