1、读后续写精讲读后续写精讲A little kindness makes a difference 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。使之构成一个完整的故事。September is most beautiful in Strathroy,where people wholeheartedly enjoy the pleasures of life and nature.Roland was no exception.He was a magnificent German Shepherd,a little lazy and over
2、weight though.He loved to doze in the backyard.He yawned and stretched his body as he heard the slowly approaching footsteps of Mrs.Proudfoot.“Come have your lunch dear!”said Mrs.Proudfoot with her usual fondness for him and he wagged his tail affectionately in return.Roland was licking the last pie
3、ce of meat in his plate when the doorbell burst into music.Mrs.Proudfoot hurried to answer the door.Roland stood alert by her side.“Good noon Mrs.Proudfoot“.It was Sam,her teenage neighbor.“My!My!You look pale!What happened?”asked Mrs.Proudfoot with genuine worry.She immediately waved him in and clo
4、sed the door behind.Mrs.Proudfoot was a lonely widow,but was well loved in her neighborhood especially by kids,though she had no kids to call her own.Once encouraged,Sam disclosed his dilemma.“My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library.It costs 150 dollars,but he has only 55 dollars and his
5、poor parents cant afford to pay the rest.Barry is working part time but thats far from enough.”With a dramatic sigh he continued,“If he didnt refund the loss before the end of term,he will be dismissed from final exams.That will ruin his future!I have to help him,whatever it takes.He is my best frie
6、nd.”“Dont worry,Sammy.You want me to pay”but Mrs.Proudfoot was interrupted.”No,No,Mrs.Proudfoot.This is not what I came here for.Ill work for you.Would you favor me to walk your dog please?For 2 dollars a day.”He looked up with begging eyes.Mrs.Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreement.“That cant be
7、better!Ive been worried about Roland lately.He does need some exercise!Its nice of you to make such an offer.”Sam thanked her over and over,“I will start tomorrow morning.”注意：注意：1 1 所续写短文的词数应为所续写短文的词数应为150150左右。左右。2 2 应应使使用用5 5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3 3 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；续写部分分为两段，每段的开头
8、语已为你写好；4 4 续写完成后，续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph 1:Sam arrived very early the next morning.Paragraph 2:A month later,Mrs.Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.Reading:Analyze the story1 Read for main characters(who)Sam a teenager;Mrs.Proudfoots neighborRoland a m
9、agnificent German ShepherdMrs.Proudfoot a lonely widow2 Read for time and place(when and where)Time:SeptemberPlace:Strathroy3 Read for plotRoland,the shepherd,was having his lunch.Sam came to Mrs.Proudfoot,his face pale.Mrs.Proudfoot waved him in and encouraged him to tell what happened.Sam disclose
10、d his dilemma:his friend Barry lost a rare book of school library costing 150 but had only 55.Mrs.Proudfoot offered to give him the money.Sam interrupted and begged to walk the dog for Mrs.Proudfoot and get paid 2 a day.Mrs.Proudfoot agreed,saying her dog needed some exercise.Sam was grateful and pr
11、omised to start the next day.4 Read for personalities of the characters and important details.Roland:“He was a magnificent German Shepherd,a little lazy and overweight thoughloved to doze in the backyardyawned and stretched his bodyhe wagged his tail affectionately in return.Mrs.Proudfoot hurried to
12、 answer the door.Roland stood alert by her side.a devoted dog;is obedient to Mrs.Proudfootoverweight lazy,doze,yawn,stretch needs exerciseWill it be easy for Sam to walk the dog?How will Sam make Roland obey his instructions?Mrs.Proudfoot:“Come have your lunch dear!”said Mrs.Proudfood with her usual
13、 fondness for him“My!My!You look pale!What happened?”asked Mrs.Proudfoot with genuine worry.She immediately waved him in Mrs.Proudfoot was a lonely widow but well loved in her neighborhood especially by kids,though she had no kids to call her own.Once encouraged,Sam disclosed his dilemma.“Dont worry
14、,Sammy.You want me to pay”Mrs.Proudfoot clapped her hands in agreement,”That cant be better!Ive been worried about Roland lately.He does need some exercise.Its nice of you to make such an offer.”animal-friendly;kind-hearted;warm-hearted;considerate;thoughtful;affectionate;trustworthy;reliableShe nee
15、ds company.Sam:“My friend Barry lost a rare book of school library.It costs 150 dollars,but he has only 55 dollars and his poor parents cant afford to pay the rest.Barry is working part time but thats far from enogh.”With a dramatic sigh he continued,”If he didnt refund the loss before the end of te
16、rm,he will be dismissed from final exams.That will ruin his future!I have to help him,whatever it takes.He is my friend.“Dont worry,Sammy.You want me to pay”but Mrs.Proudfoot was interrupted.“No,No,Mrs.Proudfoot.This is not what I came here for.Ill work for you.Would you favor me to walk your dog pl
17、ease?For 2 dollars a day.”He looked up with begging eyes.a devoted/loyal/faithful friend;considerate;a person of self-esteem and independence5 Read for theme(本文的主题可以从多个角度提炼，本文的主题可以从多个角度提炼，但是但是不管从哪个角度提炼，无论前面情节情感是怎样变化，不管从哪个角度提炼，无论前面情节情感是怎样变化，最最终的主题都应该是积极的正面的。）终的主题都应该是积极的正面的。）1）Helping others is helpin
18、g yourself.2)A kind person will never be lonely.3)Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining.4)Roses given,fragrance in hand.Continue writing:1 1 先把最后一句写好，先把最后一句写好，即：主题句即：主题句Paragraph2:A month later,Mrs.Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.At the end of the sto
19、ryRoland:Sam:Mrs.Proudfoot:fit and energetic,liked exercisegot enough money for his friend Barry to pay for the lost book so that Barrys future wont be ruined.possible development Sam was thankful to Mrs.Proudfoot and offered to continue walking the dog,but for free.delighted to find Roland fit and
20、energetic;got visited every by Sam,not lonely any more.The last sentence:Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining,making the world more beautiful and harmonious.Tips 1 根据对已给故事的分析，根据对已给故事的分析，结合第二段所给段落首句，结合第二段所给段落首句，确定主题，确定主题，写写好主题句，好主题句，然后再围绕主题来展开前面两段落情节的发展。然后再围绕主题来展开前面两段落情节的发展。2
21、 2 把衔接句写好，把衔接句写好，即第一段的最后一句。即第一段的最后一句。Paragraph 1:Sam arrived very early the next morning.Paragraph 2:A month later,Mrs.Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.Possible sentence:With the temptation of the delicious meat,Roland followed Sam eagerly.Day by day,it gradually became a rou
22、tine for both of them./Delightedly,Sam found Roland had gradually become willing and eager to have a walk outside.3.紧接着每段的提示语句写角色的情感或反应。紧接着每段的提示语句写角色的情感或反应。Paragraph 1:Sam arrived very early the next morning.Sam RolandPossible sentence:Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed
23、in to a line,Sam darted towards him,arms widely opened,trying to tempt Roland to stand up and follow him out.main interactionParagraph2:A month later,Mrs Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.Possible sentence:Satisfied with Sams work,she gave him some extra money,saying,”Life is
24、marvelous.Thanks to your help,a fat lazy dog has become strong and energetic.”/Wagging his tail merrily,Roland bounced beside Mrs.Proudfoot,as if ecstatic over her praise./Enjoying the pleasure to roam along the country road with Roland,Sam also harvested a lot from the relaxing time.4 4 把每段的中间补充完整（
25、以把每段的中间补充完整（以action-response)的方法推动中间情节发的方法推动中间情节发展，展，即角色即角色A A的所言，所行，的所言，所行，所感，所想会引起其它角色的反应）所感，所想会引起其它角色的反应）Paragraph1:Sam arrived very early the next morning.Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line,Sam darted towards him,arms widely opened,trying to tempt Roland
26、to stand up and follow him out.Giving him a lazy glimpse,Roland politedly wagged his tail and then turned his head away,falling sound asleep again.(Roland-Sam-Roland)Tip2:一定要反复研读揣摩所提供的段落以及所提供的两个首句，一定要反复研读揣摩所提供的段落以及所提供的两个首句，注重注重对重要细节的理解，对重要细节的理解，分析人物性格，分析人物性格，领会故事发展方向和主题。领会故事发展方向和主题。A possible versio
27、nParagraph1:Sam arrived very early the next morning.Seeing Roland lazily bathed in mild sunshine with eyes narrowed into a line,Sam darted towards him,arms widely opened.Giving him a lazy glimpse,Roland politely wagged his tail and then turned his head away,falling sound asleep again.Desperately bra
28、instorming,Sam got a piece of delicious bone from Mrs.Proudfoot.Lured by the tasty smell,Roland swiftly bounced up and jumped at the bone,following Sam out.In this way,the first day was smoothly finished.Day by day,Sam was delighted to find Roland gradually become willing and eager to have a walk ou
29、tside.Paragraph2:A month later,Mrs.Proudfoot was delighted to find Roland fit and energetic.Enjoying the pleasure to roam along the country road with Roland,Sam also harvested a lot from the relaxing time.Eventually one day,Sam was excited to tell Mrs.Proudfoot,“Barry and I have earned enough money.
30、Thank you,Mrs.Proudfoot!But can I continue walking Roland for you?For free!”Radiantly,Mrs.Proudfoot nodded.Receiving positive answer,Sam was wild with joy and Roland,wagging his tail merrily,as if intoxicated.Sometimes only a little kindness can ignite something shining,making the world more beautif
31、ul and harmonious.Language appreciation and accumulation:dog(from the given story)1 He was a magnificent German Shepherd,a little lazy and overweight though.2 He loved to doze in the backyard.He yawned and stretched his body.3he wagged his tail affectionately in return.4 Roland was licking the last
32、piece of meat in his plate when the doorbell burst into music.Mrs.Proudfoot hurried to answer the door.Roland stood alert by her side.拓展 sniff 嗅嗅 lick 舔舔 trot小跑小跑 dodge 躲闪躲闪 bark 犬吠犬吠 leap跳跃跳跃 zoom急速移动急速移动 rear up 后腿站立后腿站立1 A lean brown dog was sniffing around here and there.When aware of people app
33、roaching,he swiftly leaped sideways and fled,ears back up,bony tail clamped protectively.一条棕黄色的瘦狗在东嗅嗅西嗅嗅，一条棕黄色的瘦狗在东嗅嗅西嗅嗅，意识到有人来了，迅速地跳到一边，耳意识到有人来了，迅速地跳到一边，耳朵后竖，夹着皮包骨头的尾巴跑了。朵后竖，夹着皮包骨头的尾巴跑了。2 Under the hedge glided a great dog,whose black and white colour made him a distinct object against the trees-a lion-like creature with long hair and a huge head.树篱下悄悄地溜出一条大狗，树篱下悄悄地溜出一条大狗，黑白相间的毛色衬着树木，清晰可见黑白相间的毛色衬着树木，清晰可见一头狮一头狮子般的怪物，子般的怪物，长长的毛发，硕大无比的头颅。长长的毛发，硕大无比的头颅。
