1、Designed by IrisNow lets come to know more about him!think about it and answer the following question1.According to the title and the picture,can you guess the type of writing?2.How does the writer develop the text?Scan the passage on page 8 and answer the following questions.A.News ReporterB.Scient
2、ific PaperC.BiographyD.Argumentative EssayA.In space orderB.In time order C.In logic order3.Whats the main idea of the text?A.The daily life of Einstein.B.A brief introduction to Einstein.C.Why Einstein fled Germany.D.Einstein made great achievements in physics and mathematics.chronologicalTime line
3、Born in Germany 1879189619551933failed to enter universityentered universitygraduated took a job as a clerk in the Swiss patent office1902earned a doctorate in physics and published four extraordinary physics papers1909entered research full-time at a universitywas awarded the Nobel Prize for Physics
4、fled Germanypassed awayRead and Think:Organization TitlePara1:Brief IntriductionPara 2:Educational experiencePara 3:Work experience&achievement Para 4:Mid-lifePara 5:Appearance&anecdotesPara 6:DeathLeadingBodyEndingIdentityGreat-ness Einstein,who is the greatest scientists,is considered one of the s
5、martest men who ever lived.He made numerous contributions toThe most well-known,famousPersonalitiesa genius,courageous,kind,loved by many people,funny,sometime forgot things,humorousEducat-ion managed to doOut of a strong passion for he continued earning a doctorate inAchieve-mentspublished four ext
6、raordinary physics papers.became famous as Isaac NewtonHe was awarded the Nobel PrizeHe continued to make great contributions inAppear-ance Slightly odd-looking,had a thick moustache and long white hairWhat rhetorical devices are used in the passage?Rhetorical DeviceExample Analogy(类比)Metaphor(暗喻)Si
7、mile(明喻)Personification(拟人)Euphemism(委婉语）Following this,he gradually became famous throughout the world _.Einstein,who was Jewish,found _ closed to him.He had a thick moustache and long white hair,which sometimes _ _.Einstein _.as the new Isaac Newtonthe doors ofhad just received an electric shockst
8、ood on endhad passed awayacademic institutionsas though hecontent1.age,sex,birth-place,background(概况概况)2.appearance,character(外表、性格外表、性格)3.Education(教育背景教育背景)4.big events in his or her life(in order of time)(经历、生平经历、生平)5.evaluation(评价评价)An introductionBodyEndingStructureBeginningContentName,identity
9、,basic information Achievement,experienceDetails and examplesInfluence and evaluation Structure of an introduction to someone you admireHomework Introduce a person you admireContentDetailName and IdentityWhat does he/she do?What is his/her achievement?AppearanceWhats his/her most distinctive feature
10、 in terms of appearance?PersonalityWhat kind of person is he/she?(facts&opinions)Impressive storyfive elements:what/when/where/who/howReason for his/her greatnessWhats his/her influence/contribution?My feeling/commentsHow do I feel about him/her?StructureHow will I develop my writing?（order）What wil
11、l I focus on in each paragraph?(topic)Language featureWhat words and expressions can be used?What rhetorical devices will I use?致力于致力于决心做决心做有有的天赋的天赋获得获得.奖奖被誉为被誉为作为作为.而著名而著名做做.工作工作An introduction to someone you admirebig events,achievements&influencedevote oneself/ones life to(doing)sth=be devoted to
12、make up ones mind/be determined to dohave a gift/talent for=have gifted/talented forbe awarded.prize for./obtain/receive.prize for.be honoured as.be known aswork as介绍人物生平和成就时，介绍人物生平和成就时，按时间顺序和评述性按时间顺序和评述性语言刻画人物一生，语言刻画人物一生，句式结构可以选择定语从句、主语从句、并列句、非谓语动词短语句式结构可以选择定语从句、主语从句、并列句、非谓语动词短语和倒装等。和倒装等。国内外著名的国内外著
13、名的 为为树立好榜样树立好榜样高度赞扬高度赞扬为为作出巨大贡献作出巨大贡献 An introduction to someone you admireevaluation be famous/well-known at home and abroadset a good example to sb/set sb a good examplespeak/think highly ofmake great/numerous contributions toNext,lets move to practice!Homework主题写作主题写作-卓有成就的人物卓有成就的人物1.写作任务写作任务假设你是
14、李华假设你是李华,你的英国朋友你的英国朋友 Jim 在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感在给你的邮件中提到他对中国历史很感兴趣兴趣,并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物并请你介绍一位你喜欢的中国历史人物,请你给请你给Jim 回复回复,内容包括内容包括:(1)该人物是谁该人物是谁;(2)该人物的主要贡献该人物的主要贡献;(3)该人物对你的影响。注意该人物对你的影响。注意:(1)词数词数 80左右左右;(2)开头和结尾已给出开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。不计入总词数。Dear Jim,How is everything going?写作思路写作思路(1)一审一审:体裁、结构和主题体裁、结构和主题体裁
15、体裁:应用文应用文-书信介绍类书信介绍类第一段第一段:交际用语交际用语-导入导入-写邮件目的写邮件目的第二段第二段:人物与成就人物与成就-人物人物(要点要点1)+贡献贡献(概括句概括句)+细节细节(2点点)第三段第三段:影响影响-概括句概括句+细节细节(2点点)第四段第四段:总结总结+交际交际主题主题:历史人物介绍历史人物介绍二定二定:人称与时态人称与时态人称人称:第一人称与第三人称第一人称与第三人称时态时态:一般过去时与一般现在时一般过去时与一般现在时三明确三明确明确写作要点明确写作要点:人物人物(鲁迅鲁迅)贡献贡献(杰出作品、反对旧势力杰出作品、反对旧势力)影响影响(了解过去了解过去+坚持
16、的重要性坚持的重要性)素材整理素材整理(1)关键词语关键词语be committedto致力于致力于 fight against与与做斗争做斗争arouse the passion of唤起唤起的激情的激情 be acknowledged as 被认为是被认为是 obtain/gain a better knowledge of获得对获得对的更好的了解的更好的了解 to sum up 总之总之完成句子完成句子这位主人公是一位不同寻常的作家这位主人公是一位不同寻常的作家-鲁迅，他创作了许多杰出的散文鲁迅，他创作了许多杰出的散文和小说。和小说。The hero is an extraordinar
17、y writer-Lu Xun,who wrote a lot of remarkable prose and novels他致力于通过其文章与敌人做斗争，唤起中国民众建立一个新中国他致力于通过其文章与敌人做斗争，唤起中国民众建立一个新中国的热情。的热情。He was committed tofighting against the enemy with his articles，arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China.正是因为这一点正是因为这一点,他被认为是他那个时代的一位英雄。他被认为是他那个时代的一位英雄。
18、It was because of this that he was acknowledged as a hero of his time.完成句子完成句子他不仅帮我更好地了解了那个时代他不仅帮我更好地了解了那个时代,也让我学到了坚持的重要也让我学到了坚持的重要性。性。Not only does he help me obtain a bette knowledge of that time but I have learnt the importance ofinsistence.总之总之,他是中国历史上的一位伟大的英雄。他是中国历史上的一位伟大的英雄。To sum up he is a g
19、reat hero in the history of China.完成句子完成句子这位主人公是一位不同寻常的作家这位主人公是一位不同寻常的作家-鲁迅，他创作了许多杰出的散文鲁迅，他创作了许多杰出的散文和小说。和小说。The hero is an extraordinary writer-Lu Xun,who wrote a lot of remarkable prose and novels他致力于通过其文章与敌人做斗争，唤起中国民众建立一个新中国他致力于通过其文章与敌人做斗争，唤起中国民众建立一个新中国的热情。的热情。He was committed tofighting against
20、the enemy with his articles，arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China.正是因为这一点正是因为这一点,他被认为是他那个时代的一位英雄。他被认为是他那个时代的一位英雄。It was because of this that he was acknowledged as a hero of his time.满分作文满分作文Dear Jim,How is everything going?Glad to know you are interested in Chinese history.Id
21、 like to introduce a remarkable Chinese to you.The hero is an extraordinary writerLu Xun,who wrote a lot of remarkable prose and novels.He was committed to fighting against the enemy with his articles,arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China.It was because of this that he was acknowledged as a hero of his time.Lu Xun has influenced me a lot.Not only does he help me obtain a better knowledge of that time but I have learnt the importance of insistence.To sum up,he is a great hero in the history of China.Looking forward to your reply.Yours,Li HuaThanks！
