1、PART THREE第三篇 写作妙解篇话题写作（一）人物介绍 与人物故事【话题点睛】人物介绍与人物故事类书面表达一般针对考生熟悉的著名人物或者同学、朋友等来设题,要求考生对人物进行描写、介绍。此类试题通常以要点提示或者表格提示的方式来考查,主要涉及人物的简单介绍、具体事件的描述、变化以及自己对此人物的情感、评价等。词汇集锦1.年龄类age;be born on;ones birthday is;15 years old;a 15-year-old boy2.体貌类身材:tall;short;be of medium height;fat;thin;slim;strong;weak长相:beau
2、tiful;handsome;pretty;lovely;nice;cute;good-looking;ugly头发:long hair;straight hair;curly hair;black hair;brown hair面部:a round/square face;a sweet face;a big nose;two bright eyes;smooth skin3.性格类hard-working;helpful;clever;active;（im）patient;creative;confident;kind;（un）friendly;brave;outgoing;humorou
3、s;quiet;silent;serious;（im）polite;careful/careless;（dis）honest;shy;funny4.兴趣类habit;hobby;interest;（dis）like;hate;prefer;rather than;love;enjoy（doing）;be good at常用表达1.My friend Jenny comes from New York.2.She has a round face and often wears a pair of glasses.3.He often helps his classmates with thei
4、r homework,and also helps the people in trouble.4.She gets on well with her friends.5.Hes very outgoing and brave.6.In her spare time,she loves listening to music.基础写作根据汉语意思完成句子1.他每天早上骑自行车上学,并且准时到校。He goes to school every morning and gets to school.2.桑迪做完作业后喜欢弹钢琴来自我放松一下。Sandy likes to to relax herse
5、lf after .3.她是如此容易相处,以至于我们都把她看作朋友。She is so easy to that we all regard her.4.她总是在课堂上认真听讲并做笔记。She always the teachers carefully and take notes.5.丹尼尔上学期参加了写作竞赛并且获得了一等奖。Daniel the writing competition and last term.by bike/on his bikeon timeplay the pianofinishing her homeworkget along/on withas our fri
6、endlistens toin classjoined inwon first prize6.我的英语老师总是在工作上对自己严格要求。My English teacher is always herself .7.基蒂总是对待他人很友好,所以她在同学当中很受欢迎。Kitty is always ,so she is very the classmates.8.我的弟弟有足够的耐心,他等半小时也不会生气。My brother is to wait for half an hour without .strict within her workfriendly to otherspopular a
7、mong/withpatient enoughgetting/being/becoming angry典型分析Teenagers杂志邀请你参加他们组织的作文比赛,作文题目为“My best friend”。请根据以下表格提示写一篇短文参赛。MaryAppearancetall and slim,prettyFacelongHairdark brown,shortEyesbig,brightNosesmallPersonalityhelpful,patient,hard-workingHobbiessinging and dancingWhat do you think of her and w
8、hat can you learn from her?要求（1）短文须包含表格内的所有信息,可适当发挥以使文章通顺、连贯、完整;（2）词数:100左右。【思路点拨】1.找出关键点:主体部分是关于外貌、性格特征、爱好;2.列出提纲:根据以上三个方面简单列出提纲;3.明确时态:主要使用一般现在时;4.确定人称:第三人称;5.重点词汇及句型:（1）tall and slim,big and bright,like two diamonds,small and short,help sb with sth,listen to others problems carefully,offer them s
9、ome advice,the top student,take part in after-school activities,suchthat（2）由连词and和but引导的并列句【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】Mary is my best friend.She is tall and slim and she looks pretty.Her face is long and she has short dark brown hair.Her eyes are big and bright,like two diamonds,but her nose is small.She is a help
10、ful girl.She often helps me with my English.She is also patient.She can listen to others problems carefully and offer them some advice.She works very hard and is the top student in my class.She likes singing and dancing.She often takes part in after-school activities.She is such a good friend that I
11、 want to be friends with her for ever.I want to be a person like her.【名师点评】1.运用了丰富的短语描述人物的外貌与性格特征,如big and bright,like two diamonds,small等。2.运用事实来论证论点,每个品质后都有事例支撑,使文章有理有据。3.要点描写全面。实战演练A2018聊城 假如你要竞选你班的体育委员,请你用英语进行竞选演讲。演讲的主要内容包括:（1）自己喜欢体育,身体健康;（2）擅长球类运动,尤其是足球和篮球;（3）可以传授运动技巧,帮助大家比赛取得最佳成绩。注意（1）词数:80左右;
12、（2）可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;（3）演讲中不得出现真实的校名和人名;（4）演讲的开头已给出,不计入总词数。I want to be the PE monitor.A One possible version:I want to be the PE monitor.I enjoy sports,and I can run very fast.Im really fit and healthy.Just watch me in the playground between lessons!I play most ball games well.But Im really good at f
13、ootball,and I play basketball in the school team.Because I have a lot of playing skills,I usually get the best score in every match.I can teach you some if you like it.Choose me as the PE monitor and you can get the best score too!B2017泰州 今年暑假,你校学生会将组织“泰州教育大阅读”宣传小分队,需要在初中毕业生中招募一批志愿者。假设你是李华,请根据以下内容提示
14、用英语写一封自荐信。1.个人读书情况:（1）喜爱读书,每年阅读达十本以上;（2）读书的时间、方式及最喜爱读的书;（3）读书的感悟（至少两点）。2.个人自荐条件:（1）擅长演讲,善于与他人沟通;（2）暑期有自由支配的时间,家长支持。要求（1）词数100左右。开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。（2）所写内容必须包括内容提示中所有的信息,并可作适当的发挥。（3）不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to apply to be a volunteer to promote（宣传）reading among middle school s
15、tudents in Taizhou.I think I am suitable for the job.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours truly,Li HuaB One possible version:Dear Sir or Madam,I am writing to apply to be a volunteer to promote reading among middle school students in Taizhou.I have loved reading since I was young.I ha
16、ve a habit of reading in my spare time.At weekends I also go to the library to do some reading.At school I often read with my iPad.I often download some books from the Internet and read them with my friends.I read more than ten great books a year.There are many books that are my favourite such as Fi
17、ve Thousand Years,Little Red Riding Hood and so on.Reading makes a full man.It not only increases our knowledge,improves our abilities to solve problems,but also helps us form a good habit with the feelings of happiness.I do well in making a speech and Im good at communicating with others.I have a lot of free time during the summer vacation.My parents also encourage me to do whatever I like.I think I am suitable for the job.I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours truly,Li Hua
