1、命题探索命题探索三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵话题思维导图话题思维导图话题思维导图话题思维导图命题探索 分析福建近分析福建近7年中考书面表达年中考书面表达可知,考查角度为:发表对新科技可知,考查角度为:发表对新科技的看法,如:的看法,如:2019福建为给笔友回信,谈论对机器人的看法及机福建为给笔友回信,谈论对机器人的看法及机器人将在生活中的作用。分析全国近年中考真题可知,此话题也器人将在生活中的作用。分析全国近年中考真题可知,此话题也会从以上角度考查。会从以上角度考查。典例剖析典例剖析 (2019福建福建)假定你是李华,收到英国笔友假定你是李华,收到英国笔友Harry 的邮件,获的邮件,
2、获悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请悉他在机器人制作比赛中获奖。请根据邮件内容给他回复根据邮件内容给他回复。词。词数数80左右。左右。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章审审文体:应用文文体:应用文一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章参考词汇:参考词汇:congratulation 祝贺祝贺注意事项:注意事项:1.回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数;回复邮件时可适当发挥,邮件格式已给出,不计入总词数;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。一阶 审好题
3、二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章Dear Harry,_Yours,Li Hua一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1角度角度介绍新事物介绍新事物好句范例好句范例1.There will be fewer jobs for people because more robots will do the same as people.2.They help with the housework and do jobs like working in dirty or dangerous places.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3.If buildings fall down with
4、 people inside,these snake robots can help look for people under the buildings.4.Keep reading,and youll open your eyes and make yourselves clever and happy.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 1.App会帮助我们提高词汇量因为它包含英语新闻、电影、歌曲、会帮助我们提高词汇量因为它包含英语新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等。游戏等。_2.机器人可以帮爷爷奶奶做家务,如:烹饪、打扫房间等等。机器人可以帮爷爷奶奶做家务,如:烹饪
5、、打扫房间等等。_There is an app that can help us increase our English vocabulary because it covers English news,movies,songs,games and so on.The robot can help my grandparents do some housework like cooking,cleaning the house and so on.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3.如果有一个视频引导我们如何使用这个新机器,我们可以更快如果有一个视频引导我们如何使用这个新机器,我
6、们可以更快地学习它。地学习它。_If there is a video that can tell us how to use this new machine,we can learn it more quickly.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章2角度角度发表对新科技的看法发表对新科技的看法好句范例好句范例5.We never know what will happen in the future!6.He wishes that in the future China will also get better at making hightechnology products
7、that people can buy in all parts of the world.7.Think about how often its used in our daily lives.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 4.我们永远不知道新科技会带来什么样的变化!我们永远不知道新科技会带来什么样的变化!_5.他希望在未来机器人可以像真人一样。他希望在未来机器人可以像真人一样。_6.想象一下,没有知识,我们不可能成功做成任何工作。想象一下,没有知识,我们不可能成功做成任何工作。_We never know what changes will be brou
8、ght by the new technology!He wishes that the robots in the future will be like real men.Think about that we couldnt succeed in any work without knowledge.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章练语段练语段语语 段段 练练 习习 1介绍新事物介绍新事物 As the Internet is developing fast,more and more new words and phrases have been created in Chin
9、ese.One of the most popular words is Dianzan,_(具体说明具体说明1).Another example is Renxing.When you say somebody is Renxing,you mean that _(具体说明具体说明2).which is often used when you quite agree with someone or you are fond of somethingthey do whatever they like一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Miaosha means achieving you
10、r purpose quickly,which _(补充说明补充说明).If you describe somebody as a Tuhao,you mean that _(具体说明具体说明3).has been used beyond online shopping he is very wealthy/rich一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 2发表对新科技的看法发表对新科技的看法 Nowadays,students often use phones to chat with others,watch movies,p
11、lay games,listen to music or _(做法举例做法举例)and so on.In fact,they will _(结果结果1).However,it does harm to their study.Because they spend too much time playing with phones,they _(结果结果2).They dont have time to do their homework and they _(结果结果3)take photosbe nervous without phonescant have a good restcant
12、get good grades一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章(针对(针对“典例剖析典例剖析”的优秀范文)的优秀范文)Dear Harry,Congratulations!How glad I am to share your good news!I think robots are helpful in many ways.And in the future theyll play more important roles in our daily life.Thus,Im dying to have a robot of my own.I can have it tak
13、e care of my grandparents when we are not at home.You see,my grandparents are old and can not move easily.It can 一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句help them do some housework,such as cooking,cleaning the house and so on.Hoping youll make greater progress.Yours,Li Hua写作练兵写作练兵 (2019宿迁改编宿迁改编)某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学某软件公
14、司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的习英语的app,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。向该公司介绍你的构想。写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵写作练兵注意事项:注意事项:1.必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,必须包含所提示的信息,可适当发挥,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;不计入总词数;2.意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;意思清楚,表达通顺,行文连贯,书写规范;3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。写作练兵写作练兵 Here is
15、the design for the app._ My app is named Happy English Learning for our students.Itll cover English news,movies,songs,games and so on.We can go online to do more reading to improve our English with our classmates.Im sure itll help us increase our English vocabulary.When were listening to English news and watching English movies,our listening skills will become better.When Im tired,Im going to 写作练兵写作练兵 _ I hope my ideas will be valuable to your company.listen to some English songs to relax myself.I think this app will be suitable for the students of different ages.