1、 Basic Writing Basic WritingCharacter introductionCharacter introduction -Sebrella-Sebrella Module1 Unit3 Sports and FitnessLearning Objectives学习目标学习目标:In this class,I will:1.master the main expressions used to describe a person2.know how to write the sentences according to what Ive learnt from the
2、class.3.finish a short writing of describing a personCan you tell me something about her?Brainstorming:Her name is Langping.She is a coach.She was born in Tianjin in 1960.She is determined and hard-working.She entered the Beijing Amateur Sports school and was selected to the national training team i
3、n 1978.She won many medals and brought honour and glory to Chins.We all think highly of her.namejobbirthplace/birth dateevaluation=commentqualitiesachievementseducationIntroduce Langping orallyIf we want to introduce someone,what can we talk about?What can we write about a person?1.概况概况(name,age,bir
4、thplace,birth date,job,background)2.性格性格/品质品质(personality/quality)3.教育（教育（education ）4.成就成就&评价（评价（achievements&evaluation）Tip 1:介绍概况，介绍概况，一个句型轻松搞定一个句型轻松搞定 巧用巧用同位语结构分词结构同位语结构分词结构,使文章简使文章简洁，通顺洁，通顺 Born in+地点地点+in+时间时间(年份年份),sb,同位语（身份），同位语（身份），谓语谓语+Character introduction1.概况概况(name,age,birthplace,birth
5、 date,job,background)n纳尔逊纳尔逊曼德拉（曼德拉（Nelson Mandela）1918年出生年出生,南南非总统，于非总统，于2013年年12月月6日去世，享年日去世，享年95岁岁._,Nelson Mandela,_,passed away on December 6th,2013 at the age of 95.Born in 1918the president ofSouth AfricaBorn in+地点地点+in+时间时间(年份年份),sb,同位语，同位语，谓语谓语+Born in England in 1965,J.K.Rowling,the writer
6、 of Harry Potter,has dreamed of being a writer since she was a child.J.K.Rowling是是 Harry Potter 的作者，的作者，1965年出生在英格兰，她从小就梦想着当一名年出生在英格兰，她从小就梦想着当一名作家。作家。Born in+地点地点+in+时间时间(年份年份),sb,同位语，谓语同位语，谓语+钟南山钟南山1941年出生在广州，他是年出生在广州，他是中国最伟大的医生之一中国最伟大的医生之一。(1)Zhong Nanshan,_,was born in Guangzhou in 1941.(2)_,Zhon
7、g Nanshan is one of the greatest doctors in China.为人自信乐观的男孩为人自信乐观的男孩刘翔刘翔,出生在出生在1983年的上海年的上海.(1)Liu Xiang,_,was born in Shanghai in 1983.(2)_,Liu Xiang is a confident and optimistic boy.one of the greatest doctors in ChinaBorn in Guangzhou in 1941a confident and optimistic boyBorn in Shanghai in 1983
8、2.性格性格/品质品质(personality/quality)What words do you know to describe a persons quality?Brainstorming头脑风暴头脑风暴:personality/qualitydeterminedbraveconfidentwarm-heartedresponsibleunselfish=selflesshonest诚实的诚实的intelligentgenerouskindmodest谦虚的谦虚的=humble谦逊的谦逊的hard-working=diligentconsiderate考虑考虑周到的周到的helpful
9、activeindependent Group work:Brainstorminggood out-goingoptimistic乐观的乐观的Sebrella is not only patient but also easy-going,so we all love her.Sebrella is so patient and easy-going that all of us love her.2.性格性格/品质品质(personality/quality)Tip 2:介绍性格特点时，可用介绍性格特点时，可用固定短语和句型固定短语和句型。如如:not onlybut also sotha
10、t.等等彭千里彭千里/刘红，我们语文老师，很积极，很热心。刘红，我们语文老师，很积极，很热心。nPeng Qianli,our Chinese teacher,is _ active _warm-hearted.n彭千里彭千里/刘红刘红,很积极，很热心，我们对他评价很很积极，很热心，我们对他评价很高。高。n Peng Qianli is _ _we all think highly of him.not onlybut alsoso active and warm-hearted that赞一下你的小伙伴吧赞一下你的小伙伴吧！For example:Born in Chongqing Prov
11、ince,Sebrella,our English teacher,is a beautiful lady.She is so patient and easy-going that all of us love her./She is not only patient but also easy-going,so we all love her.Pair-work:n她大学毕业后她大学毕业后,去了国外深造。去了国外深造。After she graduated from university,she went abroad for further education._,she went ab
12、road for further education After graduating from university省略句省略句3.教育（教育（education）Tip 3:介绍介绍教育经历教育经历时可以用时可以用省略句省略句构成构成非谓语非谓语等，使文章简洁等，使文章简洁。n刘平毕业于中山大学，刘平毕业于中山大学，2001年获博士学位。年获博士学位。,Liu Ping got a doctors degree in 2001.n3岁时，对音乐表现出浓厚兴趣，周杰伦开始学习弹钢岁时，对音乐表现出浓厚兴趣，周杰伦开始学习弹钢琴。琴。,Jay Chou began to learn to pl
13、ay the piano at the age of 3.n获得中山大学硕士学位后，她出国升造。获得中山大学硕士学位后，她出国升造。_ from Zhongshan University,she went abroad for further study.After graduating from Zhongshan UniversityShowing great interest in musicHaving received a masters degree 外向，勤奋的林书豪在哈佛大学外向，勤奋的林书豪在哈佛大学(Harvard)毕业后，毕业后，于于2010年加入了年加入了NBA。One
14、 possible version:Lin Shuhao is not only out-going but also hard-working.After graduating from Harvard University,he became a member of NBA in 2010.With excellent performance in 2012,Lin Shuhao was considered as a new star in NBA and we all thought highly of him.Marie Curie,who made great contributi
15、ons(贡贡献献)to the world of science,was regarded as one of the greatest women scientists in the world.Einstein devoted all his life to scientific research and was awarded the Noble Prize for physics in 1921.4.成就成就&评价（评价（achievements&evaluation）Group-work:凭借优秀的表现凭借优秀的表现 _被认为被认为_高度评价高度评价_做出巨大贡献做出巨大贡献_致力于
16、致力于,把把奉献奉献_被授予诺贝尔被授予诺贝尔奖奖_4.成就成就&评价（评价（achievements&evaluation）with excellent performancebe considered asmake great contributions to/be regarded asdevote tobe awarded the Noble Prize for think highly ofFind out the expressions related to the following Chinese4.成就成就&评价（评价（achievements&evaluation）With
17、 excellent performance in 2012,Jeremy was considered as a new star in NBA.Marie Curie,who made great contributions(贡贡献献)to the world of science,was regarded as one of the greatest women scientists in the world.介词短语介词短语定语从句定语从句Tip 4:介绍介绍成就评价成就评价时要时要牢记相关表达，牢记相关表达，善用善用介词短语（介词短语（with结构）或定语从句结构）或定语从句。(1)
18、(1)叶诗文获得两枚伦敦奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界叶诗文获得两枚伦敦奥运金牌，这使她闻名于世界 Ye Shiwen won two gold medals in London Olympic Games,_.which made her world-famous(2)凭借多部优秀的作品，莫言获得了诺贝尔文学凭借多部优秀的作品，莫言获得了诺贝尔文学(literature)奖。奖。_,Mo Yan was awarded the Nobel Prize for literature.(3)袁隆平为国家作出了巨大贡献，袁隆平为国家作出了巨大贡献，被誉为被誉为“杂交水稻之父杂交水稻之父”（“Fathe
19、r of Hybrid Rice”）。）。Yuan Longping,_ was regarded as the Father of Hybrid Rice.With many excellent works,who made great contributions to our country,What can we write about a person?1.概况概况(Born in+地点地点+in/on+时时间间,sb,同位语同位语,谓语谓语.)2.性格性格/品质品质(sb is not only+adj.+but also+adj.,so+句子句子=sb is so+adj.+tha
20、t+句子句子)3.教育（教育（After graduating from+学校学校/地点，地点，sb+谓语谓语.）4.成就成就&评价（评价（With+n./v-ing,sb+谓谓语语.；sb,who+定从，谓语定从，谓语.）Born in 1911 in Shanghai,Qian Xuesen passed away in Beijing in 2009 at the age of 98.After graduating from Shanghai Jiaotong University,he went abroad for further study in the United State
21、s.He devoted himself/his life to the research of national defense with his strong determination,who made/making great contributions to our countrys missile and space programs.Born in January,1941 in England,Stephen Hawking,the world-famous British scientist,got a serious desease/illness at the age o
22、f 21,which made him only sit in a wheelchair and speak using a computer untill 1985,when he completely lost the ability to speak.His most famous book,A Brief History of Time,helps common people understand the universe better in space and time.practice 你的美国朋友你的美国朋友Jim开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅开始学习中国文学，来信询问鲁迅其人及
23、作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下其人及作品。你回信介绍鲁迅，内容提要如下:（1）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人。）鲁迅，原名周树人，浙江绍兴人。著名的作家，思想家著名的作家，思想家.（2）在他二十多岁，在日本求学时弃医从文。在他二十多岁，在日本求学时弃医从文。（3）鲁迅还是中国现代文学的鲁迅还是中国现代文学的开创者开创者(the father of.)。小说被小说被译成译成(translate into)多种文字，并被多种文字，并被制成制成(make into)电影，如电影，如阿阿Q正传正传、祝福祝福这这两部影片。两部影片。（4）一些作品还被）一些作品还被选入了选入了(collect)中学和大
24、学课本。中学和大学课本。（5）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一）鲁迅是中国最伟大的小说家之一,并且将会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记并且将会作为杰出人物为人们所永远记住住.参考词汇：参考词汇：阿阿Q正传：正传：The True Story of AH Q 祝福：祝福：The New Years Sacrifice要求要求:1.要有标题要有标题.2.介绍必须包括所给要点介绍必须包括所给要点,但不要逐条译成英语但不要逐条译成英语.3.词数词数110 左右左右.Born in Shaoxing,Zhejiang Province,Lu Xun with the real name Zhou Shuren w
25、as a well-Known Chinese writer and thinker.When he studied in Japan in his twenties,he abandoned the study of medicine and began to write.He was recognized as the father of modern Chinese literature.His novels have been translated into many languages and some have been made into films,such as The Tr
26、ue Story of AH Q and The New Years Sacrifice.Some of his novels have been collected in high school and college textbooks.Lu Xun,one of the greatest novelists in China,will be remembered as an outstanding man forever.Knowing that you want to know more about Luxun,Im writing to share you something about him.Thats all I want to share with you about Luxun.I do hope this can help you know him better.HomeworkMemorize the important words,phases and sentence patterns.Surf the internet and write a short passage to introduce LuxunThank you
