1、话题写作指导话题写作指导A:What chores does he/she do every day?B:He/She every day.do the dishes洗餐具洗餐具fold the clothes叠衣服叠衣服water the plant浇花浇花make the bed整理床铺整理床铺sweep the floor扫地扫地cook dinner做饭做饭take out the rubbish 倒垃圾倒垃圾A:What chores does he/she do every day?B:He/She every day.Do you think children should do
2、 some chores at home?Why or why not?Discuss this with a partner and take notes.Children should do chores becauseChildren should not do chores becauseWrite a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opinion.1.称呼：称呼：对收信人的尊称。对收信人的尊称。Dear+名字。名字。Mr.，Mrs.，Miss+姓或姓与名（不能单独用名字），如：姓或姓与名（不能单独用名字），如：John Smit
3、h的称呼，是的称呼，是Mr.Smith，Mr.John Smith或或 Dear John。称呼后用逗号。称呼后用逗号。2.正文。正文。3.结尾：结尾：发信人对收信人的谦称或敬语。放在信发信人对收信人的谦称或敬语。放在信的右下方。如：的右下方。如：Yours sincerely，Yours，Love，Best wishes等等。等等。4.签名：签名：一般在结尾语的下面一行。一般在结尾语的下面一行。Dear Mr.Know，I want to tell you some problems we meet in English study.First，some of us arent intere
4、sted in English.We thinkstudying English is such a boring thing.And then its sodifficult for us to remember all the words in the texts.So lots of us dont have enough confidence to keep up English study.And we are always afraid to join the group discussion.And we are always afraid to join the group d
5、iscussion.Second,there are so many new words we havent Second,there are so many new words we havent meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.We meet before in the passage.I dont know what to do.We often use wrong words and sentences.often use wrong words and sentences.Can you help us?How ca
6、n we improve our English?Please Can you help us?How can we improve our English?Pleasegive us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to give us some useful advice.Thank you very much.Write to me soon.me soon.basic structure(基本结构的安排基本结构的安排)Yours sincerely，Mary(the beginning)(the ending)the body（
7、正文）（正文）A good passage=Before writingBefore writing：While writingWhile writing：After writingAfter writing：1.Topic1.Topic（主题）（主题）:围绕主题展开内容围绕主题展开内容2.Character2.Character（人称）（人称）:确定使用的人称确定使用的人称3.Form3.Form（体裁）（体裁）:判断使用的文体（信判断使用的文体（信件，演讲稿，记叙文，议论文等）件，演讲稿，记叙文，议论文等）4.Tense4.Tense（时态）（时态）：确定时态，注意动词：确定时态，注意动词
8、的形式，主谓一致的形式，主谓一致审审(search)注意注意 1.使用正确的单词或短语。使用正确的单词或短语。2.做到重点要点不遗漏。做到重点要点不遗漏。3.建立基本段落结构。建立基本段落结构。列列(list)根据关键词用简单的句子列出文章的要点。根据关键词用简单的句子列出文章的要点。1.1.加首尾，使结构完整。加首尾，使结构完整。2.2.可以采取总分总结构。可以采取总分总结构。3.3.开头或结尾的句子应注意使用关键词。开头或结尾的句子应注意使用关键词。连连(connect)方法一方法一:妙用关联词妙用关联词表示并列或递进表示并列或递进:and,as well as,bothand,whats
9、 more and,as well as,bothand,whats more not onlybut also,neithernor not onlybut also,neithernor表示转折表示转折:but,however,althoughthough,after all but,however,althoughthough,after all 表示因果表示因果:because,so,therefore,since,for,as a resultbecause,so,therefore,since,for,as a result表示条件表示条件:if,unlessif,unless表示
10、对比表示对比:instead,on the one handon the other handinstead,on the one handon the other hand表示解释表示解释/例举例举:for example,such as,that is to say for example,such as,that is to say 表示顺序表示顺序:to begin with,firstly,first(of all),to begin with,firstly,first(of all),second(ly),next,since then,from then on,second(l
11、y),next,since then,from then on,finally,in the end finally,in the end表示强调表示强调:besides,especially,in factbesides,especially,in fact表示结论表示结论:all in all,in a word,generally speaking all in all,in a word,generally speaking 方法二方法二:活用多种句型活用多种句型 1.1.我们应该保护环境。我们应该保护环境。A We should protect the environment.B I
12、ts our duty to protect the environment.她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。她还小，搬不动这么重的箱子。方法三方法三:妙用谚语和例子妙用谚语和例子（多用于（多用于“the bodythe body”）美美(beautify)集中注意力于学习集中注意力于学习We should concentrate on our studies.As the saying goes,“No pains,no gains.”We should concentrate on our studies.加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法加入英语俱乐部是学习英语的好方法Joining the
13、English club is a good way to learn English.As the saying goes,“Practice makes perfect.”So joining the English club is a good way to learn English.Enjoy some proverbs2.Think twice before you do.4.Failure is the mother of success.6.Never too old to learn.三思而后行。三思而后行。熟能生巧。熟能生巧。有志者事竟成。有志者事竟成。失败是成功之母。失败
14、是成功之母。活到老，学到老。活到老，学到老。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。青少年应尽我们所能保护环境拯救地球。We teenagers should do what we can to protect the environment and save the earth.For example,we can use cloth bags instead of plastic bags,stop using napkins,plant more trees and save water and energy.在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。在家里，我经常帮助父母亲干家务活。I often
15、 help my parents do housework,such as washing dishes,folding the clothes,taking out the trash and so on.Lets Do it now!/Dont do it again!As students,we should start from ourselves.Dont wait.Join us now!Start to join us now!Dont put it off!Become a volunteer today!How amazing!I cant wait!Save animals
16、!Save Ourselves!Save our planet!It will be great fun!Write a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opinion.Dear Sir or Madam,I think/believe that _.I agree/disagree that _.I think it is fair/unfair for children to_.I think children should/should not _ because _.For example,they should/should no
17、t_ because_.Yours truly,_满分作文标准：满分作文标准：完全完全符合符合题目题目要求要求，观点正确观点正确,要点要点齐全，齐全，立意高。立意高。句式句式多样多样，词汇，词汇丰富丰富。语言。语言准确准确，语意，语意连贯连贯，表达，表达清楚清楚，结构结构合理，具有合理，具有逻辑性逻辑性。卷面卷面书写干净，书写干净，整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合整洁，无涂抹，字迹大小适中，疏密合适，书写美观。标适，书写美观。标 点，大小写正确。点，大小写正确。最好能有一两个最好能有一两个亮点句亮点句。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）。（主从，定从，表从，谚语）规范规范三写三写：大大 小小 写写,
18、拼拼 写写,书书 写Find out the mistakes in the following sentences and correct them.1.I climed slowly and was very tried.2.On a friday afternoon,I went shopping with my mother.climbedtiredFriday3.I will remembered that day forever.Spelling（拼写）（拼写）Capital letter（大小写）（大小写）rememberTense（时态）（时态）4.My grandmother
19、 always tidy up my room.tidiesVerb agreement(主谓一致主谓一致)5.I went to Zigong by a bus with my mother.by busPhrases(短语和固定搭配）短语和固定搭配）近来网络上流行一句话：近来网络上流行一句话：“世界上最远的距世界上最远的距离是我在你的对面，你却在看手机。离是我在你的对面，你却在看手机。”这句话真这句话真实反映了当前的社会现象，实反映了当前的社会现象，“手机控手机控”，“低头低头族族”越来越多且呈年轻化趋势。请你以越来越多且呈年轻化趋势。请你以“My My opinion on using
20、the mobile phone”opinion on using the mobile phone”为题，为题，针对这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。针对这一现象发表个人观点，并提出改进建议。提示词：提示词：a mobile phone freak a mobile phone freak 手机控手机控 要求：要求：1.1.字迹工整、规范；字迹工整、规范；2 28080词左右；词左右；3 3根据所给内容要点及参考词汇，可适根据所给内容要点及参考词汇，可适 当发挥。当发挥。Its your turn!(练练笔练练笔)满分作文赏析满分作文赏析 My opinion on using the
21、mobile phone Mobile phones are widely used these days.More and more people use mobile phones to do different kinds of things,such as chatting and shopping.But they spend too much time on the mobile phones.More and more mobile phone freaks appear.Not only the adults but also the children are members
22、of them.I dont think its normal.Watching mobile phones too much is bad for our eyes.Its also not good for our health.We pay more attention to it,and it influences our study and lives.We have less and less time to communicate with others and we also have little time to exercise.In my opinion,we can do something meaningful instead of playing with the mobile phones all the time.Reading,exercising,visiting friends and communicating with families are also good ways to spend our free time.I hope people can use the mobile phones correctly.
