1、Proof Reading 高考高考短文改错短文改错二、高考新课标I卷短文改错测试点统计 2019201920192019总计动词00112名词11114介词11114连词11316代词01102副词20114形容词32038时态与语态13116冠词11114I 从词法从词法角度去分析角度去分析III 从逻辑角度分析从逻辑角度分析II 从句法角度去分析从句法角度去分析 短文改错口诀:动词形,名词数,还要注意形和副;非谓语,细辨别,代词用法前后顾;介词短语需关注,冠词连词常光顾。一、动词形主要包括三类错误:主要包括三类错误:动词的动词的时态时态错误错误动词的动词的语态语态错误错误1.主、谓不一致
2、主、谓不一致的错误的错误时态时态Both Dad and I panned to do something on Mothers Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went shopping.got主、谓不一致My dream school look like a big garden.There are all kinds of flowers.语态Every day he makes sure that fresh vegetables and high quality oil are usi
3、ng for cooking.looksused1.For all these years,we had been allowing tomatoes to 1.For all these years,we had been allowing tomatoes to selfself seed where they please.seed where they please.2.My father took me out camping for the first time.2.My father took me out camping for the first time.My My unc
4、les all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.uncles all come along with bows and arrows for hunting.3.Share with others makes me feel happy.3.Share with others makes me feel happy.4.4.Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain Dont panic or get out of line,and trying to remain quiet a
5、nd calm.quiet and calm.havecameSharingtry练习二、名词数可数名词单、复数形式错误不可数名词错加复数可数名词Since thenfor all these yearwe have been allowing tomatoes to self-seed where they please.years 2019全国卷II:We can broaden our view and gain knoledges we cannot get from books.knowledge常见的不可数名词:news,advice,homework,houseworkinfor
6、mation,progress,fun,equipment1 1.The man said,“my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on.The man said,“my tooth are in the piece of chocolate on the floor.”the floor.”2 2.Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking.Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking.3 3.Im deep
7、ly grateful for your advice that I should pay more.Im deeply grateful for your advice that I should pay more attentions to practising my spoken English.attentions to practising my spoken English.attentionteethtimes三、还要注意形和副注意形容词和副词在句子中的作用和具体用法。这也是高考短文改错题的常考点。1.形容词修饰名词2.主系表结构中 形容词做表语3.副词修饰动词4.副词置于句首修
8、饰整个句子,用逗号与主句隔开5.原级,比较级和最高级的误用。1.Instead,he hopes that our business will grow steady.2.The teachers here are kind and helpfully.3.We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!4.I hope I can practise my spoken English there as more as possible.steadilyhelpfulmuchwonderful四、非谓语,细辨别这是考查最多的错误形式之一。主要有现在
9、分词,动名词 -ing 主动 进行 习惯过去分词-ed 被动 过去不定式 to do 将来 主动 单次具体2019全国卷全国卷II:We can choose between staying at home and take a trip.2019浙江卷:浙江卷:He would ask who we were and pretend not to knowing us.knowtaking1.前后人称不一致。2.人称代词,物主代词,反身代词的误用3.主格宾格误用(动词,介词后)3.不定代词的误用及混用。五、代词用法前后顾1.The survey also shows that librari
10、es are where 1.The survey also shows that libraries are where students get most of his books.students get most of his books.2.My uncles immediately jumped up and shot 2.My uncles immediately jumped up and shot their arrows on the bird.Neither of the arrows hit their arrows on the bird.Neither of the
11、 arrows hit the target.the target.Nonetheir3.Though situations are tough today,a lot of we post80s are 3.Though situations are tough today,a lot of we post80s are making great efforts to live a good life.making great efforts to live a good life.4.It has been repaired several times over its past one
12、hundred 4.It has been repaired several times over its past one hundred years history.years history.5.I think important to learn the computer well.5.I think important to learn the computer well.6.Thank you for the English dictionary that you bought it for 6.Thank you for the English dictionary that y
13、ou bought it for me.me.itsitus1人 称人 称代词代词主格主格 I,you,he,she,it,we,you,they宾格宾格 me,you,him,her,it,us,you,them2物 主物 主代词代词形容形容词性词性my,your,his,her,its,our,their名词名词性性mine,yours,his,hers,its,ours,theirs3 反身代词反身代词myself,yourself,himself,herself,itself,ourselves,yourselves,themselves4 指示代词指示代词this,that,thes
14、e,those,such,some5 疑问代词疑问代词who,whom,whose,which,what,whoever,whichever,whatever6 关系代词关系代词that,which,who,whom,whose,as7 不定代词不定代词one/some/any,each/every,none/no,many/much,few/little/a few/a little,other/another,all/both,neither/either主要考查介词短语和习惯用法的搭配。其错误表现形式主要有三种:多词、少词和搭配错误。in Sunday afternoon catch a
15、 sight ofin hurry aon六、介词短语需关注1.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait 1.If you hear the alarm,stand in line at the door and wait your teacher to lead you outside.your teacher to lead you outside.2.After the boy came to himself,we sent him hospital at 2.After the boy came to himsel
16、f,we sent him hospital at once and telephoned his parents.once and telephoned his parents.tofor3.Nearly five years ago,with the help by our father,I 3.Nearly five years ago,with the help by our father,I planted some cherry tomatoes.planted some cherry tomatoes.4.I am grateful that I got the chance t
17、o learn for him.4.I am grateful that I got the chance to learn for him.5.Soon they came up a good idea.5.Soon they came up a good idea.fromwithof.冠词a,an和the的错用或少用.连词but,and,or,so,because,although,therefore,however的错用2019全国全国I:My uncle says that he never dreams of becoming rich in the short period of
18、 time.2019全国卷全国卷I:As result,the plants are growing everywhere.a 七、冠词、连词常光顾a1.Today I can still remember how I became good table tennis player.2.But there was a man sitting beside her in a next seat.3.Besides,Cleo tends to bark a average of six hours a day.4.On Monday,Li Ming was energetic but active
19、 in class.5.“Should I choose a good major and a good university?6.They had expected to find a free place to live in,so they experienced a hard winter.atheanandorbut1.以改变实词形式为原则.2.以单词形式变化最小为原则.3.以添删或更换虚词为原则.4.以多“改正”少“添删”为原则5.以保持原意不变为原则短文改错应注意的问题短文改错应注意的问题 五改标点符号不改。大小写不改。词序错误不改。在纲外生词不改。在纲外生词不改。四不改PRAC
20、TICEOur English teacher begin to teach us in 2019.She had been teaching English for more than two year.She likes we,and she is very strict in all of us.Although she is a bit short and not so beautifully,but we consider her as our friend.She is really good teacher.We are love her very much.Were sure
21、well get in well with each other.began hasyearsuswithbeautifulaon动词形动词形名词数名词数代词用法前后顾介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记还要注意形和副还要注意形和副冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾动词形动词形冠词连词常光顾冠词连词常光顾动词形动词形介词短语要牢记介词短语要牢记2019四川卷四川卷 Mom has a full-time job,so she has to do most of the houseworks.She is a great mother.Both Dad or I planned to do something
22、 on Mother s Day.We get up early in the morning.Dad cleaned the house,and then went on shopping.When he came back,I found a bunch of flowers in her hand.I asked Mom to stay in the sitting room and I cooked in kitchen.The dishes what I cooked were Moms favoritest.At dinner,we said to her,“Happy Mothe
23、rs Day!”Mom was grateful and moving.butIhouseworkfavoritehistheandgotthatmovedIm extreme sorry to say that I cant go shopping with you on this weekend as planned.The reason is because I have justbeen informed that Ill have to take the exam.Around 3 oclock this afternoon I come to see you and wanted
24、to tell you about it in person,only find were out.Therefore,I left this notes for you.I hope we can make it next week.I would quite appreciate It if you could tell me when itis convenience for you to go shopping next week.Or,telling me if I can buy you what you need when you go shopping.Anyway,I hop
25、e you will have a niceWeekend.extremelyIconvenientantothatcamenotetellIPART IIII从句法的角度去分析从句法的角度去分析:1.He put it in a secret place where I couldnt find.which2.The house which Lu Xun once lived is being repaired now.where3.Ill never forget the day which I first went to school.when关系代词和关系副词的误用关系代词和关系副词的
26、误用1.We would return at night to hear that hed picked up from the radio in the day.what2.But it didnt matter that I would win or not.whether 3.When people are playing games,they move a lot.That is how sports are good activities for their health.why连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用连接代词和连接副词及从属连词的混用1.He got up early i
27、n order to he could catch the first.that2.Make a mark which you have any doubts or questions.where引导词的误用引导词的误用As we climbed the mountains,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories.2)I particularly enjoyed driving through the countryside with you and saw the changing colors of the leaves on the trees.visitedseeing 3)Why you think so many people still suffer from poverty now?4)Hot water is provided for 24 hours,but lifts work day and night.5)I thought it was dull to watch a game in which players kicked a ball to each other.Therefore,my father loves football.andHoweverdoThank You!