1、九年级英语全册Unit11Sadmoviesmakemecry同步作文指导新版人教新目标版You make me cry make me smilemake me feel the love is true you always stand by my side I dont want to say goodbye You make me cry make me smilemake me feel the joy of lover kissing youthank you for all the love you always gave to me oh I love you What mak
2、es you cry?What makes you relax?What makes you nervous?What makes you happy?To talk about how things affect you.To learn to write an article about“The Happiest Life”Words about feelingPositive wordsNegative wordshappy,relaxed,easy,comfortable,excited,interested nervous,worried,angry,uneasy,mad,scare
3、d,thrilled,bored Describe one of your experiences that impressed you most.eg.Missing the important soccer game makes me _.A.信息归纳：请阅读下面有关幸福的文章，根信息归纳：请阅读下面有关幸福的文章，根据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。据所提供的信息，完成下面表格。Information CardA positive mood and a pleasant state of mindOne in twenty personsThe ideal situationPeople w
4、ith college educationLove B.书面表达：你在学校过的快乐吗？生活中的书面表达：你在学校过的快乐吗？生活中的你幸福吗？你心目中的快乐生活是什么样子的？你幸福吗？你心目中的快乐生活是什么样子的？请你以请你以“The Happiest Life”为题，写一篇为题，写一篇80词左右的短文来描述一下你认为的最快乐的生词左右的短文来描述一下你认为的最快乐的生活。内容包括：活。内容包括：1.你现在的快乐和烦恼是什么？你现在的快乐和烦恼是什么？2.你追求的最快乐、最幸福的生活是什么样子你追求的最快乐、最幸福的生活是什么样子的？的？3.你会为此做出怎样的努力？你会为此做出怎样的努力？连
5、连写写想想列列查查Step 1-think（想一想）（想一想）审题审题人称：人称：_时态：时态：_体裁：体裁：_第一人称第一人称 一般现在时态一般现在时态 议论文议论文 Step 2-List（列一列）（列一列）1.和和相处融洽相处融洽 _ 2.希望做某事希望做某事 _ 3.努力学习努力学习 _ 4.使梦想实现使梦想实现 _ 5.相互学习相互学习 _get on well with hope to do study hard make the dream come true learn from each other 以以“The happiest Life”为题为题 1.我现在生活中的快乐和
6、烦恼我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼 2.我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活 3.我要付出的努力我要付出的努力beginningBodyEndingStep 3-Add（连一连）（连一连）Step 4-Write（写一写）（写一写）以以“The happiest Life”为题为题 1.我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼我现在生活中的快乐和烦恼 2.我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活我想象中最快乐、最幸福的生活 3.我要付出的努力我要付出的努力beginningBodyEnding用词方面用词方面:代词主格代词主格,宾格；宾格；名词单复数；名词单复数；动词搭配；副词位置动词搭配；副词位置 句子方
7、面句子方面:篇章方面篇章方面:细节方面细节方面:句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；句子完整；主谓一致；动词时态；连词使用连词使用内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理内容完整；要点齐全；布局合理 单词拼写；标点符号；大小写单词拼写；标点符号；大小写 Step 5-Check（查一查）（查一查）Appreciating&Evaluating 欣赏与评价欣赏与评价请交换习作互相欣赏，用请交换习作互相欣赏，用红笔红笔划出对方划出对方的亮点的亮点,并对并对 不足的地方进行适当修改。不足的地方进行适当修改。你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作你能给同学什么建议，使得对方的习作更好呢？更好呢？根据根据worksheet上
8、的评分标准，给同伴上的评分标准，给同伴的习作打分。的习作打分。Summary How to write an article about happiness.2.Learn some of the writing skills.连连 写写想想 列列查查Happiness comes from your heart,not from your surroundings.幸福来自于你的内心世界，而不是你周幸福来自于你的内心世界，而不是你周围的事物。围的事物。Rewrite the article.The Happiest Life As a student,life is simple but b
9、oring to me.Every day,Im busy getting ready for my final exam.I have endless work to do and I dont have time for my hobby.Im really tired of such busy days.I always dream about studying in a nice school which has colorful activities for us students to relax.In such a nice school,I can not only learn
10、 knowledge from teachers,but also enjoy all kinds of interesting activates like taking part in summer camps or having barbecue with friends.I also dream about living in a big house with a beautiful garden and a swimming pool with my family in the future.We can often travel around the world.In order
11、to live the happiest life I want,I will work hard and read more books about great mens success.The Happiest Life As we know,both happiness and sadness are part of our life.As for me,studying,playing and sharing something with my friends is happiness.But Im worried about my study because Im lazy.I ho
12、pe I can get along well with my friends and parents.We can share not only happiness but also sadness.Thats my happiest life.And I hope I will pass the final exam in order to study in a good high school.So I must work harder than before.Now,what I need to do is to be kind,active and helpful in my dai
13、ly life.The Happiest Life I am a middle school student.I am very happy because my parents,teachers and friends all love me and they always give me a hand.However,life is not always lucky.As a matter of fact,in order to enter a good high school,I have to spend a lot of time in doing my homework.I hop
14、e I neednt spend so much time on my homework and I can listen to music,watch TV and play with my friends on weekends.Thats my happiest life.Of course,I know if I wish my dream to come true,I must study hard so that I can do more interesting things.Happiness consists in contentment.知足常乐知足常乐.Happy is
15、the man who is living by his hobby.以爱好为生的人是幸福的。以爱好为生的人是幸福的。3.Happiness is form courage.(H.Jackson,British writer)幸福是勇气的一种形式。幸福是勇气的一种形式。(英国作家英国作家 杰克逊杰克逊.H.)4.Happiness lies not in the mere possession of money;it lies in the joy of achievement,in the thrill of creative effort.(Franklin Roosevelt,Ameri
16、can president)幸福不在于拥有金钱，而在于获得成就时的喜悦以及产生创造力幸福不在于拥有金钱，而在于获得成就时的喜悦以及产生创造力的激情。的激情。(美国总统美国总统 罗斯福罗斯福.F.)5.The supreme happiness of life is the conviction that we are loved.(Victor Hugo,French novelist)生活中最大的幸福是坚信有人爱我们。生活中最大的幸福是坚信有人爱我们。(法国小说家法国小说家 雨果雨果.V.)6.A happy heart makes a blooming visage.心中快乐，容光心中快乐，容光焕发。焕发。
