1、2020年中考英语作文指导与训练话题写作05-假日、旅行话题写作（五）假日、旅行第一篇教材考点梳理 “读万卷书、行万里路”,旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题,根据以下思维导图的提示,写一篇短文,发表你的看法。典例分析【话题点睛】针对的话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、旅游日记、旅游路线等。注意(1)要点齐全,适当发挥;(2)从思维导图Sayings部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中;(3)句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;(4)词数：80100;(5)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。【思路点拨】1.要点提炼：主题是对旅行是学习的最好方式之一这
2、一观点的论述。文章主要有三个要点：(1)概述;(2)旅行的益处;(3)个人列举益处或经验。2.确定时态：一般现在时。3.确定人称：第二人称、第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.旅行是最好的学习方式之一。(one of+形容词最高级+复数名词)Travelling is for learning.2.直到你亲眼看到它,你才会得到准确的印象。(notuntil)You can never get an exact picture of it.3.在旅途中,我们可以一起处理可能遇到的问题和困难。(deal with)We can and difficulti
3、es in the journey.one of the best waysuntil you see it yourselfdeal with the possible problemstogether.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.More and more people like travelling around the world.Because people can benefit a lot from travelling.(用The reason why合并为一个句子)2.You may have read or heard about something.You c
4、an never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself.(用连词连接两个句子)The reason why more and more people like travelling around the world is that people can benefit a lot from travelling.You may have read or heard about something,but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it your
5、self.3.I like travelling with friends.I dont like travelling alone.(用 prefer torather than改写句子)I prefer to travel with friends rather than travel alone.【连句成文】TravellingThe reason why more and more people like travelling around the world is that people can benefit a lot from travelling.As the saying
6、goes,read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.Travelling is one of the best ways for learning.You may have read or heard about something,but you can never get an exact picture of it until you see it yourself.Seeing is believing.Furthermore,if you are a careful observer,you can learn muc
7、h during your travel about the geography,biology andhistory of the places you visit.While travelling,you can meet more people and make more friends.You can also create great memories for your lifetime.No matter how well educated you are,there is always a lot for you to learn through travelling.As fo
8、r me,I prefer to travel with friends rather than travel alone.Because we can deal with the possible problems and difficulties together in the journey.【参考谚语】1.Travel broadens the mind.旅游开阔思维。2.He who travels far knows much.远行者见识广。3.Read ten thousand books and travel ten thousand miles.读万卷书,行万里路。拓展积累【
9、相关短语】enjoy the sunshine 享受阳光;one of the biggest mountains 最大的山之一;have a picnic 野餐;as everyone knows 众所周知;be famous for 因闻名;have a good trip 旅途愉快;have fun doing sth.做某事很有趣;have a good time 玩得愉快【亮点句型】导入主题句1.The summer holiday is coming.We are going to spend several days travelling.2.Last April,I trave
10、lled to Beijing with my family.It was the best season to visit Beijing.3.Last summer we took a trip to Beijing.4.Travelling is a great source of knowledge.文章发展、过渡句1.Nanjing is a city with a long history.It was also the capital of six dynasties.2.We visited some famous places of interest.3.And we lea
11、rned more about the history of our country.4.During the trip,we found that our country is more and more beautiful.文章结尾句1.We not only enjoyed the sights,but also made some good friends.And I think thats the fantastic part of travelling.2.Travelling made me relaxed and excited.And I also learned a lot
12、 from travelling.3.I will never forget the journey to Xian.It was really exciting.A假如你是北京的李丽,下周你在哈尔滨读中学的表妹李兰要来北京旅游。请根据以下提示,给她写一封信,并告诉她在北京旅游期间做一名文明的(well-mannered)中学生。写作要点(1)欢迎她来北京。(2)介绍北京的情况：下周天气：白天最高温度超过33;交通方式：最好乘坐地铁;必去的名胜：长城。(3)对她在北京旅游期间如何做一名文明的中学生提出具体建议。实战演练写作要求(1)不得使用真实的姓名和校名;(2)可适当加入细节,使内容充实,行
13、文连贯;(3)字迹工整、语言精练、表达准确、条理清晰;(4)至少80词,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Dear Li Lan,How are you doing?Best wishes!Yours,Li LiOne possible version:Dear Li Lan,How are you doing?Im glad to hear that you are coming to Beijing next week.Welcome to Beijing.Ill give you some suggestions on this travelling.Next week Beijing i
14、s going to be very hot.Sometimes the highest temperature is over 33.Youd better take an umbrella when you go out.As everyone knows,Beijing is a crowded city.And the subway is one of the most convenient ways to travel in this city.So I advise you to take the subway to take around.Beijing isfamous for
15、 the Great Wall.So you cant miss visiting it.During your travel,dont throw litter everywhere and keep quiet in public.Only in this way can you be treated as a well-mannered middle school student.I believe your trip will be full of fun and I hope you will have a good time in Beijing!Best wishes!Yours
16、,Li LiB为了进一步提升扬州国际文化旅游名城新形象,我市正在举办中学生英语导游大赛。请根据以下流程图提示完成一篇参赛导游词。参考词汇Slender West Lake瘦西湖Five-pavilion Bridge五亭桥He Garden何园double-path corridor复道回廊要求(1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;(2)必须包括提示中的所有信息,并按要求适当发挥;(3)词数：100左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Yangzhou!Im your tour guide.
17、Yangzhou,my hometown,lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River.I hope youll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.One possible version:Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to Yangzhou!Im your tour guide.Yangzhou,my hometown,lies between the Huai River and the Yangtze River.Yangzhou has a history of over
18、 2,500 years.There are many interesting places to visit,such as the Slender West Lake,the Five-pavilion Bridge,He Garden,the double-path corridor,and China Paper-Cutting Museum.The Slender West Lake is a national park in Yangzhou City.The Five-pavilion Bridge is the symbol of the Slender West Lake.H
19、eGarden is the best-known private garden of the late Qing Dynasty.China Paper-Cutting Museum is in Yangzhou,too.Yangzhou paper-cutting can date back to the Sui Dynasty.Yangzhou dishes may be one of the reasons why so many people are attracted by the city.They are not only delicious but also colorful.I hope youll have a very nice stay in Yangzhou.
