1、教学目标：教学目标：亲爱的同学们亲爱的同学们，通过这节课的学习，你们将能：通过这节课的学习，你们将能：掌握以旅行为话题的日记的写作技巧。掌握以旅行为话题的日记的写作技巧。1.学会根据该文体进行审题，谋篇及润色；学会根据该文体进行审题，谋篇及润色；2.学会使用常用的连接词和过渡句学会使用常用的连接词和过渡句,增强文章的连贯性；增强文章的连贯性；3.知道如何在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲。知道如何在有限的时间内快速构思、罗列提纲。Go for it Grade 8AUnit 1 Where did you go on vacation?话题作文话题作文A Travel DiaryStep 1 S
2、hare my trip to BeijingTask 1 Watch a video and answer questions.1.What places of interest can you see?2.How do you like Beijing?(名胜古迹名胜古迹)Task 2 Share my trip to Beijing.I arrived in Beijing by plane on August 20th with my friend.August,20ththe Palace MuseumI liked this place because I learned a lo
3、t about Chinese history.It was sunny and hot.I took quite a few photos.I went to the Palace Museum.For dinner,I ate Beijing duck.It was delicious.Beijing duckI bought something special,but the things were kind of expensive.hotelIn the evening,we went back to the hotel.I felt really tired but happy.S
4、tep 2 Write about my triphot and sunny tiredBeijing duck delicious take some photos beautifulbuy something special interesting learn something important August Wednesday,_ 20thToday the weather was _.I went to _.It was _.We _.I liked this place because_.For dinner we had _.It was _.In the evening,I
5、felt really _.Augusthot and sunnythe Palace Museum beautiful and interesting took some photosI learned something importantBeijing duckdelicioustiredTask 1 Use the words and phrases in the box to complete the diary entry.When did you go there?Task 2 Know more about the diary.Wednesday,August 20thdate
6、weatherplacetransportation(交通交通)partner(同伴同伴)activitiessaw,ate,learned,liked/dislikedfeelingsHow did you feel about it?What did you do?How was the weather?Where did you go?Today the weather was hot and sunny.I went to the Palace Museum.It was beautiful.We took some photos.I liked this place because
7、I learned something important.For dinner we had Beijing.It was delicious.In the evening,I felt really tired.Wednesday,August 20th Today the weather was hot and sunny.1._,I went to the Palace Museum.It was beautiful,2._we took some photos.I liked this place 3._ I learned something important.4._,we ha
8、d Beijing duck for dinner.It was delicious.In the evening.I felt really tired 5._ happy.At firstsoThenbutTip 1 正确地运用连词使文章更具条理性正确地运用连词使文章更具条理性Task 3 Fill in the blanks with the words in the box.becauseat first but because then so and_ In a word,it was a great trip!I hope to go to Beijing again._ Toda
9、y the weather was hot and sunny.At first,I went to the Palace Museum.It was beautiful,so we took some photos.I liked this place because I learned something important.Then,we had Beijing duck for dinner.It was delicious.At last,we went back to the hotel.I felt tired but happy.I arrived in Beijing by
10、plane with my friend.I really had fun there.beginning开头开头body正文正文end结尾结尾+8分分Task 4 Complete the article(补全文章补全文章).Wednesday,August 20thTip 3 文章需分三段文章需分三段开头直奔主题开头直奔主题正文描述见闻正文描述见闻结尾抒发情感结尾抒发情感Task 4:Choose the lucky numbers.Task 5:Play a game and better the passage.选择数字选择数字完成相应的任务完成相应的任务,使文章更完美。使文章更完美。
11、.Wednesday,August 20th Man who travels far knows more.I like travelling.So I arrived in Beijing by plane with my friend.I really had fun there.What a hot and sunny day today!At first,I went to the Palace Museum.The buildings were so wonderful that we didnt want to leave.It was beautiful,so we took s
12、ome photos.I liked this place because I learned something important.Then,we had Beijing duck for dinner.When I saw the delicious food,I couldnt wait to eat it.At last,we went back to the hotel.I felt tired but happy.In a word,it was a great trip!I look forward to going to Beijing again.Task 6 Enjoy
13、the travel diary.+10分分Step 3 Keep your travel diary_Task 1 Keep a diary about your trip.你假期去了有趣的地方吗？你玩得开心吗？你假期去了有趣的地方吗？你玩得开心吗？你在那里的所见所闻所做所感是什么？你在那里的所见所闻所做所感是什么？请写一篇你自己的旅行日记，请写一篇你自己的旅行日记，80词左右。词左右。评分依据：评分依据：1.字迹工整，书写美观字迹工整，书写美观2.结构完整，信息齐全结构完整，信息齐全3.语言规范，格式正确语言规范，格式正确4.词汇优美，句式多样词汇优美，句式多样_Task 2 Show y
14、our diary.Homework课后将旅行日记发送到微信课后将旅行日记发送到微信（WeChat）上和朋友分享。）上和朋友分享。Love traveling!Love life!Love sharing!爱旅游！爱分享！爱生活！爱旅游！爱分享！爱生活！1.What a sunny day it was!2.How sunny it was!It was a sunny day.改变语气改变语气(+2)(+3)The buildings were beautiful.I didnt want to leave.1.The buildings were beautiful,so I didnt
15、want to leave.2.The buildings were so beautiful that I didnt want to leave.合并句子合并句子:(+2)(+3)2.Man who travels far knows more.1.读万卷书不如行万里路。读万卷书不如行万里路。大声朗读美句大声朗读美句:(+3)2.我期盼下一次再去。我期盼下一次再去。I look forward to going there again.(+2)给下面的句子选择最佳评论：给下面的句子选择最佳评论：We had Beijing duck for dinner.It was delicious.
16、A.I forgot its taste.B.When I saw the delicious food,I couldnt wait to eat it.迫不及待地迫不及待地 A.I took the plane to Beijing with my family.I really had fun there.B.I took the plane to Beijing with my family.I had really fun there.Let me tell you something about it.C.Hello,everyone!I am happy to talk about my trip to Beijing.Tip 2 根据不同的文体选择合适的开头。根据不同的文体选择合适的开头。
