1、Non-finite Verbs in writing非非谓语动词谓语动词在写作中的在写作中的应应用用非谓语不定式(不定式(to do)V-ingV-edas a nounas adj.or adv.现在分词现在分词动名词动名词过去分词过去分词非谓语动词非谓语动词 的分类的分类 1 While she was getting me 34 (settle)into a tiny but clean room,the head of the village was tying up his horse to 2 For example,the proverb,“plucking up a crop
2、 32 (help)it grow”,is based on the following story.3 He spat it out,37 (say)it was awful.4 I got on the bus and found a seat near the back,and then I noticed a man 18 (sit)at the front.高考链接高考链接settled宾补宾补 to help目的目的saying伴随状语伴随状语sitting宾补宾补 5 there was only a very small amount of unfairness in the
3、world,but everyone added a little,always 25 (think)that it was only small and not very important。6 Football is played in more than 80 countries,(make)it the most popular sport around the world.thinking伴随状语伴随状语makingVing 结果状语结果状语找出非谓语动词,并判断成分找出非谓语动词,并判断成分 1.Smoking is not allowed in the meeting room.
4、2.To play football is very interesting for those kids.3.The cover of a book entitled Wizard caught my attention.4.Who is the man shaking hands with our teacher?v-ing作主语作主语不定式作主语不定式作主语V-ed作后置定语作后置定语V-ingV-ing作后置定语作后置定语 5.Scolded by her mother,the little girl sat there without lifting her head.6.More
5、and more people drive cars to work,placing much pressure on the traffic.7.Li Na has won the French Open,becoming the first Asian to win a Grand Slam.8.To help my disabled aunt,I spend an hour working in her house every day.过去分词作状语过去分词作状语V-ing作结果状语作结果状语V-ing作伴随状语作伴随状语不定式作目的状语不定式作目的状语写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非
6、谓语动词常见的错误1、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致、状语动作行为者与主句主语不一致1.Seeing from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.Seen from the top of mountain,the city is beautiful.Correction写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误2、用、用V.ing短语充当主语、表语和宾语短语充当主语、表语和宾语2.In my opinion,climb mountain is an enjoyable thing.In my opinion,climbing moun
7、tain is an enjoyable thing.写作中非谓语动词常见的错误写作中非谓语动词常见的错误3、主动、被动含义混淆、主动、被动含义混淆3.Which team is good at cooking?A team calling the supper cook.A team called the supper cook.1.因为因为在这国家又没有朋友在这国家又没有朋友,她觉得要想,她觉得要想找到工作是不可能的。找到工作是不可能的。用连词用连词becauseBecause she has no friend in the country,she found it impossible
8、 to find a job.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构Having no friend in the country,she found it impossible to find a job.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子2.这本这本用简易英语写成的用简易英语写成的书很容易读懂书很容易读懂用定语从句用定语从句 The book,is easy to understand.用非谓语结构用非谓语结构 The book,is easy to understand用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子which was written in simple Engl
9、ish,written in simple English,3.Moyan stood there and was surrounded by many reporters.Moyan stood there surrounded by many reporters.用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 It is high time we took part in some activities.We want to make ourselves more healthy.It is high time we took part in some activities to m
10、ake ourselves more healthy.4.用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构合并下列句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子用非谓语结构改写和美化句子 2009 2010 2011非谓语动词在基础写作中的实际运用(2014)人 物:英国人查理德阿维斯(Richard Avis)出生日期:1974年12月1日 目 的:理解不同文化中成功人生的含义 时 间:2011年开始在世界各地寻找同年同月同日生的人Step1:拆分成几个简单句:拆分成几个简单句(中文中文)Step2:分别翻译这几个简单句:分别翻译这几个简单句1 Richard Avis was born on December 1,1
11、974.2 He aims at understanding what a successful life means in different cultures.3 He has been looking for time twins around the world since 2011.1 Richard Avis was born on December 1,1974.2 He aims at understanding what a successful life means in different cultures.3 He has been looking for time t
12、wins around the world since 2011.Step3:合并句子:合并句子Sentence1:Born on December 1,1974,Richard Avis has been looking for time twins around the world since 2011,aiming at understanding what a successful life means in different cultures.2009广东高考基础写作:广东高考基础写作:你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是你是校报小记者,最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采访的情
13、况这次采访的情况:时间时间:上周末上周末 对象对象:眼科医生(眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授)王教授 主题主题:我国中小学生近视(我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题问题 基本信息基本信息:(1)发生率)发生率:略高于略高于50 (2)人数)人数:世界第一世界第一 1.Slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted.2.It ranks the first in the world.Step1:拆分成两个简单句:拆分成两个简单句(中文中文)Step2:分
14、别翻译这两个简单句:分别翻译这两个简单句1.略高于略高于50的中国学生患有近视的中国学生患有近视2.这在世界排名第一这在世界排名第一合并句子合并句子slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted and it ranks the first in the world.2 非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted,Which ranks
15、the first in the world.slightly more than half of the school children in our country are short-sighted,ranking the first in the world.3 非谓语非谓语1 并列句并列句2.2010广东高考基础写作:广东高考基础写作:受二手烟影响人数:约受二手烟影响人数:约5.4亿亿 因二手烟死忙人数:超过因二手烟死忙人数:超过10万万/年年1.Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke2.it cause
16、s 100,000 deaths a year.Step1:拆分成两个简单句:拆分成两个简单句(中文中文)Step2:分别翻译这两个简单句:分别翻译这两个简单句1.并列句并列句 Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke and it causes 100,000 deaths a year.合并句子合并句子(并列句并列句,非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句,非谓语非谓语2.非限制性定语从句非限制性定语从句 Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smo
17、ke,which causes 100,000 deaths a year.3.非谓语非谓语 Around 540 million people are affected by second-hand smoke,causing 100,000 deaths a year.(2013)志愿者观点志愿者观点 厌倦地球生活,想体验火星生活厌倦地球生活,想体验火星生活 1)because原因状语从句原因状语从句 Because the volunteers get tired of living on the earth,they have been looking forward to exper
18、iencing the life on the Mars 2)非谓语 Getting tired of living on the earth,the volunteers have been looking forward to experiencing the life on the Mars.Conclusion:基础写作中,常用分词短语作基础写作中,常用分词短语作定语定语或者或者结结果、伴随状语果、伴随状语。Nowadays,some students often cheat in exams.It is popular among students who are lazy and
19、dont work hard at their lessons.They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Also,some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Homework Nowadays,some students often cheat i
20、n exams.It is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.Nowadays,cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章They cheat for they want to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.The
21、y cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Also,some students who work hard at their lessons will cheat in exams because they are afraid of failing in exams.Being afraid of failing in exams,some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat
22、in exams用非谓语结构美化文章用非谓语结构美化文章Nowadays,cheating in exams is popular among students who are lazy and dont work hard at their lessons.They cheat to get higher marks so that they can be praised or even admired.Being afraid of failing in exams,some students who work hard at their lessons will also cheat in exams.用非谓语结构美化后的文章用非谓语结构美化后的文章二二.使用使用非谓语动词非谓语动词使句子简洁高档使句子简洁高档三三.巧用巧用倒装倒装增强句子表现力增强句子表现力四四.尝试多尝试多 样化表达方样化表达方式式一一.使用较使用较高级词汇高级词汇使文章增加吸引力使文章增加吸引力强调句强调句With短语复合结构短语复合结构定语从句定语从句名词性从句名词性从句(主宾表同从句主宾表同从句)各种状语从句各种状语从句被动语态被动语态