1、高考英语写作新题型备考技巧高考英语写作新题型备考技巧 非谓语+写作易错词 不言而喻，非谓语在英语语法中有举足轻重的作用。非谓语有很多形式，如：doing, done, to do, having done, being done, to be doing, to be done, to have done 等。 它们在句中可以做主语、 宾语、 表语、 状语、定语等；做状语时可以表示伴随、原因、目的、结果、条件、时间、让步等功能。一篇好的书面 表达， 过多的简单句会使得句与句之间的关系松散和单调； 过多的复杂句也会使整篇文章显得累赘不堪。 所以考生要学会使用非谓语动词，不仅会使句子形式多样，也会
2、使得文章读起来结构紧凑，言简意赅。 特别注意的是，非谓语是文章概写和故事续写一个很重要的写作技巧，一定要多加练习。特别注意的是，非谓语是文章概写和故事续写一个很重要的写作技巧，一定要多加练习。 一一 运用非谓语动词转换简单句运用非谓语动词转换简单句 利用非谓语可以使用以下方法把有关联的简单句变得高级和地道。 1. 写出两个相关联的简单句； 2. 找准两个简单句的对接点，把其中一个句子变为主干即主句，另外一个句子用非谓语动词进行 改写，确定好其在整个主句中的成分是主语还是其它成分； 3. 在非谓语的选择上，还要考虑非谓语动词的时态和语态。 例：. I long to improve myself
3、 by reading some books. . The books were written in the Tang Dynasty. 写出两个简单句后，可以确定第一句为主句，第二句为非谓语。 由于第二句的 write 和主语 the books 是被动关系，所以用过去分词 done 做定语。 I long to improve myself by reading some books written in the Tang Dynasty. (2017 全国一卷书面 表达) 尝试把以下几个句子转变成非谓语。 . Every one you will be welcome to take
4、part in it. You can enjoy the movie, have a heated discussion afterwards and give your comments. Every one of you will be welcome to take part in it, enjoying the movie, having a heated discussion afterwards and giving your comments.(2018 全国二卷书面表达) . Mount Tai stands in Shandong Province. It has lon
5、g been a popular tourist spot. Many Chinese legendary stories are attached to it. Standing in Shandong Province, Mount Tai has long been a popular tourist spot, with many Chinese 备考技巧 1 legendary stories attached to it. (2017 北京高考书面表达) . In the newspaper of our school there is a column and it is cal
6、led Foreign Culture. It aims to introduce American customs and the life of high school students. In the newspaper of our school there is a column called Foreign Culture, aiming to introduce American customs and the life of high school students. (2015 全国一卷书面表达) 二二 运用非谓语动词转换复合句运用非谓语动词转换复合句 在复合句当中，我们只需
7、要找出主句，把剩下的从句变成非谓语即可。这时，我们也需要判断 非谓语做什么成分，并把握好非谓语动词的时态和语态。 例：Since you have realized that your time is limited, youll have to study for your goals without anger or hesitation. 把 since 引导的原因状语从句转换成非谓语动词，realize 和 you 之间为主动关系，且表示完成 时，所以用现在分词的完成时做状语。即： Having realized that your time is limited, youll hav
8、e to study for your goals without anger or hesitation. (2014 安徽高考书面表达) 尝试把以下几个复合句转变成非谓语。 . After I heard your lecture, I was clear how western music influenced the UK and how it would develop in the future. Having heard your lecture, I was clear how western music influenced the UK and how it would d
9、evelop in the future.(2019 天津高考书面表达) . Although she was tired and exhausted, she managed to make a flag with yellow blouse. Tired and exhausted, she managed to make a flag with her yellow blouse. (2016 浙江高考书面 表达) . Because I thought that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem
10、and tried to work it out in a different way. Thinking that his solution might be wrong, I carefully analyzed the problem and tried to work it out in a different way. (2015 湖南高考书面表达) 考生在书面表达中运用非谓语的时候需要注意非谓语动词形式和语态的选择；另外也需要注 意非谓语动词的逻辑主语一般要和主句的主语需要保持一致。 三三 非谓语动词常用的写作句型非谓语动词常用的写作句型 1. remain to be done
11、Many questions have to be settled and much remains to be done in our educational work. 2. what/how/where/why 等疑问词等疑问词+ to do We debated over what to put into the video. (2017 北京高考书面表达) Last Tuesday, our class invited an old craftsman to teach us how to make dough figures. (2015 北京高考书面表达) 3. 连词连词 whe
12、n/while/once/unless/although+ doing/done While working, I realized how hard it was to work in the fields under a hot sun. (2019 北京高考 书面表达) 4. be easy/difficult/challengingto do In some experts opinion, living conditions on Mars are difficult to tolerate. 5. prefer to dorather than do/would rather do
13、than do/ would dorather than do. Nowadays some teenagers prefer to chat with strangers online rather than talk with their parents face to face. 6. having done Having spent nearly all our money, we couldnt afford to stay at a hotel. 7. , doing The wolf noticed them and turned its head back, shouting
14、loudly at Paul and Becky.(2017 浙江 高考书面表达) Jane jumped to her feet, waving her handmade flag and crying for help. (2016 浙江高考书面表 达) 8. , done/done, . Absorbed in every move of mine, the foreign students were once amazed by this unique culture. (2018 北京高考书面表达) 9. only to do Whats worse, I found myself
15、having a fever this morning and I went to the clinic for immediate treatment, only to be advised to stay in bed for three days. 10. judging from/by Judging from the expression on her face, she must have news of great excitement to tell us. 11. compared to/with Compared to the traditional shoes, they
16、 have three unique functions. (2014 湖南高考书面表达) 12. be said/reported/believed/consideredto do A bus full of passengers was reported to have gone out of control on a highway south of the city. 13. with +宾语宾语+ 宾语补足语宾语补足语, 独立主格独立主格结构结构 With the stadium set up, a wide range of sports events can be held, o
17、f which ping-Pong, football as well as running competitions enjoy great popularity. (2018 全国三卷书面表达) In the picture, a boy in worn clothes sits beside a shabby wooden table with a pile of bamboo books on it. (2015 福建高考书面表达) 14. Whoeverneeds to/should/will/is. 任何任何 的人都需要的人都需要/应该应该/会会 Whoever signs up
18、for the competition will have to register firstly. 提升训练提升训练 一 选择合适的非谓语动词形式改写下列句子。注意非谓语的时态和语态。 1. He had won the game. All of them sang and danced all night. _ 2. When the medicine is taken on time, the medicine is effective. _ 3. The little is dressed in red. She looked pretty. _ 4. The flowers smel
19、led nice. They attracted many visitors. _ 5. All those came to the party last night. They are my friends. _ 6. The money was needed for the sick child. It was soon collected. _ 7. The young man is talking with the children. He is a famous singer. _ 8. He was known as a famous expert. He received man
20、y invitations. _ 备考技巧 2 9. If we are given a little more time, we will do better. _ 10. I didnt know what to do. I had to ask my parents for advice. _ 11. He had failed in the exam. He didnt play computer games any more. _ 12. Because I havent finished my work, I have to stay at home. _ 13. There wa
21、s no bus. So he had to walk home. _ 14. If time permits, I will go shopping this afternoon. _ 15. He cried suddenly. Tears rolled down his cheeks. _ 16. All the people here like the novel. It is written by Tom. _ _ 17. The boy came to school late again. This made the teacher very furious. _ _ 18. Th
22、e students were making the most of time. They wanted to finish the work earlier. _ _ 19. If it is carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. _ _ 20. When we are faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us comfort and help. _ _ 21. Wh
23、en I know that our library is going to buy some books, Id like to give you some suggestions. _ _ 22. After we had practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner. _ _ 23. If time permits, well watch a film there, which is surely about the history of Yendang M
24、ountain. _ _ 24. We can set out early so that well have more time to read and select books. _ _ 25. Because I learn about your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking university, one of the best universities in China. _ _ 题目一 【答案】1. Having won the game, all of them sang and
25、danced all night. 2. When taken on time, the medicine is effective. 3. Dressed in red, she looked pretty. 4. The flower smelling nice attracted many visitors. 5. All those coming to the party last night are my friends. 6.The money needed for the sick child was soon collected. 7. The young man talkin
26、g with the children is a famous singer. 8. Known as a famous expert, he received many invitations. 9. (If) given a little more time, we will do better. 10. Not knowing what to do, I had to ask my parents for advice. 11. Having failed in the exam, he didnt play computer games any more. 12. Not havent
27、 finished my work, I have to stay at home. 13. There being no bus, he had to walk home. 14. Time permitting, I will go shopping this afternoon. 15. He cried suddenly, (with) tears rolling down his cheeks. 16. All the people here like the novel written by Tom. 17. The boys coming to school late again
28、 made the teacher very furious. 18. The students were making the most of time (so as/in order) to finish the work earlier. 19. (If) carried out continuously, it will benefit all of us greatly and we are sure to make obvious progress. 20. (When) faced with difficulties, we need friends to give us com
29、fort and help. 21. Knowing that our library is going to buy some books, Id like to give you some suggestions. 22. Having practiced playing basketball for almost two months, we strongly desired to be the winner. 23. Time permitting, well watch a film there, which is surely about the history of Yendan
30、g Mountain. 24. We can set out early (so as) to have more time to read and select books. 25. Learning about your keen interest in Chinese culture, I suggest you apply for Peking university, one of the best universities in China. 二 用非谓语动词翻译下列句子。 1. 在写这本书时，由于亲自品尝过一些不知名的植物，李时珍遭受了很多折磨。 _ _ 2. 回顾过去的两周，我们
31、情不自禁地想起了我们课堂上进行的那些激烈的讨论。 _ _ 3. 他所有的注意力都集中到那本书上，我进来时他都没有注意到。 _ _ 4. 我很熟悉我的城市，所有我有责任告诉在出口的乘客怎么到达他们的目的地。 _ _ 5. 随着社会快速发展，我们很有必要掌握好英语和电脑。 _ _ 6. 由于我对那件事感到抱歉，所以我开始思考能做点什么来发挥作用。 _ _ 7. 我非常荣幸在这里与你们分享我关于高中学习方面的观点。 _ _ 题目二 【答案】1. While writing the book, Li Shizhen suffered a lot from tasting unknown plants
32、on his own. 2. Looking back on the past two weeks, we cant help thinking of the heated discussions we had in class. 3. With all his attention fixed on the book, he didnt notice when I came in. 4. Knowing my city well, I will have the responsibility to tell the passengers at the exit how to get to th
33、eir destinations. 5. With the society developing rapidly, its essential for us to have a good knowledge of English and computer. 6. Feeling quite sorry for that, I begin to think about what to do to help. 7. Its my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school
34、. 三 阅读下面短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。请尝试用非谓语动词。 One day, my brother and I were alone in our apartment. The reason was that my parents had both gone for a ball party and had left me in charge of everything. I was doing my homework while my younger brother was watching TV. All of a sudden, the doorbell r
35、ang. Ding-Dong! Ding-Dong! My younger brother had rushed to the door before I decided to answer the door. We both thought that our parents had come home. As a result, he unlocked the door and opened it. Outside of the house stood a man who wore a black raincoat and black rubber boots. He looked no d
36、ifferent from other people and he said that he was a salesman and asked politely if our mother or father was at home so he could talk with them. Without any thinking, my brother said, No. He asked if we would like to buy some comic books, which he was selling. I quickly explained to him that we were
37、 not supposed to buy anything without our parents permission. However, it seemed that he was not willing to follow my advice and he had an intention to enter our house. Then, I realized something terrible would happen. As I was about to close the door, he forced his way into our house. He took out a
38、 knife and forced me to tie up my brothers hands with some rope which he took out from his pocket. I tied up his hands but I tied it in a special way so my brother could untie himself as we often did. The man then tied my hands up and locked both of us in the kitchen. Soon, he went upstairs to searc
39、h the bedroom for something valuable. I managed to teach my brother to untie the rope on his hands. He then untied me. I rushed to the telephone to call the police, but line was dead. 注意: 1. 所续写短文的词数应为 150 左右; 2. 至少使用 5 个短文中标有下划线的关键词语: 3. 续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好; 4. 续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。 Paragraph 1 : The doors were all locked from the outside and whats more, I did not have the keys. _
