1、Unit 1 Teenager Life（Writing）单 元 写 作 通 道contents目录目录一精准审题，谋篇布局二头脑风暴，遣词造句三斟酌词句，妙笔生花四衔接过渡，斐然成篇一、精准审题，谋篇布局一、精准审题，谋篇布局第一步第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局精准审题，谋篇布局1 1、明确体裁话题、明确体裁话题2 2、确定时态人称、确定时态人称3 3、布局文章框架、布局文章框架4 4、列出核心要点、列出核心要点第一步第一步 精准审题，谋篇布局精准审题，谋篇布局1.1.明确体裁话题明确体裁话题2.2.确定时态人称确定时态人称建议信；如何适应新环境一般现在时；第二人称为主第一步第一步 精准审题，谋
2、篇布局精准审题，谋篇布局3.3.布局文章框架布局文章框架称呼 Dear XXX,（顶格）首段：对收到信进行反馈；安慰对方；想给建议引出后文中段：建议1/2/3+原因/结果尾段：希望我的建议可以帮到你；期待你的来信落款 Yours,（右对齐）XXX4.4.分析题目，列出核心要点分析题目，列出核心要点1.指出问题所在2.提出摆脱困境、适应环境的建议二、头脑风暴，遣词造句二、头脑风暴，遣词造句头脑风暴头脑风暴收信反馈收信反馈分析现状，安慰对方分析现状，安慰对方想给建议，引出后文想给建议，引出后文首段首段不要太担心面临同样的问题进入高中感觉不好不适应高中生活遣词遣词 首段首段1.进入高中2.感觉不好3
3、.适应4.高中生活5.不要太担心6.面临同样的问题1.enter high school 2.feel bad3.get used to/adjust to4.senior high school life5.not worry too much about6.face the same problem头脑风暴头脑风暴 中段中段建议一建议一建议二建议二原因原因方法方法/目的目的结果结果/意义意义放学后邀请同学一起参加活动遇到困难，互相帮助没有朋友/感到孤独不知道如何结交朋友多交新朋友沟通、相互理解丰富知识强壮身体校园生活将变得多姿多彩学习困难生活困难自我调节外界帮助听歌、看电影放松心情制定计划
4、，专注学习同学互帮互助、向老师寻求帮助摆脱困境遣词遣词 中段中段7.邀请8.参加9.活动10.感到孤独11.多交新朋友12.与沟通13.相互理解14.丰富知识7.invite8.take part in/join in/participant in9.activity10.feel lonely11.make more new municate with sb13.understand each other14.enrich knowledge15.强壮身体16.校园生活将变得多姿多彩17.处于困境18.互相帮助19.听歌20.看电影21.制定好的日程安排22.专注学习23.向寻求帮助15.b
5、uild up body16.school life will become colorful17.in trouble18.help each other19.listen to the music20.watch movie/film21.make a good schedule22.focus/concetrate on studying23.ask sb for help遣词遣词 中段中段头脑风暴，遣词造句头脑风暴，遣词造句给出祝愿给出祝愿期待你的回信期待你的回信尾段尾段希望建议有用希望建议适合你希望适应校园生活、结交许多好朋友Looking forward to your early
6、 reply.遣词遣词 尾段尾段24.建议25.有用的26.对合适27.期待你的早日回信。24.suggestion/advice25.useful26.be suitable for sb27.Looking forward to your early reply.三、斟酌词句，妙笔生花三、斟酌词句，妙笔生花斟酌词句斟酌词句1.你进入高中后情绪低落。2.在适应高中生活上有困难。3.你的同学们也面临着同样的问题。4.你不必太担心。(主谓状)5.尽力邀请你的同学们一起参加一些活动。6.这些活动有助于你们相互理解。7.课外活动让我们丰富知识、强壮身体成为可能。（make it+adj./n.+to
7、 do sth 句式）8.帮助有困难的同学。9.你应该向老师寻求帮助。10.你应该制定好的日程安排，专注于提高自己的学习。11.我希望我的建议将对你适用。斟酌词句斟酌词句1.你进入高中后情绪低落。You feel bad after entering high school.2.你在适应高中生活上有困难。You are having trouble(in)adjusting to your senior high school life.3.你的同学们也面临着同样的问题。Your classmates are also facing the same problem.4.你不必太担心。(主谓状
8、)You dont have to worry too much about it.斟酌词句斟酌词句5.尽力邀请你的同学们一起参加一些活动。Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together.6.这些活动有助于你们相互理解。These activities will help you understand each other.7.课外活动让我们丰富知识、强壮身体成为可能。（make it+adj./n.+to do sth 句式）Extra-curricular activities make it p
9、ossibile for us to enrich our knowledge and bulid up our body.斟酌词句斟酌词句8.帮助有困难的同学。Help students who are in trouble.9.你应该向老师寻求帮助。You should ask teachers for help.10.你应该制定好的日程安排，专注于提高自己的学习。You should make a good schedule and focus/concentrate on improving study.11.我希望我的建议将对你适用/有用。I do hope you will fin
10、d my suggestions useful.I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you.妙笔生花妙笔生花 句子升级句子升级1.用因果结构合并Your classmates are also facing the same problem.和You dont have to worry too much about it.2.用定语从句合并Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together.和These activities will help you
11、understand each other.1.用因果结构合并Your classmates are also facing the same problem.和You dont have to worry too much about it.Your classmates are also facing the same problem,so you dont have to worry too much about it.妙笔生花妙笔生花 句子升级句子升级2.用定语从句合并Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activiti
12、es together.和These activities will help you understand each other.Try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together,which will help you understand each other.妙笔生花妙笔生花 句子升级句子升级四、衔接过渡、斐然成篇四、衔接过渡、斐然成篇衔接过渡衔接过渡 建议万能句建议万能句1.I advise/suggest/recommend that you（should）do 我建议你应该做2.In my
13、opinion,it would be wise to do sth 在我看来，做是明智的3.If I were you,I would+建议 如果我是你，我将会4.It would be a good idea to do sth 做将是一个好想法衔接过渡衔接过渡 文章衔接词文章衔接词首段首段中段中段Im glad to hear that 很高兴听到的消息Im sorry to hear that 很抱歉听到的消息Here are some suggestions for you.这里有一些建议给你。首先/第一：Firstly，First of all其次/然后/并且：In additio
14、n，Whats more,，Moreover,，Besides,，And最后：Last but not least,(最后但是也是很重要的是)Finally，At last,衔接过渡衔接过渡 文章衔接词文章衔接词尾段尾段逻辑词逻辑词观点词观点词总而言之：In a word,All in all,General speaking期待你的早日来信：Looking forward to your early reply.Therefore 因此，However然而/但是，On the contrary,相反的是，As a result,结果，In my opinion；From my point o
15、f view 在我看来As far as I know 据我所知As far as I am conceded就我而言 斐然成篇斐然成篇(请摹写背诵请摹写背诵)Dear Jenny,I am sorry to hear you feel bad after entering high school.As far as I know,your classmates are also facing the same problem,so you dont have to worry too much about it.Here are some suggestions to help you.斐然
16、成篇斐然成篇(请摹写背诵请摹写背诵)First,try to invite your classmates to take part in some activities together,which will help you understand each other better by communicating with them.In this way you wont feel lonely and your school life will become colorful and interesting.Besides,help students who are in troub
17、le.Moreover,communicating with teachers maybe a good idea when you get troubled.Last but not least,I recommend that you should make a good schedule and focus on studying.斐然成篇斐然成篇(请摹写背诵请摹写背诵)I do hope you will find my suggestions useful.（or I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you.）Looking forw
18、ard to your early reply.Yours sincerely,Li Hua 五、仿写作文五、仿写作文假定你是李华，你的表妹Alice去市区的一所高中学校上学。由于离家很远，她很不适应离开父母后的生活，于是向你写信求助。请你给她回一封信，内容包括：1给与安慰；2分析现状；3提出建议。注意：1写作词数应为80左右；2请按如下格式作答。Dear Alice，_Yours，Li Hua Dear Alice，I am so sorry to hear that you have some trouble in your new life.It is natural for us to
19、 miss our parents the first time we leave home.However,we cannot live with our parents forever because of further education,employment or something else.I believe you must realise that present separation will not only help your study but also improve your personal ability.You can make new friends in your school and share ideas with your classmates who are physically closest to you now.I also suggest you enjoy yourself by taking an active part in different kinds of activities in school.You will get much pleasure from it.Wish you happy every day!Yours,Li HuaThank you！（Reading and Thinking）
