1、短文改错1.I hold my lunch-box in my hand when I was going to school.The smell from it was very good.3.Katia,like many other Russian girls,are nice and lively.2.It was a wonderful surprise as nothing like that had ever been happened to us.WARM-UP3.再读全文,复核审查2.细读全文，仔细斟酌1.通读全文，把握大意三大步骤Last term,I went to Am
2、erica for a student exchange programme.Before go,I was quite proud in my English.But everyone in America spoke so fast that I couldnt make out that what they were saying.Being in completely different culture was frightened and I even wanted to go straight back home.However,thing soon got better and
3、better.The host family was very kind.Fortunately,the boy that I stay with was crazy about football,that made my stay enjoyable.Beside,being an exchange student offered me a chance improve my English.第一步：快速通读全文，第一步：快速通读全文，get get 文章大意文章大意Lead-inLead-inWhat is it about?1.I was at the Shanghai Railway
4、Station buy a ticket to Hangzhou.2.It is one of the funniest things finding on the Internet so far this year.3.Li Meng came see me every day.这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有_、_和_错误。不定式过去分词现在分词1.Mary did his best to make me feel at home.2.Just at that time I woke up and found me still in bed!3.He found difficult to
5、 learn math well.(一）人称代词要一致(性/数/格)(二）反身代词(三)不定代词误用(someone,something,anyone,anything等)(四)it作形主、形宾或指代时有无缺漏(make,find,think)2.代 词 格，细 领 悟1.名词单、复数形式误用2.注意可数名词与不可数名词1.so that Ill get good marks in all my subject.2.He collected some informations about computers.progress,furniture,equipment,fun,news,infor
6、mation,advice 1.He asked angry if we had finished the work.2.I got to the finishing line first.I won the race.I felt very proudly of myself.3.His father looks much more happier today.1.修饰名词，be动词，系动词要用形容词。2.修饰动词，形容词，整个句子用副词。3.比较级和最高级的使用。连词but，and，or和so的用法错误冠词 a,an,the 误用或混用1.We may be one family and
7、live under a same roof.2.The food was expensive and the service was good as the whole 整体来看 late on 以后，他日 in hurry 匆忙地 in Sunday afternoon in this weekend such many people 多词、少词和搭配错误。全国卷Having tea in the afternoon provides a bridge between lunch and dinner,that might not be served until 8 oclock at n
8、ight.与句子的上、下文不一致，甚至相矛盾，属于逻辑性错误.The angel touched his eyes,but he could see everything clearly.8.逻辑错误需关注Last term,I went to America for a student exchange programme.Before go,I was quite proud in my English.But everyone in America spoke so fast that I couldnt make out that what they were saying.Being
9、 in completely different culture was frightened and I even wanted to go straight back home.However,thing soon got better and better.The host family was very kind.Fortunately,the boy that I stay with was crazy about football,that made my stay enjoyable.Beside,being an exchange student offered me a ch
10、ance improve my English.根据所学方法，找出错误并改正。Practice：Last week I got the first prize in the English Speech Contest hold in our school.That made me very excited.I used to be too shy to speak English in the public.It was Susan who asked me practice several times in her office and correct my pronunciation a
11、nd intonation.Beside,she encouraged me to be confident and brave whether I wanted to show my talent before others.I followed her advices.That was why I won the first prize.I am deep moved by what he has done for me.I owe her a thousand thanks with her kindness.Practice:I should be very pleasant if y
12、ou could come to my home and stay with us for a few days on the summer holidays.My native village is much beautiful.I can imagine the time when we are going to spend together.Every morning we shall take a walk in the neighbouring hills,where we can enjoy the fresh air and sweet songs singing by the
13、birds.In the afternoon,we shall go for swim in the river.At night we shall sit in the yard,observed the star in the sky.Please let me to know what you think about the plan,but I do look forward to your coming to my home.课堂回顾：（学生进行）课堂回顾：（学生进行）Life is like a rollercoaster.You can scream every time you
14、 hit a bump,or you can throw your hands up and enjoy the ride.生活就像过山车。你可以在每次颠簸的时候尖叫，生活就像过山车。你可以在每次颠簸的时候尖叫，你也可以高举双手享受整个过程。你也可以高举双手享受整个过程。Thanks for your listening1.1.史铁生虽然自身残疾史铁生虽然自身残疾,可是对生活的热爱却无时不流露于笔端。如果没有爱可是对生活的热爱却无时不流露于笔端。如果没有爱,他不会发现地坛的内在他不会发现地坛的内在;2.2.如果没有博爱如果没有博爱,他就无法观察数年来地坛的变迁他就无法观察数年来地坛的变迁,以及
15、每一位进出地坛的人的特点以及每一位进出地坛的人的特点,只有对生活充满热爱只有对生活充满热爱,情感升华到博爱的人情感升华到博爱的人,才能那么细致地观察一切才能那么细致地观察一切,精心地记载一切精心地记载一切,用美丽的文字描述一切用美丽的文字描述一切;3.3.只有心底有爱的人只有心底有爱的人,才能感悟出人生的意义才能感悟出人生的意义,从痛苦境地爬过从痛苦境地爬过,走向光明走向光明;只有心底有爱的人只有心底有爱的人,他才会如此懂得感恩他才会如此懂得感恩,知道忏悔知道忏悔,才能勇敢面对自己年轻时犯下的错才能勇敢面对自己年轻时犯下的错,才能把一切写出来才能把一切写出来,让世人得到教育与启迪。让世人得到教
16、育与启迪。4.4.人的一生会遇到很多事很多人人的一生会遇到很多事很多人,不可能事事称心不可能事事称心,处处如意处处如意,需要我们坚强需要我们坚强,需要我们都有一颗平常心需要我们都有一颗平常心,一种平和的心态一种平和的心态,学会面对学会面对,懂得感恩。懂得感恩。5.5.记得有句禅语道记得有句禅语道，当你抱怨自己的鞋不好时当你抱怨自己的鞋不好时,却发现有人竟没有脚。所以却发现有人竟没有脚。所以,不管你是谁不管你是谁,不管你在做什么不管你在做什么,都有存在的理由都有存在的理由,都要尽心尽力地去付出都要尽心尽力地去付出,这样才可以拥有无怨无悔的快乐人生这样才可以拥有无怨无悔的快乐人生6.6.作者曾这样
17、解释自己的名字作者曾这样解释自己的名字-心血倾注过的地方不容丢弃心血倾注过的地方不容丢弃,我常常觉得这是我的姓名的昭示我常常觉得这是我的姓名的昭示,让历史铁一样地生着让历史铁一样地生着,以便不断地去看它以便不断地去看它,不是不断地去看这些文字不是不断地去看这些文字,而是借助这些蹒跚的脚印不断看那一向都在写作着的灵魂而是借助这些蹒跚的脚印不断看那一向都在写作着的灵魂,看这灵魂的可能与去向。这也可以看作是对他作品的最好的诠释。看这灵魂的可能与去向。这也可以看作是对他作品的最好的诠释。7.7.因为这个故事体现了中华民族的优良传统因为这个故事体现了中华民族的优良传统,是地坛成就了一位卓越的作家是地坛成
18、就了一位卓越的作家,在他身上体现了我们这个民族的自强不息的精神在他身上体现了我们这个民族的自强不息的精神;也是地坛成就了一位伟大的中国母亲也是地坛成就了一位伟大的中国母亲,她身上散发着母爱的光芒。她身上散发着母爱的光芒。8.8.不会讲述。史铁生的故事只是我们生活中的一个个例不会讲述。史铁生的故事只是我们生活中的一个个例,与地坛传统的文化风格不相符合与地坛传统的文化风格不相符合,参观地坛的人参观地坛的人,大多只是想了解中国丰厚的文化底蕴和历史知识大多只是想了解中国丰厚的文化底蕴和历史知识,讲史铁生的故事与地坛本身所代表的旅游文化出入太大。讲史铁生的故事与地坛本身所代表的旅游文化出入太大。9.9.
19、会讲述会讲述,但不会讲得太多。毕竟史铁生的故事与地坛本身的文化、历史结合不太大但不会讲得太多。毕竟史铁生的故事与地坛本身的文化、历史结合不太大,只是借史铁生的故事提高一下地坛的知名度只是借史铁生的故事提高一下地坛的知名度,并借此表现自己知识的丰富并借此表现自己知识的丰富,以引起游客的兴趣以引起游客的兴趣,使自己的导游工作做得更好。使自己的导游工作做得更好。10.10.散文中的物象散文中的物象,就是倾注了作者的思想与主观情感的生动鲜明的形象就是倾注了作者的思想与主观情感的生动鲜明的形象,它是作者抒怀言志的凭借与依据它是作者抒怀言志的凭借与依据,命题者常常从散文的物象入手设题命题者常常从散文的物象入手设题,常见的提问方式有联系全文常见的提问方式有联系全文,指出某物象的含义和它在结构上的作用。指出某物象的含义和它在结构上的作用。
