1、写作技法点拨系列十、发挥想象,灵活阐释开放作文【核心点拨核心点拨】常用句型常用句型1.As is shown in the picture,two ants are walking along the side of a standard triangle.如图所示如图所示,两只蚂蚁正沿着一个标准的三角形而行。两只蚂蚁正沿着一个标准的三角形而行。2.As we can see in the picture,we are being surrounded by deserts.正如图中我们看到的那样正如图中我们看到的那样,我们我们正在被沙漠包围。正在被沙漠包围。3.In the picture,
2、we can see clearly the struggle between people and desert.如图所示如图所示,我们可以清楚地看出人类与沙漠之间的较量。我们可以清楚地看出人类与沙漠之间的较量。4.The picture is trying to tell us that.这幅图画向我们表明这幅图画向我们表明5.The picture reflects a common social problem that.这幅图画反映了一个普遍的社会问题这幅图画反映了一个普遍的社会问题,即即【典题示例典题示例】(2016浙江高考浙江高考)“Planning is good,but do
3、ing is better”是一句英是一句英语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇语名言。请以此为题用英语写一篇100词左右的短文。词左右的短文。要求如下要求如下:1.简述你对这句名言的理解简述你对这句名言的理解;2.用一个具体事例加以说明用一个具体事例加以说明;3.给出恰当的结尾。给出恰当的结尾。【审题谋篇审题谋篇】文章体裁文章体裁夹叙夹议文夹叙夹议文中心人称中心人称第一人称第一人称I主要时态主要时态一般现在时一般现在时,一般过去时一般过去时信息要点信息要点1.解释这句名言的含义解释这句名言的含义;2.用自己的具体事例加以说明用自己的具体事例加以说明;3.这句名言的意义及我的感受。这句名言的意义及我
4、的感受。【词句构建词句构建】1.词汇词汇汉语汉语一般词汇一般词汇高级词汇高级词汇没有好结果没有好结果have no good effect_一个恰当的一个恰当的例子例子a proper/good example_开始开始start/begin_完成任务完成任务finish onestask_bear no fruita case in pointset outachieve onessuccess2.句式句式如果不去实际实施如果不去实际实施,一个计划不会有好结果。一个计划不会有好结果。一般表达一般表达:A plan can have no good effect if it is not ac
5、tually carried out.高级表达高级表达:A plan can _actually carried out.(用高级词汇句式替代用高级词汇句式替代have no good effect,if从句从句)bear no fruit without being我最终取得了比赛的第一名。我最终取得了比赛的第一名。一般表达一般表达:Finally I won the first prize in the contest.高级表达高级表达:I finally _the first prize winner.(用高级词汇替代用高级词汇替代won)came out of the contest
6、as它它(好结果好结果)来自计划周密和执行到位的完美结合。来自计划周密和执行到位的完美结合。一般表达一般表达:It came from good planning and better doing which are combined.高级表达高级表达:It came from good planning and better doing _.(用过去分词作定语用过去分词作定语)combined【连句成篇连句成篇】Planning is good,but doing is betterPlanning is good as it decides in detail how we do what
7、 we want to do.However,a plan can bear no fruit without being actually carried out.My experience in the English speech contest last October is a case in point.A month before the event,I spent hours working out a schedule outlining my goals and practical steps.After that,I set out to read widely for
8、an inspiring topic,wrote a speech,and practiced its delivery in beautiful pronunciation with good public speech skills.I finally came out of the contest as the first prize winner.I know how I achieved my success.It came from good planning and better doing combined.【即时应用即时应用】假设你校英语报正在进行名言佳句分享活动假设你校英语
9、报正在进行名言佳句分享活动,请根请根据要求写一篇英语短文推荐据要求写一篇英语短文推荐“Change what you can change;accept what you cant change.”这句名言。这句名言。1.谈谈你对这句名言的理解谈谈你对这句名言的理解;2.举例说明理由。举例说明理由。注意注意:词数词数100个左右。个左右。_【参考范文参考范文】Famous sayings usually contain much wisdom and teach us some philosophy of life.“Change what you can change;accept what
10、 you cant change.”is just one such quote.On the one hand,we should be optimistic,think positively and live actively.In other words,we should try our best to change everything around us for the better.One thing Im sure we can change is our attitudes.With a positive attitude,were more likely to achieve our goals and realize our dreams.On the other hand,therere many things in our life which cant be changed,such as our appearance and family background.We have to accept all of these because theres no point in complaining about them.
