1、命题探索命题探索三阶攻关三阶攻关目录写作练兵写作练兵话题思维导图话题思维导图话题话题2 居住环境居住环境话题思维导图话题话题2 居住环境居住环境命题探索 分析福建近分析福建近7年中考书面表达可知，关于年中考书面表达可知，关于“居住环境居住环境”相关的相关的话题共考查过话题共考查过3次。考查角度均为：次。考查角度均为：介绍家乡基本情况介绍家乡基本情况。主要涉及：。主要涉及：(1)地方或场所介绍：如地方或场所介绍：如2017年福建介绍福建省情，年福建介绍福建省情，2016莆田介绍莆莆田介绍莆田地方信息；田地方信息；(2)介绍家乡著名景点或景观：如介绍家乡著名景点或景观：如2014福州介绍福州三福州
2、介绍福州三坊七巷。坊七巷。分析全国中考真题可知，也会从分析全国中考真题可知，也会从“介绍居住环境的变化介绍居住环境的变化”和和“介绍城乡生活异同介绍城乡生活异同”这两个角度进行命题。这两个角度进行命题。话题话题2 居住环境居住环境典例剖析典例剖析 (2017福建福建)你的美国朋友你的美国朋友John计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据计划暑假来中国旅游。请你根据以下图示，用英语在以下图示，用英语在QQ中给他留言，中给他留言，介绍并推荐你的家乡福建介绍并推荐你的家乡福建，词数词数80左右。左右。审主题：审主题：介绍家乡福建介绍家乡福建审人称：第三人称审人称：第三人称审时态：一般现在时审时态：一般现在时一
3、阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境要求：要求：1.必须包必须包含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词含所有提示信息，开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；数；2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范；3.请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。请勿在文中使用真实的姓名、校名及提示信息以外的地名。一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境 Hi,John,Im glad to hear that youre plann
4、ing to travel around China during the summer vacation.Id like to invite you to my hometown Fujuan for a visit.Fujian lies _ Im looking forward to meeting you!一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境1角度角度介绍家乡基本情况介绍家乡基本情况好句范例好句范例1.Fujian Province lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital cit
5、y.2.Xiamen is my hometown where I was born and grew up.3.The places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境4.There are various of delicious food in Fujian,such as spring rolls,Fuzhou fish balls and so on.5.Surrounded by mountains on th
6、ree sides,the small village faces a clear river on the east.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境句句 子子 仿仿 写写 1.厦门位于福建省的东南部。厦门位于福建省的东南部。_2.厦门有许多名胜古迹，它们值得参观。厦门有许多名胜古迹，它们值得参观。_Xiamen lies in the southeast of Fujian Province.There are many places of interest in Xiamen,and they are worth visiting.一阶 审好题二阶写好
7、句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境3.此外，您还可以品尝各种美味的食物，如虾面、花生汤等等。此外，您还可以品尝各种美味的食物，如虾面、花生汤等等。_4.厦门是一个全年气候宜人的好地方。厦门是一个全年气候宜人的好地方。_Besides,you can taste various kinds of delicious food,such as shrimp noodles,peanut soup and so on.Xiamen is a good place where the climate is good all year round.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话
8、题话题2 居住环境居住环境2角度角度介绍居住环境及变化介绍居住环境及变化6.The park is the best place on weekends because almost everyone goes there to see the street performers.7.About thirty years ago,it was a small village,but today it is a very big city.8.It is getting bigger and busier.The streets are wider and cleaner.9.Some peop
9、le think life in the past was simpler and healthier than today.More wealth sometimes means less health.好句范例好句范例一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境句句 子子 仿仿 写写 5.图书馆是镇上最好的地方，因为那里有很多书。图书馆是镇上最好的地方，因为那里有很多书。_6.大约二十年前我的家乡还是个小镇，但是今天已经变成了一座大约二十年前我的家乡还是个小镇，但是今天已经变成了一座大城市。大城市。_The library is the best place in
10、the town,because there are a lot of books.About twenty years ago,my hometown was a small town,but today it has become a big city.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境7.我的家乡正在变得更加美丽和干净。我的家乡正在变得更加美丽和干净。_8.总体而言，我认为今天的生活更好了。我们吃得更好，活得更总体而言，我认为今天的生活更好了。我们吃得更好，活得更长久。长久。_My hometown is getting more beautiful a
11、nd cleaner.Generally speaking,I think life is better today.We eat better and we live longer.一阶 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境速记速记俗语谚语俗语谚语10.There is no place like home./East or West,home is best.金窝银窝金窝银窝不如自己的狗窝。不如自己的狗窝。11.A good neighbor is better than a brother in the next village.远亲远亲不如近邻。不如近邻。一阶
12、 审好题二阶写好句三阶练语段&成篇章话题话题2 居住环境居住环境一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句练语段练语段语语 段段 练练 习习 1介绍家乡基本情况介绍家乡基本情况 Fujian Province _(地理位置地理位置).It is both modern and beautiful.It is popular with tourists _(介绍介绍受欢迎的原因受欢迎的原因).Its a beautiful place with many places of interest,_(列举名胜列举名胜古迹古迹).Many schools,hospitals,cinemas and th
13、eaters have sprung lies in the southeast of Chinanot only for its fantastic weather but also for its fresh airsuch as Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island and so on话题话题2 居住环境居住环境一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句up one after another.The life of the people has greatly improved.I love my hometown and its people.They are _(
14、介绍当地人的品格介绍当地人的品格).working hard so as to make it still richer and more beautiful话题话题2 居住环境居住环境一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句语语 段段 练练 习习 2介绍居住环境及变化介绍居住环境及变化 Five years ago,people in my hometown _(以前的以前的生活条件生活条件).The traffic here _(以前的交通以前的交通).The children _(以前的上学条件以前的上学条件).lived a poor lifewas inconvenientwalke
15、d a long way to go to school话题话题2 居住环境居住环境一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句 Today,I see a lot of changes in my hometown.People _(现在的生活条件现在的生活条件).A lot of them live in the buildings.They have mobile phones and TVs.They have built a new school and children _(现在的上学条件现在的上学条件).They also have free lunch._(现在的交通条件现在的交通
16、条件)also have come through the village.The traffic is very convenient now.live a rich lifego to school for freeWide roads话题话题2 居住环境居住环境一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句成篇章成篇章（针对（针对“典例剖析典例剖析”的优秀范文）的优秀范文）Hi,John,Im glad to hear that youre planning to travel around China during the summer vacation.Id like to invite
17、you to my hometown Fujian for a visit.Fujian lies in the southeast of China with Fuzhou as its capital city.It has a population of over 38 million.Because of the nice environment,its known as Refreshing Fujian,which attracts millions of tourists from home and abroad.If you come here,you 话题话题2 居住环境居住
18、环境一阶 审好题三阶练语段&成篇章二阶写好句can enjoy fresh air,blue sky as well as beautiful mountains and clear rivers.Many famous places of interest like Mount Wuyi and Gulang Island are well worth visiting.Besides,you can taste various kinds of delicious food.Im looking forward to meeting you!话题话题2 居住环境居住环境写作练兵写作练兵 每
19、个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以每个人都生活在一个特定的环境。请以“What I like about where I live”为题，并根据以下内容要点和要求用英语写一篇短为题，并根据以下内容要点和要求用英语写一篇短文，描述你生活的环境。文，描述你生活的环境。内容：内容：1.所居住的地方以及它的环境特点；所居住的地方以及它的环境特点；2.和其他城市相比有什么不同；和其他城市相比有什么不同；3.你对自己居住地方的期望。你对自己居住地方的期望。要求：要求：1.结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；结构完整，表达通顺，语言规范，书写清晰；2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名、学校名等信息；文中不得出现
20、任何真实的人名、学校名等信息；3.词数词数80左右。左右。话题话题2 居住环境居住环境写作练兵写作练兵 What I like about where I live_ I live in a small and quiet city in Guizhou Province.The scenery here is natural and beautiful,such as fresh air,blue sky and so on.Different from other cities,it has no tall buildings or endless cars on the streets.People here are seldom late for their work and enjoy a slow and peaceful life.And that is what I like most about my city.However,my city has her problems.She has no high speed trains.I hope that high speed trains will be built in the future so that I can travel to other cities more easily!
