1、第7讲倒装省略,风景独好倒装和省略在写作中的应用,一、魔法导航倒装和省略是强调句意、丰富句式、增加语言表现形式的重要手段。在写作中常用的倒装和省略形式主要有以下几种。1.具有否定意义的词或短语或含有否定词的连词放于句首时句子要采用部分倒装。典句引领Not only can traveling relax us,but also it can broaden our horizons.旅游不仅能使我们得到放松,而且可以开阔我们的视野。Hardly had he finished his talk when he was surrounded by the excited fans.他刚一结束讲话
2、就被兴奋的粉丝们围了起来。,雕词琢句(1)句型升级:用not only.but also.倒装结构升级下面的句型The two-week communication has helped the Chinese students have a better understanding of English culture and made us become good friends.Not only has the two-week communication helped the Chinese students have a better understanding of English
3、 culture,but also it has made us become good friends.(2)句型转换I didnt realise the importance of studying hard until I failed in the exam. Not until I failed in the exam did I realise the importance of studying hard.(not until位于句首的倒装结构) It was not until I failed in the exam that I realised the importan
4、ce ofstudying hard. (not until的强调句型),(3)单句翻译你不仅可以欣赏中国剪纸的美,而且可以更多地了解中国的传统文化。(运用倒装结构)Not only can you enjoy the beauty of the Chinese paper-cutting, but also you can learn more about the traditional Chinese culture.2.only修饰副词、介词短语或状语从句置于句首时,句子或主句要用部分倒装。典句引领Only after all the fish died could the villag
5、ers realise the importance of pro-tecting the environment.只有所有的鱼都死光后,村民们才能意识到保护环境的重要性。,雕词琢句(1)Only when you realise the importance of English(你意识到英语的重要性时)can you put your heart into it.(2)只有努力学习,我们才能不断取得进步。(倒装结构)Only if we study hard can we make continuous progress.3.在so.that和such.that句型中,so或such置于句
6、首时,主句使用部分倒装。典句引领So charming is my hometown that it attracts visitors from all over the country every year.我的家乡如此迷人,每年都吸引着全国各地的游客。,雕词琢句(1)用倒装结构升级下面的句子I have such a good command of English that I am elected as my English teachers assistant.(2015陕西卷) Such a good command of English do I have that I am e
7、lected as my English teachers assistant.The Internet plays so important a role that a large number of people choose to watch movies using it.So important a role does the Internet play that a large number of people choose to watch movies using it.,(2)一句多译:这个栏目(column)非常受欢迎,我们在空闲的时候都喜欢阅读它。(2015课标全国卷)
8、The column is so popular that all of us like reading it in the free time.(so.that.的正常语序) So popular is the column that all of us like reading it in the free time.(so.that.的倒装语序),4.as作“尽管,虽然”讲,引导让步状语从句时,从句常用倒装语序。典句引领Child as he is,he knows a lot.尽管他是个孩子,他懂的东西却很多。Tired as we were,we continued working.
9、尽管我们很累,但我们继续工作。雕词琢句用as的倒装结构完成下面的句子(1)句型转换Although the child was poor,he tried to find ways to study hard.(2015福建卷) Poor as the child was, he tried to find ways to study hard.(2) Disappointed as I felt(尽管我感到失望)at the shabby campus and the poorly-equipped classroom,I found the teachers patient and con
10、siderate.,(3)尽管编辑部分很难,但我们做得很成功。Difficult as the editing part was, we did it successfully.5.当表示方向、地点和时间的词(here,now,off,up,in,out,down,away,there,then等)或介词短语置于句首且主语是名词时,句子用完全倒装。典句引领On the left side of the road stands our library,where there are various kinds of books.我们的图书馆在路的左侧,里面有各种各样的书籍。Out rushed
11、the boy before I could say a word.我还没来得及说话,那个男孩就冲了出去。雕词琢句这是给你的两条建议。(用倒装结构翻译句子)Here are two suggestions for you.,6.当状语从句的主语和主句的主语一致,且从句谓语中含有be动词时,可以省略状语从句中的主语和be动词。典句引领Once lost,time can never be made up.一旦失去,时间不可弥补。When walking in the street,I met my good friend.在大街上散步的时候,我遇到了我的好朋友。,雕词琢句(1)When you
12、are traveling there, you can admire fantastic sights and experience its rich culture. When traveling there, you can admire fantastic sights and experience its rich culture.(2)Firstly,people may feel forced when they are asked to do things that they dont want to.Firstly,people may feel forced when as
13、ked to do things that they dont want to.(3)When the child was faced with the difficulty,he didnt give up but managed to over come it.(2015福建卷) When faced with the difficulty,the child didnt give up but managed to over come it.,7.当状语从句中的主语是it,谓语动词中又含有be动词时,可以把it和be动词同时省略。常用的连词有if,unless,when(ever),wh
14、erever等。典句引领I want to smile whenever and wherever (it is) possible.我想随时随地地笑。雕词琢句如果可能的话,你应该练习说普通话。(2015四川卷)If possible,you should practice speaking Mandarin.,二、学以致用1.完美文章结合括号中的提示,用合适的倒装或省略句式完成下面的文章(1) So beautiful was Jiuzhaigou(九寨沟如此美丽)that I had dreamed about traveling there.Last year,I realised my
15、 dream,spending three days in Jiuzhaigou,where the charming sights made a deep impression on me.Only then(2) did I realise(我才意识到) that traveling was quite necessary for improving my life quality.However,(3) when seeing some visitors throwing rubbish(当看到一些游客丢垃圾) here and there,I felt very angry.I tho
16、ught it was high time that some effective measures be taken to make travelers aware of the importance of protecting the environment.Only in this way (4) could Jiuzhaigou become more and more beautiful(九寨沟才能变得越来越美丽).,2.话题写作【本期话题】兴趣爱好【写作微练】根据下面的信息提示,写一篇80词左右的英语短文。1.说到个人兴趣,我非常喜欢音乐;2.它不仅能丰富我们的生活,还可以使我们得
17、到放松;3.在高中学习的时候,我学了音乐欣赏这门课;4.我非常喜欢音乐,一有时间就唱各种各样的歌曲;5.尽管在考试后我感到非常累,但仍然没有停止唱歌;6.直到那时我才意识到我是多么喜欢音乐。注意:至少运用三种倒装或省略形式。,答案One possible version:When it comes to my interest,I do like music very much.Not only can it enrich our life,but also it can relax us especially when we are tired.When studying in high s
18、chool,I took one course called “Music Appreciation”.So much did I like music that whenever possible I would sing all kinds of songs. Tired as I was after exams,I didnt stop doing that.Only then did I realise how much I loved music.,本文档仅为全套资料之一，欢迎点击下方按钮链接，下载全套资料！,请点此到下载本文全套资料,三、实战提能假设你是李华,上周你所在的研究性学习
19、小组对你校学生的健康状况进行了一次调查。请根据下面的信息写一篇英语短文,刊登在你校的英文校报上。1.健康现状:肥胖、近视等健康问题逐年增多;2.问题原因:作业负担重、饮食不均衡等;3.你的建议:。注意:1.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;2.参考词汇:肥胖 obesity近视 short-sightedness,我会审题,我会联想1.词汇铺路(1)现象phenomenon(2)负担burden(3)均衡的balanced(4)做调查conduct a survey(5)采取有效措施take effective measures,(6)垃圾食品junk food(7)更糟糕的是whats wors
20、e/worse still2.句型搭桥(1)There are various reasons for.(2)In order to.(3)Its suggested that,我会表达,答案One possible version:Our research group conducted a survey of the health condition of the students studying in our school.It shows health problems are common among students,such as obesity and short-sight
21、edness.There are various reasons for the phenomenon. When faced with endless homework and exams,many students have little time to do exercise. So busy are they that they find it difficult to have enough sleep.Whats worse,a great many students dont have a balanced diet.,In order to solve the problems,its suggested that not only should the school reduce students learning burden, but also some effe
