1、A Picture DescriptionWriting WorkshopUnit 5 Shanzhou Middle School01Learning Learning ObjectivesObjectivesTo read for writing02To write an essay about a picture03To develop a proper attitude to social mediaShanzhou Middle School Look at picture B and read the essay and then answer the following two
2、questions.Task 11.From the writers point of view,what is the mans personality?2.What lesson is the picture trying to teach?Read for WritingShanzhou Middle SchoolTask 11.From the writers point of view,what is the mans personality?Read for WritingFrom the writers point of view,the man obviously loves
3、routines and doing without thinking.Shanzhou Middle School Read for Writing2.What lesson is the picture trying to teach?.lIts important to have routines and timetable,but sometimes routines can control us.lIts important not to become too preoccupied with routines and schedules.Sometimes we need to b
4、e flexible andadapt to changing circumstances.Shanzhou Middle SchoolAnalysis of the picture/person(s)Description of the pictureLessons from the pictureABCGeneral introductionD Focus on Structure Task 2.Complete the structure of the text by putting the different parts in the correct orderShanzhou Mid
5、dle SchoolUnderline the linking words and useful sentences in the text.Focus on Language Task 3 Shanzhou Middle School1.Linking Words:2.to describe a picture:a.In the picture,.b.The drawing is entitled.a.The overall message we can take from the picture is that b.It is important to.,because Shanzhou
6、Middle Schoolhowever ,because,for ,as ,but ,even though,therefore3.to analyze a picture:Task 4 Practice请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解，以Come Back to Reality为题，用英语写一篇作文。你的作文应包括以下内容：1.简要描述漫画的内容；2.概述你对这幅图的理解；3.你的观点。注意：1.可参照漫画适当发挥；2.词数100左右；Shanzhou Middle School outlineoutlinePara.3 viewpointPara.1 description of the p
7、icturePara.2 understanding of the pictureShanzhou Middle SchoolTry to describe and analyze the picture with the help of the following five questions.1.What is the woman busy doing?2.What can you infer from the look of the people at the door?3.What do you think of the womans behavior？4.What will happ
8、en to the woman if she keeps doing like this?5.To come back to reality,what will you do?Shanzhou Middle SchoolGroup WorkGroup WorkGet ready for Writing1.What is the woman busy doing?She is busy chatting with on-line friends and trying to add more on-line friends through social media.2.What can you i
9、nfer from the look of the people at the door?They are eager to make friends with her.Shanzhou Middle School3.What do you think of the womans behavior？It is inappropriate because she ignores friends in reality.4.What will happen to the woman if she keeps doing like this?She will be cut off from reali
10、ty.She will feel lonely when she is back to reality.Shanzhou Middle School5.To come back to reality,what will you do?I will interact more with friends and try to find more pleasure in real life.As a student,I will devote my full attention to study.Shanzhou Middle SchoolCompose Your Writing请你根据对下面这幅漫
11、画的理解，以Come Back to Reality为题，用英语写一篇作文。你的作文应包括以下内容：1.简要描述漫画的内容；2.概述你对这幅图的理解；3.你的观点。注意：1.可参照漫画适当发挥；2.词数100左右；Shanzhou Middle SchoolShanzhou Middle SchoolPRESENTATION要求分值清楚传达信息4语法正确2运用恰当连接词、过渡词和过渡句2有高级表达1拼写正确，书写规范1Shanzhou Middle SchoolShanzhou Middle SchoolOne possible version As is shown in the pictu
12、re,a woman is sitting in front of the computer and trying to add more friends to her facebook.Just outside the door,some people are eagerly watching her,hoping to make friends with her.Shanzhou Middle SchoolOne possible version This picture reminds me of many young people who are computer addicts.Th
13、ey lost themselves in the virtual world and if it continues,they will eventually be cut off from reality.There is no doubt that the virtual world can be exciting,but thats not the reason for us to go too far.Too much time and energy devoted to the Internet can lead to a disaster,mentally and physica
14、lly.The real world that we live in is what counts.Shanzhou Middle SchoolOne possible version As for myself,Ill devote myself to worthwhile things in real life,from making friends to my studies.If necessary,I will seek information on the Internet,but I wont be addicted to it.Only in this way can I ma
15、ke my life full and valuable.Self-evaluationYour AbilityYour Score 1.I have been able to draw an outline for picture description writings2.I have been able to use some sentence patterns to describe a picture and get some lesson from it.3.I have been able to use linking words to make my essay coherent.Shanzhou Middle SchoolShanzhou Middle SchoolHomeworkWrite an essay about one hundred words to analyze the picture.ANKTHANKS FOR YOUR LISTENINGHTSShanzhou Middle School
