1、English Writing-travel diary 谈论过去的事：写旅游日记一般过去时一般过去时：1.过去的状态：主语+was/were+2.过去的动作：主语+V.edHow to write a travel diary?审：审题审：审题（人称、主要内容、时态）（人称、主要内容、时态）列：列出各要点列：列出各要点,写出关键词写出关键词/词组词组连：词连：词/词组词组-句句-段段-篇篇（开头、结尾、连接词）（开头、结尾、连接词）查：检查人称，时态，拼写，短语和要点查：检查人称，时态，拼写，短语和要点誊：誊写作文，书面整洁誊：誊写作文，书面整洁审、列、连、查、誊审、列、连、查、誊Openi
2、ng sentences开头开头1 Last Sunday,I went to with 2.On May1st,we traveled to 3.On Childrens Day,we had a chance to go toSummary 结尾结尾1.To make a summary进行总结2.Eg.What a wonderful place!3.I think we had a great time there.4.Although we were a little tired,we were very happy.5.2.To show wishes表达愿望6.Eg.I wish
3、 I can go there again if I have a chance.7.For your next vacation,why not consider visiting Conjunctions润滑剂（连接词、过渡词）润滑剂（连接词、过渡词）表顺序 表递进 表并列、选择表转折 表原因 first/then/next/finallyalso/besides/even/whats more and/orbut/however/althoughbecause第二学月作文：请你以请你以“A Visit to the zoo”为题，根据提示用英语写一篇短为题，根据提示用英语写一篇短文。文。
4、提示内容：提示内容：1那天天气那天天气晴朗晴朗，阳光，阳光灿烂灿烂。2动物园动物园离离我们学校我们学校有点远有点远，我们，我们乘乘公共汽公共汽车去车去那儿。那儿。3动物园动物园人多人多，很，很挤挤。4我们参观了游客中心，我们参观了游客中心，看看了海豚了海豚表演表演，海豚聪明可爱，我海豚聪明可爱，我非常喜欢非常喜欢他们。他们。5我们去礼品店买了很多礼物，我们去礼品店买了很多礼物，到到下午五点下午五点才才返校。返校。A visit to the zoo Last Sunday I went to the zoo with my classmates.The weather was fine and
5、 it was sunny all day.The zoo is far from my school,so we took a bus there.(We went there by bus.)There were many people in the zoo.It was very crowded.At frist,we visited the Visitors Center.Then we watched a dolphin show,and it was very interesting.Dolphins are very cute and I like them very much.
6、After that,we went to the Gift Shop and bought lots of gifts.Finally,we were tired but happy.We didnt go back to school until five oclock.It was an exciting trip.I hope to go there again.Sample根据提示写一篇日记,记录五月一日(星期五)你和朋友一起去参观福建历史博物馆的事。提示内容：1.天气:晴朗 2.2.距离:离家约两公里。（2 kilometers）3.3.交通工具:骑自行车去。4.4.时间:八点出发
7、,十点回家。5.5.内容:见到了许多照片,实物等.学到了很多东西。6.7.6.游人:见到许多父母和孩子,老师和学生,士兵等。8.要求:词数80个左右,要符合日记格式,可适当发挥。sunny/fineIt is about two kilometres away fromIt is about two kilometres fromtoset offgot back home/return homelearned a lotsoldiers根据提示写一篇日记,记录五月一日(星期五)你和朋友一起去参观福建历史博物馆的事。提示内容：1.天气:晴朗 2.2.距离:离家约两公里。（2 kilometer
8、s）3.3.交通工具:骑自行车去。4.4.时间:八点出发,十点回家。5.5.内容:见到了许多照片,实物等.学到了很多东西。6.7.6.游人:见到许多父母和孩子,老师和学生,士兵等。8.要求:词数80个左右,要符合日记格式,可适当发挥。sunny/fineIt is about two kilometres away fromIt is about two kilometres fromtoset offgot back home/return homelearned a lotsoldiersOral practice口头表达 Friday May 1 sunny It was fine to
9、day.My friends and I went to visit Fujian History Museum.It is about two kilometres away from my home.So we decided to go there by bike.We set off at eight.At first,in the museum We saw many photos and many other things.We learned a lot.There we saw a lot of children with their parents,students with
10、 their teachers,and soldiers.At ten,we left the museum for home.We had a good time today.Sample书面表达 请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题，用英语写一篇短文。提示语必须用上，只抄提示语不给分提示内容：1去年暑假，我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。2那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江.3漓江的水非常的清澈（clean），可以看见小鱼在水里游来游去。4我们还去爬了山，累但是很快乐。5我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。要求：要点齐全，表达正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写清晰、规范。可紧扣主题
11、适当发挥，80词左右。Writing practice实战演练审，列，连，查，誊审，列，连，查，誊took a boat to visit Lijiangvisited Lijiang by boatclimbed the mountain 书面表达书面表达 请你以请你以“A Visit to Guilin”为题，用英语写一篇短文。为题，用英语写一篇短文。提示语必须用上，只抄提示语不给分提示语必须用上，只抄提示语不给分提示内容：提示内容：1去年暑假，我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。去年暑假，我和我的爸爸妈妈去了桂林。2那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江那天天气晴朗。我们乘着小船游览了漓江3漓江的水
12、非常的清澈（漓江的水非常的清澈（clean），），可以看见小鱼在水里游来游去。可以看见小鱼在水里游来游去。4我们还去爬了山，累但是很快乐。我们还去爬了山，累但是很快乐。5我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。我们还去城里购物，城市很漂亮，人们很友好。要求：要点齐全，表达正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写清晰、规要求：要点齐全，表达正确，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写清晰、规范。可紧扣主题适当发挥，范。可紧扣主题适当发挥，80词左右。词左右。Writing practice实战演练审，列，连，查，誊审，列，连，查，誊Share&enjoy习作分享习作分享慧眼识别：慧眼识别：闪光点？闪光点？错误？错误？My summer holiday plansWork harder now!May you succeed in June!Wish you all a good summer holiday!
