1、台州市第一中学台州市第一中学 周永鹏周永鹏 台台州市区州市区 读后续写讲评课读后续写讲评课 2016.10.25barbecuesunrisea sea of cloudstentwindmill风车风车sausage香肠香肠Q1：Where did I camp?Q2：In your opinion,what should be taken to make a good camping?1.an appropriate amount of food and drinks2.warm clothes to stay away from coldness3.first-aid box in ca
2、se of emergency4.a cellphone to take pictures and contact5.a companinon to take care of each other.My first camping trip Kuocang MountainJane Tom lake walked climbed at a distance stream to her great joy helicopter yellow blouse who(人物）：人物）：setting（场景）：（场景）：event（事件）：（事件）：Jane&Tomlake streamwalked c
3、limbedhelicopter yellow blouseto her great joy at a distance？Predict:Classify:Read the underlined key wordsin the forest or mountainin need of helpRead the timeline of the storyTimelineOne weekend in JulyJane rose at the break of dayIt was daybreak when she woke up.Para.5-7Para.8Para.1-4Who:What:How
4、:Why:Read Day 1Jane&Tom camp overnight by a lake in the forestan unpleasant subject came upleft Tom and walked away alone(a couple)Q1：How did Jane restore her strength?Read Day 2She walked along the stream.Because of the treesGoing to an open area to flag them using yellow blouse She drank and ate a
5、 few berries.Q2：What did Jane try to do to return to the lake?Q3：Why did she fail to be noticed by the helicopters?Q4：What was her thought to make helicopters notice her?One weekend in July,Jane and her husband Tom drove to a lake to _ overnight.On the way they had a _,Jane was so _ that she walked
6、away.Suddenly,she found herself _ and had to stay for the night.The next day,she restored her strength and tried to return to the lake by _ along the stream.She heard two _ but failed to be _ because of the trees.So she went to an _ area to _ them using yellow blouse if they came back again.Summariz
7、e the main plot based on para.1 to 6 campquarrelangrylostwalkinghelicoptersnoticedopenflag1.By the time they reached the lake,Jane was so angry that.(para1)2.“Tom!”she cried.“Help!”(para3)3.Lying awake in the dark,Jane wanted very much to be with Tom and her family.She wanted to hold him and tell hi
8、m.(para4)4.To her great joy,she also saw some berry bushes.She drank and ate a few berries.Never in her life had she tasted anything better.(para5)5.Is that for me?(para6)6.But no more helicopters came that afternoon.(para7)angryRead the change of Janes feelingsscaredregretfuldisappointed？Q：What kin
9、d of person is Jane?joyfulhopefulimplusive冲动的冲动的smartPara.7:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Para.8:It was daybreak when she woke up.In para.7,If Jane&Tom still didnt find each other,In para.7,If Jane&Tom finally found each other,Analyze the 2 leading sentences&predict the
10、developmentPossibility 1Possibility 2 she probably spent another night in the forest.In para.8,Jane was finally rescued.she may spend the second night at home/in the hospital.In para.8,Jane woke up and they shared loving words.Para.7:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.Q1:How
11、did Jane feel?stayed in the forest for another nightQ2:What could she do?disappointed/hopelessQ3:What was Tom probably doing at that time?worried about Jane and didnt give up searchingMake an outline of Para.7 Possibility 1missed Tom and her family morePara.8:It was daybreak when she woke up.Q1:What
12、 would Jane do after she woke up?He or Rescue workers spotted Jane in the helicopter and landed to rescue her.Q2:Did Tom finally find Jane?How?She went to the open area waiting for the helicopter.Q3:What would be their reaction when meeting each other again?They may hug each other and share loving w
13、ords.Make an outline of Para.8 Possibility 1Jane Tom lake walked climbed at a distance stream to her great joy helicopter yellow blousePara.7:But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again.1.Jane was disappointed and hopeless.2.She had to stay in the forest for another night and missed T
14、om.3.Tom was very worried and didnt give up searching.Para.8:It was daybreak when she woke up.1.Jane still went to the open area waiting for the helicopter.2.Tom spotted Jane in the helicopter and landed to rescue her.3.They hugged each other and share loving words.Choose at least 5 underlined key w
15、ords for further use Jane was disappointed and hopeless.She had to stay in the forest for another night and missed Tom.Tom was very worried and didnt give up searching.Tired and disappointed,Jane felt hopeless and couldnt help blaming herself.The sense of fear and the darkness surrounded her,making
16、her feel even more regretful for her foolish behavior.She had no choice but to stop for another night,spending the long and lonely night.A gust of cold wind blew and she started to miss the warmth of Toms hug.Her dream was all about Tom and the sweet memories of their family life.As for Tom,the conc
17、ern for his wife grew with the passage of time.He was in the helicopter,searching for Jane with all his efforts.Though the search proved fruitless,the difficulty was no match for his deep love and firm determination.Expand the outline of Para.7 into a passagePara.7:But no more helicopters came and i
18、t was getting dark again.Tired and disappointed,Jane felt hopeless and couldnt help blaming herself.The sense of fear and the darkness surrounded her,making her feel even more regretful for her foolish behavior.She had no choice but to stop for another night,spending the long and lonely night.A gust
19、 of cold wind blew and she started to miss the warmth of Toms hug.Her dream was all about Tom and the sweet memories of their family life.As for Tom,the concern for his wife grew with the passage of time.He was in the helicopter,searching for Jane with all his efforts.Though the search proved fruitl
20、ess,the difficulty was no match for his deep love and firm determination.Expand the outline of Para.7 into a passageJane still went to the open area waiting for the helicopter.Tom spotted Jane in the helicopter and landed to rescue her.They hugged each other and shared loving words.She drank and ate
21、 a few berries as the day before.She was waiting in the open area when a helicopter at a distance came into sight.With the sound getting louder and closer,she jumped,yelled and waved the yellow blouse with all her strength to be noticed.To her great joy,she was spotted and the helicopter landed in a
22、 minute.It was Tom who jumped out of the helicopter first.He rushed to Jane and took her into his arms tightly.“Thank Goodness,I know you will come to me,”Jane sobbed.Despite the big sound of helicopter,Jane could still hear the gentle words“Honey,I love you.”from Tom.Expand the outline of Para.8 in
23、to a passagePara.8:It was daybreak when she woke up.She drank and ate a few berries as the day before.She was waiting in the open area when a helicopter at a distance came into sight.With the sound getting louder and closer,she jumped,yelled and waved the yellow blouse with all her strength to be no
24、ticed.To her great joy,she was spotted and the helicopter landed in a minute.It was Tom who jumped out of the helicopter first.He rushed to Jane and took her into his arms tightly.“Thank Goodness,I know you will come to me,”Jane sobbed.Despite the big sound of helicopter,Jane could still hear the ge
25、ntle words“Honey,I love you.”from Tom.Expand the outline of Para.8 into a passageTrue love never failsDecide the theme for the storyCherish what you haveSolve the problems positivelyNever give up when in trouble(A)(B)(C)(D)1.The difficulty is no match for Toms love and duty.2.There is no doubt that
26、the risky experience made the bond between them much stronger.3.Finally they went home together and know they should treasure each other.4.Love is one thing which will never fade away despite the argument.5.No matter difficult the situation is,we should never give up hope.6.It was their true love th
27、at saved Jane.7.Thus,appreciate things you have now because youll know how much you need them when you lose them.8.No matter how difficult it was,their love would lead the way for them.9.They hugged each other tightly and promised that they wont ignore each others feeling anymore.10.Only if you have
28、 the belief of survival can you get out of trouble.Which theme does each sentence reflect?11.It was last night that I realized how much I love you.The little quarrel will separate us.12.Through this experience,they both had a deep understanding of their love.13.They never argue again.Instead,they so
29、lved problems with patience and much understanding.14.Valuing what we have now is the most important thing.15.With these words,they hugged each other as nobody can separate them.16.It was Janes strong belief that rescued her.17.Its true that nowhere else can be better than somewhere you are with you
30、r beloved.18.Jane knew forgiving was so important that she would never do wrong things with anger.19.Only when you have the risk of losing will you realize the meaning of true love.20.Love is the strongest bond that binds you&your loved ones together.Which theme does each sentence reflect?No matter
31、how difficult it was,their love would lead the way for them.My theme for the story:True love never failsDecide the theme for the storyCherish what you haveSolve the problems positivelyNever give up when in trouble(A)(B)(C)(D)True love never failsBut no more helicopters came and it was getting dark a
32、gain.Tired and disappointed,Jane felt hopeless and couldnt help blaming herself.The sense of fear and the darkness surrounded her,making her feel even more regretful for her foolish behavior.She had no choice but to stop for another night,spending the long and lonely night.A gust of cold wind blew a
33、nd she started to miss the warmth of Toms hug.Her dream was all about Tom and the sweet memories of their family life.As for Tom,the concern for his wife grew with the passage of time.He was in the helicopter,searching for Jane with all his efforts.Though the search proved fruitless,the difficulty w
34、as no match for his deep love and firm determination.It was daybreak when she woke up.She drank and ate a few berries as the day before.She was waiting in the open area when a helicopter at a distance came into sight.With the sound getting louder and closer,she jumped,yelled and waved the yellow blo
35、use with all her strength to be noticed.To her great joy,she was spotted and the helicopter landed in a minute.It was Tom who jumped out of the helicopter first.He rushed to Jane and took her into his arms tightly.“Thank Goodness,I know you will come to me.”Jane sobbed.Despite the big sound of helicopter,Jane could still hear the gentle words“Honey,I love you.”from Tom.No matter how difficult it was,their love would lead the way for them.One possible version of final draft
