1、 英语书面表达How to write a letter for advice 203 Thames StreetOxford,OX41LFFriday 11 Nov.Dear students in Class 20 Grade 2,Can you help me please?My best friend has just started smoking.I do not like it and I told her what I thought.She laughedat me and said that I was not grown-up enough.Then she offere
2、d me a cigarette and I felt so embarrassed and awkward.I did notknow how to refuse it.Please help me.I do not wantto start smoking,but I do not want to lose my best friend,either.Yours sincerely Li Xiaolei 技法点拨如何写劝说性建议信1.书信基本格式。2写劝说性建议信时,首先要分析来信的问题,弄清对方的意图或者真正的问题所在,然后表明自己的观点,做到回信有针对性,达到答疑解惑的目的。3 针对问
3、题提出建议,并说明原因。在回信时一定要清楚、明了、客观,紧扣主题,使收信人一目了然,感到疑惑得以解答,在给出建议的同时注意语气委婉适度。4最后,提出期望,希望收信人积极行动,改进现状,并礼貌地结束全文。常用句型:首段:引出问题。I am sorry you have had so much trouble(in)doing.You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.Here are my suggestions.I hope the following tips will help you.主
4、体:提出建议。First of all.Meanwhile.In addition last but not the least.基本结构套用句型Its important for you to.If you do .it will be better.You had better do.You should(not).It would be a good idea to.结尾:提出期望。结尾:提出期望。Cheer up!Your problems will soon be over.Where there is a will,there is a way.Dont lose heart,wh
5、atever happens.I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Please let me know if I can help further.I hope you can take my advice.I do hope my suggestions can help you.Dear Li Xiaolei,I am sorry you have found yourself insuch a difficult situation.I hope the following tips will help you.Fi
6、rst,there is no need for you to feel embarrassed and awkward.She may think that she is behaving in a grownup way but you are the one with sense on your side.Meanwhile,talk to your friend gently and explain that you are still good friends and dont want to break this friendship.In addition,here is som
7、e advice that I think you might give her:smoking cigarettes is addictive and expensive;it can make us ill later in life and it is more difficult to stop than it is to start.Last but not the least,give her the information above and then explain that whatever she chooses to do you will remain her frie
8、nd.Cheer up!Your problems will soon be over.I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Yours sincerely Sun GaoTask 1 Rewrite the sample letter I am sorry you have found yourself insuch a difficult situation.I hope the following tips will help you.Paragraph 1 I am sorry you have had so muc
9、h trouble(in)doing.You have asked for my advice on.and I will try to make some suggestions.Here are my suggestions.Task 1Rewrite the sample letterParagraph 2 First,there is no need for you to feel embarrassed and awkward.She may think that she is behaving in a grownup way but you are the one with se
10、nse on your side.Meanwhile,talk to your friend gently and explain that you are still good friends and dont want to break this friendship.In addition,here is some advice that I think you might give her:smoking cigarettes is addictive and expensive;it can make us ill later in life and it is more diffi
11、cult to stop than it is to start.Last but not the least,give her the information above and then explain that whatever she chooses to do you will remain her friend.Its important for you to.If you do .it will be better.You had better do.You should(not).It would be a good idea to.Task 1Rewrite the samp
12、le letterParagraph 3 Cheer up!Your problems will soon be over.I will be very glad if you find my suggestions useful.Where there is a will,there is a way.Dont lose heart,whatever happens.Please let me know if I can help further.I hope you can take my advice.I do hope my suggestions can help you.Task
13、2 Create your own works 假如你是Jack,你的笔友李明来信说他身体肥胖,给学习和生活带来很多不便,很苦恼。请给他写一封回信,给他提一些减肥建议并且要求他养成健康的生活习惯。注意:1.词数:100左右;2信的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。参考词汇:不吃早餐skip ones breakfast I_am_sorry_to_hear_that_you_are_upset_because_of_your_weight.I can fully understand your feelings at the momentbecause I used to be fat and
14、was often laughed at by others.Now I would like to tell you some ways to lose weight and live a healthy life.If you want to lose weight,youll need to eat less and take more exercise.Eat only when you are hungry.Chew your food slowly and eat the right kind of food.Eat less salt and more fruit and veg
15、etables.A healthy breakfast is an important part of a balanced diet,which provides some of the vitamins and minerals we need for good health.So never skip your breakfast.Try_these_suggestions,_and_youll_be_surprised_to_see_the_amazing_results._Good_luck.范文:Rewrite your own works Task 3 Task 4 Show us your works Task 5 Have a quiz 假设你是高三17班的李华,最近你发现学校里的浪费现象非常严重。请给英语读写园地(English Reading and Writing Space)的编辑投稿反映该现象,并提出自己的建议。