1、概括科学家事迹，提炼科学家精神写作任务一阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇100词左右的内容概要。Deng Jiaxian was born in Anhui Province on June 25, 1924. In 1946 he went to Peking, where he was hired as an assistant professor of physics at Peking University. To learn more skills to help build a new China, he passed the Postgraduate Examination for
2、 the United States in 1947, and in 1948, he went to the United States to study and received a doctorate in physics from Purdue University. He returned to China in 1950 and made pioneering contributions to Chinas nuclear (原子核能的) theoretical research.In 1958, together with many other scientists, Deng
3、was assigned (指派) to work on atomic (原子的) bombs. At first, they were prepared to receive training from experts from the Soviet Union. Soon after, however, these experts left. Deng then had to lead a team of 28 members with an average age of 23 to march forward into the mysterious atomic field.As dir
4、ector of the Theoretical Department of the Nuclear Weapon Research Institute and principal of Chinas atomic bomb design, Deng set up an Atom Theory Illiteracy Elimination Class, giving lessons himself and organizing people to translate and study relevant foreign language materials. At the same time,
5、 he never gave up his thinking on the main direction of atomic bomb development. In 1964, China successfully exploded its first atomic bomb.Following the successful test of the atomic bomb, Deng led his team to join the research group led by Yu Min in 1965 and immediately started the design of the h
6、ydrogen (氢) bomb. Within no more than one year, the “Deng-Yu Project” was submitted, which greatly promoted Chinas hydrogen bomb development.Deng was always the first to take risks. Since the first nuclear experiment, he always stood in the front line. In an experiment in 1979, a bomb fell directly
7、down to the ground. Fearing severe aftereffects, he rushed to the spot, took the bomb fragments (碎片) in his hands and examined them carefully. Unfortunately, this led to radiation (辐射) sickness. He continued to work in spite of illness until 1985 when he was unable to avoid being hospitalized.After
8、Deng passed away, his friend, a world-famous physicist, wrote an article in mourning. “Deng Jiaxian was the founder and promoter of Chinas nuclear weapons. He was worthy of his reputation as the founding father of Chinas A-Bomb and H-Bomb.”写作指导本写作任务要求概括“两弹元勋”邓稼先的事迹，属于概要写作。概要写作是“读”和“写”的有机结合，“读”的材料是为了
9、给后面的“写”提供情景，“写”是对所“读”材料的思考和概括。写作步骤概要写作具体分为以下四个步骤。一 认真审题，领悟题意。概要写作是联系读与写的桥梁，认真阅读并深刻理解原文是写好概要的关键。阅读的主要任务是准确把握文章大意，弄清文章的篇章结构和内部的逻辑关系，提取内容要点。二 整理要点，谋篇布局。不同体裁的文章有不同的文体结构特点，抓住了这些结构特点就能比较容易地把握文章的层次和逻辑关系。本文按照时间顺序介绍了“两弹元勋”邓稼先的生平和主要事迹，我们可以抓住其出生、求学及工作、研制原子弹和氢弹、所做贡献和所获荣誉等要点。三 组织语言，充分概括。概要写作的写作过程是建立在阅读原材料的基础之上，需
10、要用自己的语言概括转述原文内容要点，而不是简单复述原文。首先，概要写作有词数限制，因此表达要力求简洁。简化表达的方法可以用短小的同义单词或短语替代原文中的长句，也可以使用概括性的表达代替具体的表达。另外，概要写作应该是一个独立、完整的语篇，要求表达连贯，并能恰当使用过渡词语。四 勘误润色，锦上添花。首先，比照原文，检查是否概括了所有的要点以及观点是否与原文中的完全一致；其次，检查语法使用是否正确、内容是否具有连贯性；最后一步是检查单词拼写和标点符号，因为拼写错误和标点误用也会影响到交际。范文展示One possible version:Deng Jiaxian, the founding fa
11、ther of Chinas A-Bomb and H-Bomb, was born in Anhui Province in 1924.Deng worked as an assistant professor at Peking University before he went to the USA, where he received a doctorate in physics from Purdue University. After returning to China in 1950, Deng got involved in the research and design o
12、f nuclear weapons. Under his leadership, China succeeded in developing the atomic bomb. He also played an important role in the success of Chinas hydrogen bomb.Deng never stopped working until he was sent to hospital due to serious illness in 1985. He devoted all his life to his motherland.写作任务二根据【写
13、作任务一】的阅读文章，用英语提炼“两弹元勋”邓稼先所展现的科学家精神及人格魅力。词数要求：不少于100词。 One possible version:While reading the story of Deng Jiaxian, I was touched by his scientific spirit and personality: patriotism, leadership, courage, determination, selflessness, and devotion.In Paragraph 1, we can know from “To learn more skill
14、s to help build a new China” that Deng loved his mother country deeply and he wanted to make it strong.In Paragraph 2, “Deng then had to lead a team of 28 members with an average age of 23 to march forward into the mysterious atomic field” shows his great leadership and indicates that he was courage
15、ous and confident that they could achieve success even without much experience.In Paragraph 3, “giving lessons himself” and “he never gave up his thinking” show he was determined to make a contribution to our own atomic bomb.In Paragraph 5, “Deng was always the first to take risks”, “he rushed to the spot, took the bomb fragments in his hands” and “He continued to work in spite of illness” prove that Deng was selfless and willing to give his life to the scientific progress of the country.In a word, Deng set a good example to all his followers and students.
