1、作文讲评 一、看要求二、审题1，格式/体裁2，时态3，人称4，要点三、打草稿四、改错，分段，加过渡词、过渡句五、抄写注意：1，要点通常为4-5个。2，一般情况，要点需要平均着墨。3，每个要点要用11模式，一般写2-3个句子。1，要点全；2，错误没有或几乎没有；3，流畅，即有过渡词，过渡句；4，有一些高级的词汇，短语，句型或表达（能用高中的，不用初中的；短语比单词好，句型比短语好！）；5，书写漂亮，卷面整洁。假定你是某校学生李华。你的英国笔友Bob在英语学习上给了你很多帮助。他上周发来电子邮件，询问你现在的英语学习情况。请你用英语给他写一封邮件，内容包括：1，感谢帮助；2，英语学习的进步；3，目
2、前面临的问题。注意：1，词数100左右；2，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。二、审题1，格式/体裁2，时态3，人称4，要点回信一现第一人称1，收到来信，表明写信目的 2感谢帮助3英语学习的进步4，目前面临的问题5，恰当的结尾 第一个要点：收到来信，表明写信目的 Im glad to receive your letter.In it you asked me about my English study at present.Now Im writing to tell you about it.Im glad to receive your letter,in which you asked
3、me about my English study at present.Now Im writing to tell you about it.I want to/would like to/feel like thanking/thank you for helping me with English.With you helping me/With your help/,I have made great progress in English study.Its with your help that I have made great progress in English stud
4、y.听力语法口语考试第一名词汇量头脑风暴 选择的原则是：能用英语正确的表达出！最好写两个安排 I can communicate with others in English fluently.In the last English test,I got the second place/full marks.I have such a wide vocabulary that its easy for me to read English newspapers.听力语法口语书写词汇量头脑风暴 选择的原则是：能用英语正确的表达出！最好写两个安排 I wish you could give me
5、 more help/advice.Would you like to give me more help/advice?Im looking forward to your reply.四、改错，分段，加过渡词、过渡句 最好三段！五，抄写范文说明：红色：较高级表达蓝色：过渡词，过渡句紫色：回信的模板句型Dear Bob,in which I feel like thanking you for helping me with English.Its with your help that Ive made great progress in English study.My listenin
6、g has improved so a lot that I understand what my foreign teacher says in class easily.Beside,in the last English test,I got full marks.However,therere still some problems for me to solve.My English handwriting isnt wonderful enough to leave a good impression on teachers.Whats worse,my vocabulary is too poor.I wish you could give me more help.(117)Yours Li Hua
