1、 WritingModule 5 Great People and Great Inventions of Ancient ChinaWriting Look at the following passage The Advantages and Disadvantages of Car.A.This paragraph gives the arguments against cars.B.The conclusion:This gives the writers final opinion.C.This paragraph gives the arguments for cars.D.The
2、 introduction:This gives some general facts about the subject.Match the essay paragraphs with these descriptions.Para 1Para 2Para 3Para 4structureA conclusion an introductionArguments for carsArguments against cars Cars were first used at the end of the 19th century,and were no faster than a horse.T
3、oday there are billions of cars on the road.Everyone wants one.An introduction:This gives some general facts about the subject.Para 1the history of carsthe development of carsWhat facts are introduced briefly?Cars have great advantages.They move fast and they give you freedom.You can just get in you
4、r car and go wherever you want.Up to five people can travel in a car,so often it is cheaper to go by car than to take a train.Arguments for cars.Para 2 How many advantages are described?But cars have great disadvantages.They use fuels which pollute the environment very badly.They also create serious
5、 traffic problems.Sometimes you cannot get into a city because there are so many cars on the road.Para 3 Arguments against carsHow many disadvantages are described?In conclusion,I think that cars are very useful because travel is so easy with a car.But the environmental problems is serious and we ne
6、ed to find a cleaner fuel.Para 4A conclusion What phrase does the writer use to start the last paragraph?Cars have great advantages._,they move fast._,they give you freedom.You can just get in your car and go wherever you want._,up to five people can travel in a car,so often it is cheaper to go by c
7、ar than to take a train.But cars have great disadvantages._,they use fuels which pollute the environment very badly._,they also create serious traffic problems.Sometimes you cannot get into a city because there are so many cars on the road.Rewriting or PolishingFirstlySecondly MoreoverOn the one han
8、d On the other handHow could the body part be made clearer?Cars have great advantages.cars have great disadvantages.However,The topic sentenceConjunctions列举次序列举次序 firstly,secondly,thirdly first of all,secondly,moreover,for one thing,for another in addition,whats more,last but not least对比转折对比转折 howev
9、er,on the contrary in contrast with,by contrast总结结尾总结结尾 in a word,all in all,in summary in a nutshell,in short,to sum up in conclusion,from what I understand in my opinion,as far as I am concerned 1，Nowadays more and more people 2，plays an important part in 3，Every coin has two sides.4，Generally,the
10、 favorable aspects/advantages can be listed as follows.5，The negative aspects/disadvantages are also obvious 6，Through above analysis 7，therefore,thus,so Topic sentencesThe writing about the advantages and disadvantagesIntroduction:_Body:A has great advantages.first of all,_.In the second place,_.La
11、st but least,_.However,as the old saying goes:“Every coin has two sides”.A also has great disadvantages.For one thing,_.For another thing,_.In addition,_ Conclusion:_As far as I am concerned./In my opinion./In a word,.A brief introduction of the topicShopping OnlineWrite an essay现在越来越多的人进行网上购物，网购有它的
12、优势也有它的弊端。请写一篇短文谈谈你对网上购物的看法。要点如下：1.网购的优势。（至少两条）2.网购的弊端。（至少两条）3.你对网购的态度。注意：1.词数100左右。2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。提示：网购（do online shopping）Step 1 List the key points(discussion)Advantages:Disadvantages:Step 2 Make sentencesStep3.Form a passage and polishThree steps of writing:advantagesdisadvantagesIts advantage
13、s can be seen as follows.Its negative aspects are also apparent.structurereasons：Firstly,its convenient for us to shop on line.Secondly,it helps save much time,whats more,reasons：One of the disadvantages is that,whats worse,conlusionIn my opinionIn a nutshellI agree/disagree withintruductionNowadays
14、 many people prefer to shop on line.Sample With the development of technology,online shopping has become popular in peoples daily life.Nowadays many people prefer to shop on line.Its advantages can be seen as follows.Firstly,its convenient for us to shop on line.Secondly,it helps save much time,with
15、 which we can do more other important things.Whats more,online products range from small items such as clothes and books to large ones like computers.But just as the saying goes,every coin has two sides.Its negative aspects are also apparent.One of the disadvantages is that we are not sure whether t
16、he goods we buy are in good quality.Whats worse,One possible risk is that consumers might not get the exact product they want because the information provided might not be enough or reliable.In a nutshell,I believe that positive aspects of shopping on line far outweigh negative ones.Therefore,I woul
17、d like to shop on line.topic(主题句主题句)Conclusion(总结总结)Transitional sentence（过渡句）（过渡句）advantagesdisadvantagesSummery Three steps of writing:Step 1:找出关键词（找出关键词（key words）Step 2:句子句子(sentence)Step 3:段落段落(passage)structureintroductionadvantages&disadvantagesconclusion写作的提高写作的提高1.1.漂亮的字体、整洁的卷面、段落清晰漂亮的字体、整洁
18、的卷面、段落清晰(总分总总分总)是得分的基础；是得分的基础；2.2.分析并熟读范文（文章结构、逻辑性、条理性、丰富的表达法，分析并熟读范文（文章结构、逻辑性、条理性、丰富的表达法，开头，结尾）开头，结尾）3.3.背诵范文或改写作文（考前最有效）背诵范文或改写作文（考前最有效）Quality input ensures quality output.Practice makes perfect!写作注意：写作注意：1.1.审清题意审清题意 2.2.列好提纲列好提纲 3.3.写好主题句很关键写好主题句很关键4.4.遣词造句要有档次遣词造句要有档次HomeworkPolish your Writing about the Advantages and Disadvantagesof Shopping Online.
