1、议论文正反观点对比Argumentative Essay of Contrast作文写作训练 English Composition Writing正反观点类议论文Argumentative Essay of Contrast从正反两方面来论证某一观点,在最后陈述自己的观点。要求审题时注意要点 体裁:议论文;时态:一般现在时;人称:第一人称或第三人称。文章结构 The general structure 正反观点对比类的文章Topic:提出问题正面论点1+正面论据+分析论证反面论点2+反面论据+分析论证通过正反对照进行总结,表明自己的观点OpinionsConclusionWhat can y
2、ou see in the picture?What are the Advantages and Disadvantages of Cars?话题 Topic范文一讲解 Sample IThe Advantages and Disadvantages of Cars Cars were first used at the end of the nineteenth century,and were no faster than a horse.Today there are billions of cars on the road.Everyone wants one.(The introd
3、uction:This gives some general facts about the subject)范文一讲解 Sample IThe Advantages and Disadvantages of Cars Cars have great advantages.They move fast and they give you freedom.You can just get in your car and go wherever you want.Up to five people can travel in a car,so often it is cheaper to go b
4、y car than to take a train.(This paragraph gives the arguments for cars)Sample I范文一讲解 But cars have great disadvantages.They use fuels which pollute the environment very badly.They also create serious traffic problems.Sometimes you cannot get into a city because there are so many cars on the road.(T
5、his paragraph give the arguments against cars)Sample I范文一讲解 In conclusion,I think that cars are very useful because travel is s easy with a car.But the environmental problem is serious and we need to find a cleaner fuel.(The conclusion:This gives the writers final opinion)Sample I范文一讲解 可以看出,这类文章的写作,
6、首先要提出问题,即双方讨论的问题,然后进行正反两方面的论述,其论点、论据和论证相对比较简单。通常分成四段:第一段综述议论的话题;第二段表述正方观点及其理由;第三段表达反方的观点及理由;第四段陈述自己的观点。范文总结分析如何提高作文表达A more advanced sample of the above composition范文二讲解 Sample IIAdvantages and Disadvantages of Cars With the development of both industry and economy in China,the number of people who
7、own cars is on the rise.Some people have bought cars of their own,and others are planning to buy cars.But there have been two quite different views on this phenomenon.Some claim that there are many advantages brought about by cars.First,the automobile industry provides jobs for countless workers and
8、 strong support for other industries.Second,if conditions permit,owning a car can make us work more efficiently.Finally,life will become more convenient.A car allows one to move freely and with a car there is no need to wait for the bus in the cold or under the burning sun.范文二讲解 Sample II However,ot
9、hers strongly object to the increase in developing cars.They hold that automobiles will give rise to a series of problems.In the first place,as more and more cars are produced and run in the street,a large volume of poisonous gas will be given off,polluting the atmosphere and causing a actual harm t
10、o the health of people.Next,cars contribute to traffic congestion so greatly that the advantages gained in comfort and freedoms are often cancelled out by the frustration caused by traffic jams.The last problem is the increasing number of car accidents that have killed and will kill a lot of people
11、in a friction of a second.范文二讲解 Sample II In my opinion,although automobiles have been playing a vital part in the daily activities of our society,they also bring us numerous troubles such as more serious environmental pollution,more traffic accidents and more energy consumption.They drink up huge a
12、mounts of fuel and throw out huge amounts of pollutants.Traffic accidents kill thousands and thousands of people each year and cripple more.Jams waste our precious time.Therefore I am against developing private cars.Group work(1)Discuss the general structure of the whole passage and each paragraph.(
13、2)Find out the cohesive vocabulary(衔接过渡词汇)in the composition.(3)Find the important sentence patterns in the composition.(4)Work in groups to discuss more senior sentence patterns and cohesive devices(衔接手段)that can be used in argumentative essays.第一段:引出话题 第二段:正方观点及理由 第三段:反方观点及理由 第四段:总结段,作者自己的观点本文模板 T
14、he format of the composition 1.Recently,has become the focus of the society.2.has been playing an increasingly important role in our day-to-day life.3.Nowadays there is a growing concern for4.Nowadays it is common to hear that5.We had a discussion/survey about/on 6.Nowadays more and more people are
15、beginning to be aware the seriousness of 常用的各种句式和衔接手段句首提出论题或现象的句型:表示不同人有不同观点的套句表示不同人有不同观点的套句Different people hold different opinions.People have taken different attitudes towards People have different opinions on this problem.in my view/opinion,As for me,As far as I am concerned,I agree withI hold t
16、he belief thatI strongly believe that表达个人观点的句式:转折关系:but,however,on the contrary,nevertheless,on the other hand,unlike因果关系:because,since,as,thanks to,owing to,as a result of,for the reason thatThe reason why is that常见的各种连接词 让步关系:though,although,even if,even though,in spite of the fact that,despite递进关
17、系:whats more,in addition,furthermore,besides,more over,on the one handon the other hand常见的各种连接词表列举:for example,for instance,take as an example,thats to say,in other words,as follows表总结:in short,in brief,in conclusion,on the whole,as has been stated,in a word,in a nutshell,all in all,to sum up,From w
18、hat has been discussed above,we may draw the conclusion thatIn summary,it is wiserTake all the mentioned above into consideration/account,I Personally,常见的各种连接词Task 随着网络的发展,网上购物越来越流行了。假设你是李华,最近某英文报正在就网购这一现象进行讨论。以下是你所在班级的讨论情况,请你给该报写一封信,反映讨论结果,并谈谈你的看法。Task Dear Sir/Madam,I am writing to tell you about
19、the discussion weve had about online shopping._ 80%of the students prefer to buy almost everything online for these reasons._,it saves their time and energy _ they can easily get things without going out of the room._,it enables them to purchase things from different cities,even different countries,
20、with ease._,it saves money because it is much cheaper to buy thins online._,other students object to online shopping.They argue they are not sure of the products quality because instead of seeing real products they can only see their pictures._,paying online could put their money at risk._,I favor online shopping but it is necessary for us to be alert.Yours sincerely Li HuaThank you!