1、高一人教版英语必修三第二单元 Morals and virtues Lesson 5 Reading for writing -How to write a review of a fableWhat is a fable?A traditional short story that teaches a moral lesson.Learning objectivesAfter this lesson,you will be able to 1.obtain and sort out the facts and details of a fable story;2.analyze the wr
2、iting purpose of the author;3.write a review of the fable and share your opinions about a moral story.Who is the lady?Dr.Lin Qiaozhi,a great person with noble morals and virtues.图片来自网络图片来自网络图片来自网络图片来自网络图片来自网络 Learn a lesson of morals and virtues from people in realityLearn a lesson of morals and vir
3、tues from books图片来自网络图片来自网络Analysis of the target text Questions1、How many parts will you divide the whole passage into?2、how do we divide it?3、Can you tell the main idea of each part?Answer the QuestionHow many parts will you divide the whole passage into?Three parts.Answer the Questionshow do we d
4、ivide it?Can you tell the main idea of each part?Different peoples emotions and responses when they came across the same problem.Part 1Why the king decided to teach his people a lesson and what his idea was.Part 3What lesson the king taught his people.Part 2Can you identify the main idea of the text
5、?The main idea of the storyA king taught his people a lesson by placing a stone in the road and watching different peoples emotions and responses when they came across the stone.In the end,only a girl got the gold coins hidden under the stone.THE STONE IN THE ROAD1.Why did the king decide to teach a
6、 lesson to his people?Part 1(paragraphs 1-2)Important details2.What was the kings idea for teaching an important lesson to his people?Because he thought that the people in his nation only complained and expected others to solve the problems they came across.He placed a large stone in the road and hi
7、d gold coins under the stone.Then he hid and watched.Part 2(paragraphs 3-7)personExperience Emotion Response Milkman Woman with waterOther villagers Young girlCrashed into the stoneTripped over the stoneAngry Went awaySad limped awayUnhappyComplained and not moved the stoneSaw the stoneWorried/conce
8、rned Moved the stone with all her mightWhat kind of a person is the young girl?Walked round to avoid the stoneresponsible;considerate;selfless By comparisonPart 3:(paragraphs 8-9)1.What did the young girl think and do when she saw the coins?2.What would happen to the girl?3.What lesson did the king
9、teach his people?Answer the QuestionsA person who is responsible and considerate will deserve help or success.Otherwise,one will miss the chance to get help or succeed.1.What did the young girl think and do when she saw the gold coins?2.What would happen to the girl?3.What lesson did the king teach
10、his people?The girl thought the owner of the gold coins must be worried about missing them and she wanted to find the owner.The king would praise the girl for her kindness and gave her the gold coins as a reward.The purpose(a moral lesson)Your opinionDo you like the story?Why?Because it delivers a t
11、ruth to readers that people who would like to help others would be helped by the others and have a good result in their life.The main idea of the storyA king taught his people a lesson by placing a stone in the road and watching different peoples emotions and responses when they came across the ston
12、e.THE STONE IN THE ROADDifferent peoples emotions and responses A moral lesson Milkman crashed into the stone and went away angrily.Woman with water tripped over the stone and limped away in tears.Other villagers avoided the stone but didnt move it.Young girl pushed the stone with all her might and
13、succeeded in moving it.A person who is responsible and considerate will deserve help or success.Otherwise,one will miss the chance to get help or succeed.support Mind-map of the readingWriting Practice A review of the fable storyThe main purpose of a review is to give your opinion upon a piece of wr
14、iting.You should first give a short description of the writing,and then clearly state your opinion and your reasons.1.确定题材：确定题材：A review2.确定人称：确定人称：Mainly the first and third person3.确定时态：确定时态：mainly the present tense,and youre expected to use the V-ing form as the adverbial or object complement一：审题
15、目一：审题目The structure of a review Part 1/Paragraph 1:(Beginning)Brief information of the story Part 2/Paragraph 2:(Body)Your analysis of the story Part 3/Paragraph 3:(Close)Your opinion upon the story Title of the review (A review of)l In my opinion/as far as Im concerned/in my view/as for me I like t
16、he story becausel In a word/all in all/in brief,this fable is well worth reading/this fable is very instructive/this fable is a must-read for sb.l I strongly recommend this fable to sb.Write a review of the fablePart 1:(Beginning)Brief information of the storyPart 2:(Body)Your analysis of the storyP
17、art 3:(Close)Your opinion upon the storyuWhats the title of the story?uWhat kind of story is it?uWhats the main idea of the story?uWhats the authors purpose?uDo you think the purpose is achieved?uWere the details clear to achieve the purpose?uWhat do you like about the story?uWhat do you not like ab
18、out the story?uWould you recommend the story to others?l Recently I have read a fable namedl The main idea of the story is thatl It tells a story concerned withl The fable intends to tell/is meant to tell/is aimed at tellingl The authors purpose is to(do)sth/The author wrote the story with the purpo
19、se of(doing)二：二：拟要点拟要点Expressions Do remember the following demands:1、Write your review in about 120 words;2、Clearly state your own opinion;3、Your opinion must be reasonable and believable;4、Dont copy the original sentences.Checklist*Do you give a short description of the story?*Does the description
20、 include the most important details of the story?*Do you give your opinion upon the characters or their actions?*Is the review well-organized?*Do you use the Ving form as the adverbial correctly?*Are there any grammar,spelling,or punctuation（标（标点符号）点符号）errors?a fable storyThe stone in the road What
21、the story is about(The structure of the story)A moral lessonA person who is responsible and considerate will deserve help or success.Otherwise,one will miss the chance to get help or succeed.Write a review The structure(Beginning-Body-Close)suitable expressionsSummary Homework:Polish your review and
22、 hand it in.Thank you for your listening!高一人教版英语第二单元Morals and virtuesLesson 5 Reading for Writing答疑课 姚炯光（广州市第六中学）Whats up?Write a review of the fable storyDo remember the following demands:1、Write your review in about 120 words;2、Clearly state your own opinion;3、Your opinion must be reasonable and
23、believable.4、Dont copy the original sentences.Analysis of the target textWrite a review of the fable storyHomework assignment How to write a good review of a fable story?A comparison of two writings A review of The stone in the road The stone in the road is an old fable story,about a king who thinks
24、 his people are lazy.So he puts a large stone in the middle of the road and hides,waiting to see if anyone will try to move it.The author used this story to impress upon readers the need to take personal responsibility for problems in the community.The story was quite successful in achieving its pur
25、pose.And I like it because it delivered a clear moral.However,while the moral of the story is clear,the actions of the king seemed pointless to me,because none of the characters in the story learned anything.For this reason,I think there are better stories that can be used to have people thinking of
26、 the need for personal responsibility.Checklist*Does the writer give a short description of the story?*Does the description include the most important details of the story?*Does the writer give his/her opinion upon the characters or their actions?*Is the review well-organized?*Does the writer use th
27、e Ving form as the adverbial correctly?*Are there any grammar,spelling,or punctuation（标点符号）（标点符号）errors?ReminderAnalysis of a students writingChecklist*Does the writer give a short description of the story?*Does the description include the most important details of the story?The writer quoted too ma
28、ny original details.Checklist*Does the writer give his/her opinion upon the characters or their actions?Yes,but not in a proper or clear way.Checklist*Is the review well-organized?No,the Body part is missing.There is no analysis of the story.Checklist*Does the writer use the Ving form as the adverbi
29、al correctly?No,he/she didnt use any V-ing form.Checklist*Are there any grammar,spelling,or punctuation（标点符号）（标点符号）errors?Yes,there are a few errors in the writing.disappointment A review of The stone in the road The stone in the road is an old fable story,about a king who thinks his people are lazy
30、.So he puts a large stone in the middle of the road and hides,waiting to see if anyone will try to move it.The author used this story to impress upon readers the need to take personal responsibility for problems in the community.The story was quite successful in achieving its purpose.And I like it b
31、ecause it delivered a clear moral.However,while the moral of the story is clear,the actions of the king seemed pointless to me,because none of the characters in the story learned anything.For this reason,I think there are better stories that can be used to have people thinking of the need for person
32、al responsibility.Analysis of a sample writing Title of the review (A review of)Part 1/Paragraph 1:(Beginning)Brief information of the story Part 2/Paragraph 2:(Body)Analysis of the story Part 3/Paragraph 3:(Close)Opinion upon the storyStructureAnalysis of a sample writingExpressionsThe stone in the
33、 road is an old fable story,about a king who thinks his people are lazy.So he puts a large stone in the middle of the road and hides,waiting to see if anyone will try to move it.The author used this story to impress upon readers the need to take personal responsibility for problems in the community.
34、The story was quite successful in achieving its purpose.And I like it because it delivered a clear moral.However,while the moral of the story is clear,the actions of the king seemed pointless to me because none of the characters in the story learned anything.For this reason.I think there are better
35、stories that can be used to have people thinking of the need for personal responsibility.Use suitable words,expressions and sentences to describe the story briefly.Analyze the purpose of the story and its success.Give the writers own judgment on the story.The stone in the road is an old fablestory,a
36、bout a king who thinks his people are lazy.So he puts a large stone in the middle of the road and hides,waiting to see if anyone will try to move it.The author used this story to impress upon readers the need to take personal responsibility for problems in the community.The story was quite successfu
37、l in achieving its purpose.And I like it because it delivered a clear moral.However,while the moral of the story is clear,the actions of the king seemed pointless to me because none of the characters in the story learned anything.For this reason.I think there are better stories that can be used to h
38、ave people thinking of the need for personal responsibility.(Beginning)a short description of the story including the most important details(Body)analyze the writing purpose of the author/give your opinion upon the characters or their actions(Close)share your opinions upon the storyuse the Ving form as the adverbialuse the Ving form as the object complementuse the Ving form as the objectAnalysis of a sample writingV-ing formsBack homeCompare your own writing with the sample article,try to make necessary corrections in your passage to access to a better work.Looking forward to your works!
