1、Reading for Writing1.Figure out the organization and language feature of a letter of advice.2.Identify the useful expressions and patterns to make suggestions from the reading text.3.Write a letter of advice by using the language in the reading text.My friend Chen Lei is addicted to playing computer
2、 games.Can you help me to give him some advice?Lead-inAsk the teachers for helpTake part in more activitiesHave a conversation with him Reading for detailsRead the letter and discuss the questions.1.What is Worried Friends problem?2.What do you think of Chen Lei like according to the passage?3.What
3、advice does Susan Luo give?4.What do you think of Susan Luo?1.What is Worried Friends problem?2.What do you think of Chen Lei like according to the passage?Worried Friend is worried that his or her friend,Chen Lei,plays computer games too often and spent too much online.Perhaps Chen Lei is anxious b
4、ecause he spends too much time online and cant focus on other things in life.He is unhealthy because he is addicted to computer games and cannot concentrate on school and family life.3.What advice does Susan Luo give?4.What do you think of Susan Luo?She is friendly,considerate,helpful and responsibl
5、e because she gives useful and practical advice.She recommends talking to Chen Lei and encourage him to try new hobbies.1.Do you think Ms.Luos advice is useful?Why or why not?2.If you are his friend,whats your advice to him?Reading for thinking:Challenge yourselfReading for structure and language fe
6、aturesRead the text again and study the organization and language features.(p18)1.Find and mark the parts of the letter that match the following points.A I know what the problem is.B I understand how you feel.C This is my advice and reason(s).D I think my advice will help.A I know what the problem i
7、s.B I understand how you feel C This is my advice and reason(is).D I think my advice will help.You wrote that you are very worried about your friend,Chen Lei.You think that your friend plays computer games too often and spends too much online.I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel ter
8、rible.I recommend that his behavior.It is not unusualworld.But spendingin life.Some studentsfamily life.I thinknew hobbies.Why not together?I am sure he will listen to you,since you are his good friend.Can you find out the expressions Ms Luo use to make suggestions?Circle them in the letter.I recomm
9、end that you talk to your friend about his behaviour.I think you should encourage your friend to try new hobbies.Why not discuss the problem together?problemsGroup work(three of you work together)Now you have three friends,whats your advice to them?My parents wont listen.I always feel lonely.There i
10、s a girl I like in my class.123Read through three situations on page 19.Sum up the problems and talk about the possible suggestions and reasons.Writing a letterPersonProblemSuggestionReason Ericunhappy or upset,with little communication with parents Xu Ting Min HoTry listening to your parents.Invite
11、 them out for something to eat.Maybe they arent listening to you because you dont listen to them.This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions.lonely,with parents far awayJoin a volunteer group.Connect with your parents online.This will give you chance to be around other people,a
12、nd help you realize that other people have problems,too.Just because they are far away,it doesnt mean that you cant talk to them.shy to express his feelingAsk a mutual friend to introduce you to her.Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member.Your friend will be able to help y
13、ou break the ice with her and provide encouragement to you.If you are in a group,it takes all the pressure off,and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting._Dear _,You wrote that _.I understand that _.I think _.because _.I am sure _.Best wishes,_10 September 2018Dear Xu Ting,You wrote that yo
14、u always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city.I understand how you feel.It is common for teenagers to feel lonely when they live away from their parents.I think you can try joining a volunteer group that helps other people.This will give you a chance to meet and be arou
15、nd others.It will also help you realize that you are not alone in having problems,too.Helping other people also makes us feel better.You can also connect with your parents online.Just because your parents are far away,it doesnt mean you cant talk to them.Im sure that youll make new friends and get a
16、 chance to speak to your parents more often.This will help drive away your loneliness.Best wishes,Susan LuoVersion 1Exchange your letter with your partner，and pay attention to the following points.1.Are all the parts of a letter included and organised in good order?2.Does the writer give reasons for
17、 the advice?3.Does the writer use proper expressions to give suggestions?4.Does the writer use commas and stops correctly?5.Is the handwriting easy to read?篇章结构The first part：the beginning(date and greeting)of the letterThe second part：the body(fact-stating，your opinion and hope)of the letter The th
18、ird part：the end(wishes and signature)of the letter亮点表达1.建议信开头常用句式I know you are now having trouble communicating with others，and you may often feel lonely.我知道你现在在与人交流方面有些麻烦，你也可能经常感到孤独。Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on.很高兴收到你就征求建议的来信。Here are some tips/a few suggestions to help
19、you.这里有帮助你的一些建议。2.表达建议常用句式First(ly)，why not join a club?If you do this，you can make friends.首先，为什么不参加一个俱乐部？如果你这样做的话，就会交到朋友。Second(ly)，you should/can try to talk with others.Then/That way，you will feel better.其次，你应该尽力与人交谈。这样，你会感觉好点。Third(ly)，it would be a good idea if you read a book or listen to mus
20、ic.By doing this，you will calm yourself down.第三，如果你看书或听音乐将会是个不错的主意。通过这样做，你会使自己平静下来。Last but not least，you should talk with her first.最后但同等重要的是，你应该先和她谈一谈。As far as I am concerned/In my opinion，you should help each other.就我而言/在我看来，你们应该互相帮助。3.建议信结尾常用句式I hope you will find these ideas useful.我希望你会发现这些办法
21、有用。As time goes on，people will know you better and will like to make friends with you if you can follow the above advice.如果你遵从以上建议，随着时间的推移，人们会更加了解你，会愿意和你交朋友的。I believe that if you follow my advice，youll get along well with your classmates.我相信，如果你听从我的建议，你会和同学们相处好的。写作技巧连句成篇，行文连贯句子是由词汇组成的，而文章是由句子组成的，遣词
22、造句要按语法和习惯表达，组句成篇也要按照篇章结构。选择能够恰当表示并列、递进、因果、转折、条件等意义的连词，把要点句子连接成文，使句与句，段与段之间意思连贯，衔接自然，从而生动、准确地表达考题内容。同时要根据表达的需要注意变换句式，避免句子结构的单调性。如：使用不同结构、不同长度的句子，尽量使句型多样化；多使用一些主从复合句来代替简单句，使行文更加流畅有力；改变句子开头方式，不要一味地都是主语开头，接着是谓语、宾语，最后再在句末加上一个状语。增加书面表达的表现力。1.Review useful expressions and patterns we have learnt in class.2.Read through the passage on page 75.Choose one of the questions and then write a letter of advice.(Workbook P75 Writing)
