1、 第 - 1 - 页 共 4 页 - 1 - 三、高考命题三、高考命题“一点四面一点四面”下的写作素材下的写作素材 1. . 社会主义核心价值观社会主义核心价值观 对成功的理解 如何理解“成功”, 不同的人有不同的看法。 请认真阅读下面的引语 (quotation), 按要求用英语写一篇短文。 “Success is the ability to go from one failure to another with no loss of enthusiasm. ” Sir Winston Churchill 内容要求:1. 你对该引语的理解;2. 你的相关经历; 3. 恰当的结尾。 注意:1
2、. 短文开头已给出, 不计入总词数; 2. 文中不能出现考生的具体信息; 3. 词数:80 左右。 练考场审题 Step 1:精准审题 谋篇布局 人称 I 时态 一般现在时, 一般过去时 段落布局 开头点题: 点明对引语的理解 主题段落:用事例解释对这句话的理解 结尾:再次深化自己的观点 Step 2:头脑风暴 字字珠玉 第 - 2 - 页 共 4 页 - 2 - (1)美词:get discouraged, enthusiasm, consist in, worse still, be about to do. . . when. . . , succeed in (2)佳句: So exc
3、ited was I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Step 3:斟酌词句 妙笔生花 要点 1:我非常激动, 决定试骑一下。 一般表达:I was excited and tried my hand at riding it. 句式升级:(so. . . that. . . 倒装句) 我是如此激动以至于等不及要试骑一把了。 So excited was I that I couldnt
4、 wait to try my hand at riding it. 要点 2:回顾过去, 我觉得如果我失去了信心, 就不能学会骑自行车。 一般表达:Looking back, I feel if I lost heart, I couldnt learn to ride a bike. 句式升级(分词作状语, 虚拟语气): 回顾过去, 我觉得如果我失去了信心, 就不能学会骑自行车。 Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Step 4:衔接过渡 斐然成篇 This quotation fr
5、om Winston Churchill tells us that we shouldnt get discouraged right after failures. Instead, we should keep trying with enthusiasm. Success consists in the ability to continue efforts through failures. 第 - 3 - 页 共 4 页 - 3 - At the age of twelve, I got a nice bike as a birthday gift. So excited was
6、I that I couldnt wait to try my hand at riding it. However, it was harder than expected. The bike seemed too heavy and difficult to control. Worse still, I took many falls off the bike. I was about to give up when my father came and encouraged me to keep going. With more practice, I did better and b
7、etter. Looking back, I feel I wouldnt be able to ride a bike had I lost heart. Actually, we cant succeed in everything we try. Whats important is that we should stick at it. 50 年后的地球 假定你是李华, 现在某英文报社面向中学生征文, 题为“50 年后的 地球”, 请发挥你的想象力, 用英语写一篇短文, 向该报社投稿。 注意:词数 80 左右。 _ _ _ _ _ _ _ _ 第 - 4 - 页 共 4 页 - 4 -
8、 【参考范文】 What will our earth be like after 50 years? I have some wonderful predictions. The environment then will be much better than it is now. People can enjoy the blue sky, white clouds and fresh air. There will be less pollution. Trees and flowers can be seen here and there. The rivers will be cl
9、eaner as no factories pour waste into the rivers and lakes. As for peoples life, there will be great changes. First, people will lead a more comfortable life because robots will reach each family and help people do the housework. In addition, people can work at their own homes on the Internet. In this way, they will have more time to entertain themselves. The earth will become a more comfortable planet for people to live on 50 years later.
