1、Describe a place I likeDescribe a place I likethe sound of waves;the sound of waves;green hills and grass green hills and grass landlandA Poet A Poet traditional music and dancing(tap dance)Guess:whats the place I like?IrelandLearning Objectives通过学习爱尔兰的概况，我能初步了通过学习爱尔兰的概况，我能初步了解地点类描写的结构、内容。解地点类描写的结构、
2、内容。通过小组合作研读感官描写语句，我通过小组合作研读感官描写语句，我能尝试仿写类似的句子。能尝试仿写类似的句子。通过搭建地点类描写的框架，我通过搭建地点类描写的框架，我能完成地点类描写的写作。能完成地点类描写的写作。4 4Irelands beautiful countryside has always had a great influence on its people and traditions.The country has a long history of producing great writers and poets.Its beautiful countryside e
3、xcites and inspires all,offering something for each of the senses.The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.And down by the sea,the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds ma
4、ke up the music of the coast.On a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.With all this beauty,it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music,d
5、ancing,and dining.To have a chance of experiencing this,stop by a village pub and relax with a glass of wine or a local beer.Better yet,enjoy a delicious traditional Irish Beef Stew.If you are lucky,you might be able to enjoy some traditional music and the dancing,too.And if you introduce yourself t
6、o a friendly face,you are more than likely to experience local culture and customs first-hand.Its beautiful countryside excites and inspires all,offering something for each of the senses.The peaceful landscape of the“Emerald Isle”and its many green counties Beautiful Ireland and Its TraditionsWhats
7、the connection?andThe country has a long history of producing great writers and poets.flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songWith all this beauty,it is not surprising that Ireland has developed strong traditions that include music,dancing,and dining.have a chance of experiencin
8、g this,stop by a villagetransitional sentenceIts TraditionsBeautiful Ireland【】【】What can you get for five senses?In which place?5 5down by the seain the mountainsa village pub green countiesa true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlethe roar of the ocean waves
9、 and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coastfeel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songrelax with a glass of wine or a local beer;enjoy traditional Irish Beef Stew,music and dancingWhich description impr
10、ess you most?Why？placemetaphor（暗喻）（暗喻）;specific wordsmetaphor&personification（拟人）（拟人）personification;specific wordsspecific examplesa true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattlesightthe roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the c
11、oastfeel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning songrelax with a glass of wine or a local beer;enjoy traditional Irish Beef Stew,music and dancingtouch&smellhearingTaste&hearingGroup WorkImmitate(仿写仿写)the sensory descript
12、ions.sightThe peaceful landscape of the Emerald Isle and its many green counties is a true feast for the eyes,with its rolling green hills dotted with sheep and cattle.Imitate:早上，山上平静的景色是一场视觉盛宴，层层的绿叶上点缀着亮光闪闪的黄色的橙子。In the morning,the peaceful landscape of the hills is a true feast for eyes,with layer
13、s of green leaves dotted with shiny yellow oranges.Group WorkImmitate(仿写仿写)the sensory descriptions.And down by the sea,the roar of the ocean waves and cries of the seabirds make up the music of the coast.Imitate:午后，山下，鸡鸣(cluck)和狗吠(bark)声组成了乡下的音乐。In the afternoon,down by the hills,the clucks of chic
14、kens and barks of dogs,make up the music of countryside.hearingGroup WorkImitate(仿写仿写)the sensory descriptions.On a quiet morning in the mountains,feel the sun on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of fresh flowers while birds greet the new day with their morning song.Imitate:静谧的夜晚的院子里，感受到凉风吹过
15、皮肤，呼吸进花的香气，树的叶子像是在用哗哗声(rustle)打招呼。On a quiet evening in the yard,feel the cool wind blowing on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of flower while the leaves of tree wave good evening with the sound of rustle.touch smellGroup WorkImmitate(仿写仿写)the sensory descriptions.Better yet,enjoy a delicio
16、us traditional Irish Beef Stew.Imitate:如果你足够幸运，你会很有可能享受到美味的地道(local)新疆菜。If you are lucky enough,you are more than likely to enjoy delicious local xinjiang dishes.taste1010East or West,Home is the best.Our Hometown-karamay or other places you likeOur Hometown-karamay or other places you like How to m
17、ake the description more detailed and vivid?11 11karamay karamay is a beautiful and slow-pace city.generalgeneraladd sensory(感觉的）感觉的）detailsuse specific（具体的）（具体的）wordsuse figure of speech(修辞修辞)add specific examplesdetailed How to organize the description?time order or spatial（空间的）（空间的）ordertransitio
18、nal（过渡）（过渡）sentence and wordsintroductionbody1 transitions.2 details and examples.endingMy home town inMy home town in _131.1.Is the writing well-organized and what order do you or your Is the writing well-organized and what order do you or your groupmembers use?groupmembers use?2.Is the description
19、 detailed and vivid?2.Is the description detailed and vivid?What words or sentences impress you most and why?What words or sentences impress you most and why?3.Can you find any grammar mistakes?3.Can you find any grammar mistakes?Writing and Sharing14My hometown in Autumn My hometown,located in nort
20、hwest in xinjiang,is a beautiful and slow-pace city.The beautiful and peaceful landscape offers something for different senses.In the morning,the peaceful landscape of the hills is a true feast for eyes,with layers of green leaves dotted with shiny red apples.In the afternoon,down by the hills,the c
21、lucks of chickens and barks of dogs,make up the music of countryside.On a quiet evening in the yard,feel the cool wind blowing on your skin,and breathe in the sweet scent of flower while the leaves of tree wave good evening with the sound of rustle.If you are lucky enough,you are more than likely to enjoy delicious local xinjiang dishes.Welcome to my hometown where you may experience local culture and customs first-hand.1515Slow down,take a deep breath and find the beauty around you!Thank You!
