1、读后续写2则：secret friend、Little duck HarrySecret friend阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。As a sixth grader, I began noticing how other kids were separating into groups. I wasnt sure where I belonged. I found it hard to fit in.Our teacher had assigned secret friends” for the coming week.
2、She wrote each kids name on a piece of paper and threw them into a glass; then we each closed our eyes and drew the name of a classmate who we were to secretly befriend and support over the next five school days. By the middle of the week, everyone, including me, had turned this assignment into a co
3、ntest to see whose secret friend could leave the best gift. We left cards, pens and even money. It seemed that everyone was getting cool presents from their friend except me.On the last morning of our assignment, I walked into my classroom and noticed there was a package. I opened the wrapping paper
4、 and inside was a box of powder(胭脂粉).The girls sitting near me laughed the gift I had received. To make matters worse, the powder had already been opened.I tried to forget about the embarrassing gift, but when I was in the bathroom during the break, the girls who had seen me open the powder started
5、speaking ill of my secret friend of giving it to me. I quickly joined in How terrible, I heard myself saying What could my friend be thinking by giving me such a stupid gift? My grandmother wouldnt even want it. The girls laughed at my remarks and rushed out of the bathroom. I stayed to wash my hand
6、s and let the water run through my fingers as I thought about what I had just said. It wasnt normal like me to say mean things like that about someone.Paragraph 1:Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth(厕所隔间)，tears streaming down her face. Paragraph 2:Along with my apologies, I ex
7、plained the reason. 续写内容解析从前文可知，老师发起了“秘密朋友”活动，学生们抽签决定自己的秘密朋友是谁，在接下来的时间里给自己的秘密朋友支持，并且赠送礼物。这个星期所有的学生都得到了很好的礼物，除了主人公。主人公收到的是一个脂粉盒，受到了身边女生的嘲笑。在卫生间里一个女生说主人公秘密朋友的坏话，主人公也跟着附和道，送的真是糟糕的礼物。但主人公随后因为自己说了自私的话感到些许内疚。根据第一段首句“Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth(厕所隔间)，tears streaming down her
8、face.”可知，主人公的秘密好友是Janet，她听到了刚刚的谈话，接下来应该写Janet的反应，情感描写：心情沮丧，甚至生气；语言描写：解释送脂粉盒的原因；动作描写。以及主人公的反应。根据第二段首句“Along with my apologies, I explained the reason.”可知，主人公对自己的行为感到后悔想要道歉，并且解释原因。第一段结尾，利用“道歉”这一线索做好衔接。第二段主人公解释之前说出刻薄话的原因：不希望被同学们孤立。Janet听到道歉之后的反应。两人和好，并且成为真正的朋友。主人公理解到友谊的真谛。同学好词好句1.Shesobbed with her hea
9、d drooping andher lips trembling.2.Hearing that, I froze in stunned silence(惊愕得哑口无声), my mouth hanging open.3.I wasthunderstruck(大吃一惊，震惊的) whenit dawned on me thatit was Janet who gave me the gift!A sense of guilt and regret flooded over me.4.It dawned on me thatJanet must be my secret friend.Regret
10、ful and ashamed,I stepped forward, wanting tomake an apology.5.Suddenly,it occurred to /struck me thatit was Janet that had sent the powder to me.6.Overwhelmed with guilt, I flushed deeply(我的脸涨得通红).7.Seeing her tears, a sense of regret rose in my heart.8.Iblamed myself thousands of times in my heart
11、,hopingthat I could find the best way toconvey my apology.9.With my tongue tied,I apologizedin a trembling voice.10.Gathering up all my courage, I stood up in front of her andapologized sincerely,“Janet, Im terribly sorry forwhat I had said before.”11.“So eager was I to fit in with other groups that
12、I let out words impulsively(冲动地).” (so-that句型的倒装句）12.Completely stunned and ashamed,I .13.Frozen to the spot, I felt the bloodrush to my face.14.Ashamed and uneasy（心神不安的，忧虑的）,Istole a glance/look atJanet. (偷偷地瞥/看了一眼)15.Tears of joy blurring my eyes, Iwhispered in her ear,“.”16.Cheeks burning with sh
13、ame, Imurmured under breath,“.”17.Blushing with shame, Istood as still as a statue.18.Istood rooted to the spot, with a wave of embarrassment ruling the bathroomand her sobs filling the whole room.19.Embarrassed and ashamed, I told herhonestlythat I felt it hard tofit in with other kids,who were sep
14、arating into groups, “I didnt mean to say those mean words; instead, I was worried to be laughed at.” Iwhispered with my head lowered,not daring to look into her eyes. I waitedanxiously,begging to be forgiven in my mind.20.dash out of the bathroom21.be frozen to the spot22.grab her hands23.look stra
15、ight into her eyes24.bow my head and apologize25.with a lump in my throat26.have a sense of belonging27.bite her lip tightly28.bury her face in her hands29.hold her in my arms30.tap her on the shoulder31.with sadness in her moist eyes32.Stammerwith uneasiness33.sob slightly with her shoulders quiver
16、ing参考范文Paragraph 1:Then I saw my classmate Janet come out of a bathroom booth(厕所隔间)，tears streaming down her face.Sheshouted at me with anger, “If you dont want my gift you can just leave it instead of laughing at it. This is the best powder from my mum!”Before I could say a word, Janetdashed out,le
17、aving me dumb with deep regret. But soon Iclenched my handsandmade up my mind tofind Janet andsay sorry toher. There she was,sitting in a tree shadow wiping her eyes.Paragraph 2:Along with my apologies. I explained the reason.I was not a mean girlby judging peoples presents.The reason whyI complaine
18、d in front of the girlswas thatI waned tofit in,having a sense of belonging in the group.(解释原因，衔接首句；fit in很好地跟前文呼应了)Hearing my sincere words,Janetcalmed herself down after constant sobsand said, “True friendship comes from genuine care and love for each other.I think thatsour teachers intention ofth
19、is secret friend assignment.” That day, I learned tocherish real friendship. （呼应前文老师的活动目的，揭示主题）读后续写：Little duck Harry01读后续写阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。写的词数应为150左右。Mymomwasalwayskindtounfortunateanimals. She opened her heart and our home to them. By the time I was thirteen, we already had ei
20、ght pets. Although we admired Mom for her generosity, there was one time when we all agreed Mom had carried her kindness too far. And it was about a duck.One afternoon, when walking in the woods near our house, Mom found a large white duck. Seeing that it was poor and alone, Mom was concerned and al
21、lowed it to follow her home.Before long, the duck, whom we named Harry, loved Mom. However, he disliked the rest of us. Though we tried to get along with him, it was pointless. Harry considered us threats and would often chase and bite us and our guests.One afternoon，my dad was particularly unhappy
22、with him after Harry kept interrupting his gardening work. Dad was so angry that he turned an empty bucket on top of Harry. When Mom found it，she cried to my dad，“How could you?”“Weve got to do something about the duck, Dad said seriously.“Hes a trouble-maker.”“But he has found a home here,Mom argue
23、d.After a few days, Harry made a big mistake. One afternoon, he chased a guest and had him injured. The next morning, my dad drove Harry to a large pond several miles away from our house and dropped him off. He told Mom that Harry needed a wild home. He said to Mom, That pond has many geese，and thes
24、e geese will accept Harry, so Harry will be happy there.Hearing that，Mom reluctantly(不情愿地) agreed.Soon, our house returned to normal. Then one day, Mom decided to take us to visit Harry. On the far side of the pond, upon a muddy area, we spotted Harry. Clearly, he and these geese werent the same spe
25、cies. He was thin, dirty and messy, standing far from the geese.Paragraph 1: Mom rushed towards Harry immediately.Paragraph 2: My mom finally found a pond with many ducks.思路分析从文中可知，妈妈非常善良，喜欢小动物，收养了一只小鸭子。这只小鸭子只喜欢妈妈，不喜欢其他家庭成员，总是惹是生非。有一天这只小鸭子，彻底惹怒了爸爸，爸爸把小鸭子送到了一个满是鹅的池塘。妈妈很想念这只小鸭子，带着全家去看它，结果看到小鸭子可怜兮兮的。从第
26、一段给出的首句“Mom rushed towards Harry immediately.”可知，妈妈看到小鸭子的现状，非常心疼，接下来写妈妈的反应，语言描写，动作描写，家人们的反应，想出的解决方案。从第二段给出的首句“My mom finally found a pond with many ducks.”可知，最终找到了适合小鸭子居住的野外池塘。第一段最后一句，做好衔接，交代家人们在寻找适合小鸭子生活的环境。第二段写小鸭子到了新环境之后的反应，是否适应新环境。家人们的反应，心情。文章体现人与自然和谐相处。03范文Paragraph 1:Mom rushed towards Harry im
27、mediately. After theirreunion, Mom checked Harry over. Oh, you poor thing! You must have suffered a lot! she said sadly. Even geese dislike him. They kick him out, my sistersighed. Then Mom declared Harry would go back home with us. For the next few days, Harrywas on his best behavior, but he seemed
28、 unhappy. Maybe he missed the free life in the wild. Even Mom could see we had to do something.Paragraph 2:My mom finally found a pond with many ducks. We drove Harry to the new pond. Mom carried him to the area where other ducks were swimming around, and she put Harry into the water carefully. Right away立刻,Harry began chatting and making friends.How easily the other ducks accepted him!Seeing that,we left him there. Later, each time we visited Harry, the duck seemed tobe in good spirits. To everyones relief,he finally found his wild home.
