1、 Stress among teenagersIt drives me madIt drives me mad！.Work with your partner and choose the best answerDear Millie,Im writing to tell you something about my problems.Im unhappy with my weight but I dont know how to change it.Even some of my classmates laugh at me.I also worry about the coming exa
2、m.My parents care too much about my marks.Im looking forward to your advice.Best wishes,RaymondDear Raymond,Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.You are unhappy with your weight,but you do not know how to change it.Many students of our age have this problem.(1)_.You also worry abou
3、t exams.Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam,so you always feel stressed.(2)_?I hope you think my advice is worth taking.Best wishes,MillieTip1:Use different expressions.(不同的表达不同的表达)Suggestion1:_What/How about.?Why dont you/not.?Id like to suggest that.It is helpful/important
4、to.Give suggestionsPerhaps you should eat less and exercise more.Problem1:You are unhappy with your_ weightSuggestion1:Why not eat less and exercise more?For example,you can eat more vegetables and fruit instead of meat.After class,you can do some exercise like jogging.positive and practical?useful
5、and easy to take actionGive suggestionsTip2:Give positive and practical suggestions.(积极实用的建议积极实用的建议)Problem1:You are unhappy with your weightSuggestion2:_(Revise修改修改)What about.?Why dont you.?Id like to suggest that.+examplesIt is helpful/important to.perhaps you can.Give suggestionsProblem2:You als
6、o worry about_.examsDear Raymond,Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.You are unhappy with your weight,but you do not know how to change it.Many students of our age have this problem.(1)_.You also worry about exams.Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam,so you
7、always feel stressed.(2)_.I hope you think my advice is worth taking.Best wishes,MillieMain bodyConclusionIntroductionPapa 1 Para 2Para 3Para 4 Introduction Main body Conclusion Problem2+suggestion2Problem1+suggestion1Dear Raymond,Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.You are unhapp
8、y with your weight,but you do not know how to change it.Many students of our age have this problem.(1)_.You also worry about exams.Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam,so you always feel stressed.(2)_?I hope you think my advice is worth taking.Best wishes,MillieTip3:Write your
9、 letter in a _ way.politeDear Millie,Im writing to tell you something about my problems.Im unhappy with my weight but I dont know how to change it.Even some of my classmates laugh at me.I also worry about exams.My parents care too much about my marks.Im looking forward to your advice.Best wishes,Ray
10、mondDear Raymond,Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.You are unhappy with your weight but you dont know how to change it.Many students of our age have this problem.(1)_.You also worry about exams.Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam,so you always feel stress
11、ed.(2)_I hope you think my advice is worth taking.Best wishes,MillieTip3:Change“I”into“you”and“my”into“your”Problem1:You are unhappy with your weight,but you do not know how to change it.Many students of our age have this problem.Describe the problemsProblem2:You also worry about exams.Your parents
12、care too much about your marks after each exam,so you always feel stressed.Tip4:Point out the problems and show your understanding.Dear Raymond,Thank you very much for telling me about your problems.You are unhappy with your weight,but you do not know how to change it.Many students of our age have t
13、his problem.(1)_.You also worry about exams.Your parents care too much about your marks after each exam,so you always feel stressed.(2)_?I hope you think my advice is worth taking.Best wishes,MillieTip5:Use proper transitions.Give positive and practical advice.Why not/dont you/What about/How about_?
14、For example,when you at school,_.and when you return home_.ExerciseProblem:Maybe he feels sad/angry/stressed about _.(他在英语上他在英语方面几乎没有进步)He made _ _ _English.Studylittle progress inLetter1Dear Friend,Im a student in Grade 9.Now some problems worry me and I dont know how to deal with them.Im afraid of
15、 making a speech in front of a lot of people.I think Im too shy.Also,my parents are so busy that they often come back very late.Sometimes I have no one to share my worries with.Could you give me some advice?Yours,JudyLetter2Dear Friend,I am Timmy,a Grade 9 student.Im writing to you about my worries.
16、I feel stressed about my schoolwork.I spend most of time studying.I hardly have any time to have fun.Also,I sometimes feel lonely because I have few friends.I dont know how to make friends.I am not happy.Can you offer me some suggestions?Yours,Timmy Good organizationFine LanguageUseful expressions a
17、nd transitions(过渡语)Writing timePart1 IntroductionPart2 Main bodyPart3 Conclusion Rich contentThank you very much for telling me your problems.I hope you think my advice is worth taking.You feel stressed/sad/angry about.What about.?/Why dont you.?Id like to suggest that.Describe the problems and give suggestionsHomeworkImprove and rewrite your articles based on the feedback you get in class.
