1、命题探索命题探索三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵话题思维导图话题思维导图话题思维导图话题思维导图命题探索福建近福建近7年中考书面表达跟年中考书面表达跟“情感与情绪；人际交往情感与情绪；人际交往”相关的话题相关的话题共考查过共考查过5次，考查角度为：次，考查角度为：1.与人交往中的良好品德。与人交往中的良好品德。如：如：2016福州福州“诚信诚信”教育演讲比赛；教育演讲比赛；2015漳州介绍如何分享及其意义；漳州介绍如何分享及其意义；2016三明三明“Be grateful to _”征文活动。征文活动。2.日常生活经历与感受日常生活经历与感受”。如：如：2014泉州介绍家庭生活：帮忙做泉州
2、介绍家庭生活：帮忙做家务，自己的经历及感受；家务，自己的经历及感受；2013厦门介绍活动经历及感受。厦门介绍活动经历及感受。分析全国近年真题可知，此话题通常还可以从以下角度进行命题：分析全国近年真题可知，此话题通常还可以从以下角度进行命题：对他人人际沟通中存在的问题给出建议对他人人际沟通中存在的问题给出建议；如何与他人和谐相处如何与他人和谐相处。典例剖析典例剖析(2016福州福州)你的学校正在开展你的学校正在开展“诚信诚信”教育，英语俱乐部教育，英语俱乐部为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛。请根据下表所提示为配合这次活动将举行一次演讲比赛。请根据下表所提示的要点，的要点，写一篇演讲稿写一篇演讲稿
3、。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章审审文体：应用文文体：应用文一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章要求：要求：1短文应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；短文应包括表格中的所有内容，可适当发挥；2词数词数90左右，不包含已给出句子的词数；左右，不包含已给出句子的词数；3演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。演讲稿中不得出现你的真实姓名和校名。参考词汇：参考词汇：cheat in the exam;fall behind(落后落后)一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章 Hello,everyone!Its a great honor to give a speech here._ T
4、hats all.Thank you for listening!一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章1角度角度与人交往中的良好品德与人交往中的良好品德好句范例好句范例1.Its very important to learn to share with each other.2.I have made great progress in English with her help.3.I want to be grateful to my English teacher.4.She always encourages me to speak English loudly.一阶 审好题二阶
5、写好句三阶练语段&成篇章5.Personally speaking,I strongly believe that honesty is the most important quality.6.Therefore,it is a must that we should pay more attention to our words and behaviors.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 1.独立自主做作业很重要。独立自主做作业很重要。_2.在英语老师的帮助下，我变得更加自信。在英语老师的帮助下，我变得更加自信。_3.我想尽我最大的努力去履行诺言。我想尽我最
6、大的努力去履行诺言。_Its important to do homework by ourselves.I became more selfconfident with my English teachers help.I want to try my best to keep the promise.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章4.她经常鼓励我们做诚实的学生，并且讲真话。她经常鼓励我们做诚实的学生，并且讲真话。_She often encourages us to be honest students and tell the truth.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇
7、章2角度角度经历经历好句范例好句范例7.Mickey was like a common man,but he always tried to face any danger.8.Although Peter lost the game,he still went on soccer practice with courage rather than fear in his heart the next day.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章9.My father told me a story on my way home and he helped me to plan my t
8、ime properly.10.She encouraged me to be kind to others and learn to communicate with others.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 5.虽然生活很艰难，但我们不会失败，除非我们放弃希望。虽然生活很艰难，但我们不会失败，除非我们放弃希望。_6.他发现他仍然什么都听不见，但他没有失去信心。他发现他仍然什么都听不见，但他没有失去信心。_Although life is hard,we wont fail unless we give up our hope.He found he st
9、ill couldnt hear anything,but he didnt lose heart.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章7.在回家的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包。在回家的路上，我发现地上有一个钱包。_8.我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动。我的老师鼓励我积极参加课外活动。_On my way home,I found a wallet on the ground.My teacher encouraged me to take an active part in afterclass activities.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章3角度角度感受感受句子扩写范例句子
10、扩写范例 11.I have moved to a new school this term.I have moved to a new school this term.I do not know the school very well and I have no friends here.I feel unhappy these days.12.I could hardly think clearly after that terrible earthquake.I was so scared that I could hardly think clearly after that te
11、rrible earthquake.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章13.I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.I often feel stressed because I have no idea on how to remember new words quickly.14.I won the first prize in the reading competition.I won the first prize in the reading competition.I was really happy that
12、day.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 扩扩 写写 9.I got a better result in the monthly exam.(扩写感受扩写感受)_10.He didnt know what to say.(扩写感受扩写感受)_I got a better result in the monthly exam.How excited I was!He was so nervous because he didnt know what to say.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章11.I dont want to speak in front of s
13、o many people.(扩写感受扩写感受)_12.They said there were no tickets left.(扩写感受扩写感受)_I feel so worried and afraid because I dont want to speak in front of so many people.They said there were no tickets left.I was unhappy that day.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章好句范例好句范例15.His story taught me not to give up my dream.16.F
14、rom his experience,I realized that helping others could make the world more beautiful.17.His words touched my heart and I would remember them forever.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章句句 子子 仿仿 写写 13.这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。这次经历教会我不要小瞧别人。_14.从他的经历中，我意识到了微笑在日常生活中的重要性。从他的经历中，我意识到了微笑在日常生活中的重要性。_15.他温暖的话给了我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持。他温暖的
15、话给了我勇气和自信，我会永远记住他的支持。_This experience taught me not to look down upon others.From his experience,I realized the importance of smiling in daily life.His warm words gave me courage and confidence and I would remember his support forever.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段语语 段段 练练 习习 1与人交往中的
16、良好品德与人交往中的良好品德 Its very important to learn to share with each other.I have many things to share in different ways.For example,I _(具体表现具体表现1)Now,Id like to share one of can share some beautiful pictures,favorite music,different ideas with others face to face or by QQ and email which are widely used一阶
17、 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句my unforgettable experiences with you.Emily was lonely and unhappy,and I hoped to cheer her up.So I _(具体表现具体表现2).As time went by,she _(最后的变最后的变化化).Now were good friends.shared my favorite books and chatted with her after classbecame used to sharing her feelings with me一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成
18、篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 2自己的经历及感受自己的经历及感受 Last year,I met a difficult situation.I _(棘手的事棘手的事情情).I didnt know what I should do at first.And I felt _(对事情的感受对事情的感受)Then I _(应对的办法应对的办法).Finally,I failed in the exam/couldnt understand what the teacher said in class/.disappointed/stressed/.asked the teacher fo
19、r help/reviewed the lessons carefully/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句Finally,I _(最后的结果最后的结果).I _(对对结果的感受结果的感受)got a high score in the final exam/made progress in English/.was so satisfied/was excited/.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章（针对（针对“典例剖析典例剖析”的优秀范文）的优秀范文）Hello,everyone!Its a great honor to give a speech here.
20、Id like to tell you something about my friend Li Lei.He likes playing football and he also likes computer games.To get good grades,he often cheats in the exams.As a result,he gradually falls behind other students.Whats more,he isnt trusted by others.一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 So I think we should be hones
21、t in the exam.And its important to do homework by ourselves.We ought to tell the truth and be honest students.If we promise to do something,wed better try our best to keep the promise.Thats all.Thank you for listening!写作练兵写作练兵假如你是李华，某英文杂志正在举办以假如你是李华，某英文杂志正在举办以“如何与同学友好相处？如何与同学友好相处？”为主题的征文活动。请你根据所给提示和
22、要求，写一篇英语短文投为主题的征文活动。请你根据所给提示和要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。词数稿。词数80左右。左右。内容要点：内容要点：1.与同学分享观点；与同学分享观点；2.一起做活动；一起做活动；3.乐于帮助同学。乐于帮助同学。写作练兵写作练兵注意事项：注意事项：1.必须包含所有内容要点，开头已给出，不计入总必须包含所有内容要点，开头已给出，不计入总词数；词数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及地名。写作练兵写作练兵 As we all know,our school i
23、s the other place we students live in except for our homes._ We live with our teachers and schoolmates,especially classmates there.There are some suggestions about how to get along well with our classmates.Firstly,it is necessary to share our ideas with our classmates.In other words,we should communicate with them in a proper time.Besides,we should always do something together,such as taking part in some clubs,写作练兵写作练兵_doing some group work or doing some exercise together.Last but not least,helping our classmates when they are in trouble is also a good way to improve our relationship.
