1、中考写作：建议信 写作评分标准13-15分写出全部内容，语言流畅，无语法错误，有亮点出现；10-12分写出大部分内容，语言相对流畅，少量语法和拼写错误；7-9分写出部分要点，句子基本通顺，有一些语法和拼写错误；4-6分写出少量要点，语句不通顺，语法，拼写和标点错误较多；0-3分基本没写出内容和通顺句子，大量语法，拼写，标点错误。内容内容完整，切题（准确分析和解读题目）语言语言正确，流畅（文章亮点合理出现）结构逻辑清晰，有层次（总-分-总；善用连接词）隐形扣分点字数；格式；卷面（字迹；涂改）【各档评分标准各档评分标准】【作文得分要点作文得分要点】假如你是李平，最近收到意大利朋友Linda的电子邮
2、件。请你阅读来信后回复，词数80左右。【2020西湖区 一模】Subject:From:LindaTo:Li PingDear Li Ping,Hows it going?Next Sunday is my best Chinese friend Huang Jies birthday.I am planning a party for her.I wonder how Chinese people celebrate your birthday.Do you have some traditional Chinese food on that day?Do they have special
3、 meanings?And what gift should I give her?Please give me some advice.Hope to hear from you soon.Love,Linda看到这篇作文你会怎么写？Have a try英文作文大结构是什么？总-分-总 结构1.开头表达自己乐意提供建议2.具体的建议3.表达祝愿:回信+建议要点 审题：找出需要建议的地方Subject:From:LindaTo:Li PingDear Li Ping,Hows it going?Next Sunday is my best Chinese friend Huang Jies b
4、irthday.I am planning a party for her.I wonder how Chinese people celebrate your birthday.Do you have some traditional Chinese food on that day?Do they have special meanings?And what gift should I give her?Please give me some advice.Hope to hear from you soon.Love,Linda中国人怎么庆祝生日生日当天吃什么传统食物以及意义在选择礼物上
5、给出建议 语言中国人怎么庆祝生日生日当天吃什么传统食物以及意义在选择礼物上给出建议中国人过生日的时候吃蛋糕，和亲戚朋友一起聚会吃饭。中国人过生日的时候吃蛋糕，和亲戚朋友一起聚会吃饭。Chinese usually eat birthday cakes on the birthday.Chinese are likely to enjoy birthday cakes on the birthday.Chinese are fond of eating birthday cakes and longevity noodles on the birthday.换词和短语换词和短语：be likel
6、y to do/be fond of/enjoyDear Linda,_Yours,Li PingChinese are likely to enjoy birthday cakes on the birthday.Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting together to have a big meal.语言中国人怎么庆祝生日生日当天吃什么传统食物以及意义在选择礼物上给出建议生日的时候会吃长寿面，代表着长寿。生日的时候会吃长寿面，代表着长寿。We usually eat longevity noodles.Because t
7、hey stands for long life.It is necessary for us to eat longevity noodles,which stands for long life.It is vital for us to eat longevity noodles,which is regarded as a symbol of long life.句式+扩充句子：it is adj.for sb.to do sth./定语从句Dear Linda,_Yours,Li PingChinese are likely to enjoy birthday cakes on th
8、e birthday.Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting together to have a big meal.It is necessary for us to eat noodles,which is regarded as a symbol of long life.语言中国人怎么庆祝生日生日当天吃什么传统食物以及意义在选择礼物上给出建议建议送唱片建议送唱片/自己国家特色的礼物自己国家特色的礼物，因为，因为句式：as for 至于 why not do？为什么不？I strongly advised you to do
9、 sth.我强烈建议 since+句子 因为Dear Linda,_Yours,Li Ping1.Chinese are likely to enjoy birthday cakes on the birthday.Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting together to have a big meal.2.It is necessary for us to eat noodles,which is regarded as a symbol of long life.3.As for gifts,why not choose
10、 a record for her since you told me she was crazy about jazz music last time?语言递进/并列关系Dear Linda,_Yours,Li Ping First of all,Chinese are likely to enjoy birthday cakes on the birthday.Whats more,Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting together to have a big meal.Becides,It is necessary f
11、or us to eat noodles,which is regarded as a symbol of long life.As for gifts,why not choose a record for her since you told me she was crazy about jazz music last time?语言连接词first of all、whats more、besides、as for、therefore1.开头表达自己乐意提供建议Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how toIm g
12、lad to offer you some suggestions about it.Im delighted to receive your letter.Now Im writng to give you some advice on how to 语言3.表达祝愿Hope my advice above will more or less be helpful to you and have a good time.I hope my suggestions will be great help for you.Im looking forward to your reply.语言Dea
13、r Linda,_Yours,Li Ping It must be very interesting and meaningful for you to plan a birthday for your best friend.Im so glad to offer you some suggestions about it.First of all,Chinese are likely to enjoy birthday cakes on the birthday.Whats more,Family usually celebrate their birhtdays by getting t
14、ogether to have a big meal.Becides,It is necessary for us to eat noodles,which is regarded as a symbol of long life.As for gifts,why not choose a record for her since you told me she was crazy about jazz music last time?Hope my advice above will more or less be helpful to you and have a good time 语言 思路1.开头表达自己乐意提供建议2.具体的建议3.表达祝愿列大纲：避免漏掉要点句式：联系学习过的固定搭配衔接：连接词；衔接句THANK YOUTHANK YOU！
