1、【2021广州中考真题】今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文的日记记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点：1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生；2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范 3.你的收获和感受。注意：1.参考词汇：跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion);2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）;3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Monday,May 31stDear Diary,Today,we had a special online PE lesson._第一步第一步:审题审题 Examine the topic审题
2、审题体裁体裁 Style 人称人称 person时态时态 tense要点要点 information要求要求 request认真审题，在题干中划出相应内容审题审题今天，跳绳世界冠军李华给大家上了一节云体育课。请写一则英文的日记记录这特别的一课。日记需包括以下要点：1.授课者：李华，14岁，红星中学学生；2.上课内容：跳绳讲解和示范 3.你的收获和感受。注意：1.参考词汇：跳绳(rope skipping)、冠军(champion);2.词数：80词左右（日记的开头已给出，不计入词数）;3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。Monday,May 31stDear Diary,Tod
3、ay,we had a special online PE lesson._要求要点体裁体裁：日记（应用文）人称：第三人称时态：一般过去时为主第二步：列出提纲（Outline）BeginningEndingBodyIntroduction Li Hua14 years old the student of Hongxing Middle Schoolexplain the way of rope skippingshow us how to skip.learn a lot about skippingskip well by practicing.第三步：根据提纲写句子(Write sent
4、ences)介绍：The teacher was the world champion of rope skipping.His name is Li Hua.He is 14 years old.He is a student of Hongxing Middle School.内容：He explained the way of rope skipping and showed us how to do it.收获和感受：I learnt a lot about rope skipping.I can skip well by practicing.It was taught by a 1
5、4-year-old boy named Li Hua who has become the world champion of rope skipping.Besides,Li Hua is a student of Hongxing Junior High School.Today he worked as a teacher and tried his best to teach us how to skip ropes.First,he explained the way of rope skipping carefully.Then,he skipped ropes himself
6、to help us learn better.After that,he told his experience to us.From the special lesson,I learnt a lot of tips about rope skipping.Whats more,I learnt that the best way to do something best is by prasticing it a lot.Practice makes perfect.What an interesting lesson we had!写作提升策略一 巧用连接词：It was taught
7、 by a 14-year-old boy named Li Hua who has become the world champion of rope skipping.Besides,Li Hua is a student of Hongxing Junior High School.Today he worked as a teacher and tried his best to teach us how to skip ropes.First,he explained the way of rope skipping carefully.Then,he skipped ropes h
8、imself to help us learn better.After that,he told his experience to us.From the special lesson,I learnt a lot of tips about rope skipping.Whats more,I learnt that the best way to do something best is by prasticing it a lot.Practice makes perfect.What an interesting lesson we had!第四步：美化文章（Beautify th
9、e writing）注意添加关联词，过渡句！书面要整洁！表并列 and,also,as well as,both and,Whats more(而且),besides,in addition.表对比 but,however,yet,although,while,.表条件 if,unless,as long as表原因 because,because of,for,since ,as表结果 so,therefore,as a result,sothat,suchthat表说明 like,such as,for example.表顺序 first(ly),second(ly),first of a
10、ll,then,after that next,finally.表总结 in a word,in my opinion(以我之见)表目的 in order to,so that 写作提升策略一 巧用连接词：写作提升策略二 词汇润色：It was taught by a 14-year-old boy named Li Hua who has become the world champion of rope skipping.Besides,Li Hua is a student of Hongxing Junior High School.Today he worked as a teach
11、er and tried his best to teach us how to skip ropes.First,he explained the way of rope skipping carefully.Then,he skipped ropes himself to help us learn better.After that,he told his experience to us.From the special lesson,I learnt a lot of tips about rope skipping.Whats more,I learnt that the best
12、 way to do something best is by prasticing it a lot.Practice makes perfect.What an interesting lesson we had!Tips：1.高级词；2.短语；3.修饰词第四步：美化文章（Beautify the writing）写作提升策略三 句式提升：It was taught by a 14-year-old boy named Li Hua who has become the world champion of rope skipping.Besides,Li Hua is a student
13、of Hongxing Junior High School.Today he worked as a teacher and tried his best to teach us how to skip ropes.First,he explained the way of rope skipping carefully.Then,he skipped ropes himself to help us learn better.After that,he told his experience to us.From the special lesson,I learnt a lot of t
14、ips about rope skipping.Whats more,I learnt that the best way to do something best is by prasticing it a lot.Practice makes perfect.What an interesting lesson we had!被动语态加强语气定语从句宾语从句成语/名言感叹句表达感情第四步：美化文章（Beautify the writing）写作提升策略三 句式提升：感叹句：What a meaningful lesson!How interesting the book is!比较级、最高
15、级句型：比较级+and+比较级（越来越.）the+比较级，the+比较级（越.,就越.）one of the+最高级+名词复数（最.之一）it作形式主语：It seems that something bad has happened to him.被动语态：Chinese is spoken by many people around the world.名言：Never say die.（永不言败）Where there is a will,there is a way.（有志者事竟成）God help those who help themselves.（天道酬勤）写作提升策略三 句式提
16、升：宾语从句：The lesson has told me that we should never give up.定语从句：This is the best film that I have ever seen.状语从句：结果状语从句（so.that./such.that.）目的状语从句（so that.）条件状语从句（if/unless/as long as）时间状语从句（before/after/while/when/since/until）比较状语从句（as.as/not as.as）原因状语从句（because/since/as）让步状语从句（although/though/eve
17、n though/even if）style、person、tense 、spelling 体裁 人称 时态 拼写 grammar、capital、punctuation 语法 大小写 标点 information we know and dont know已知和未知要点第五步：检查改错（Check your composition）在时间允许的情况下可以先打草稿再抄写！第六步：书写规范,卷面整洁高分首先看卷面！6.5.4.3.2.1.书面表达Summary【Lets practise小练笔】随着“双减”政策的落地，中小学生也迎来了丰富的业余生活。假如你是李华，“双减”政策将在你市落实。请根据
18、以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈“双减”政策落实后，你将如何规划自己的业余生活。内容包括：1发展个人的兴趣爱好；2多读书，多做家务；3多参加社会活动。要求：1语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；2词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：Double Reduction Policy“双减”政策Im glad that Double Reduction Policy will be carried out in our city._第一步:审题 Examine the topic随着“双减”政策的落地，中小学生也迎来了丰富的业余生活。假如你是李华，
19、“双减”政策将在你市落实。请根据以下提示写一篇短文，谈谈“双减”政策落实后，你将如何规划自己的业余生活。内容包括：1发展个人的兴趣爱好；2多读书，多做家务；3多参加社会活动。要求：1语言表达准确，短文连贯、通顺；2词数80左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；3不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。参考词汇：Double Reduction Policy“双减”政策Im glad that Double Reduction Policy will be carried out in our city._体裁：说明文人称：第一人称时态：一般将来时要点Introduction(开篇点题）Ma
20、in body（文章主体）Conclusion（总结）Your opinions第二步：列出提纲（Outline）不要遗漏要点！Plans Develop some hobbiesRead more booksDo houseworkTake part in more social activities第三步&第四步:写&美(Write and beautify)开篇点题But how can I spend my spare time?Here are my plans.Now I cant wait to plan my after-school life in advance.规划1 d
21、evelop some hobbiesI would like to develop some interests,such as joining an art club,which will help me improve my sense of beauty.I would like to take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies to enrich my after-school life and gain some useful life skills at the same time.第三步&第四步:写&美(Write and beaut
22、ify)规划2 read more books and do houseworkI will make full use of the time to read more books and help my parents with the housework.I will read as many books as I can to open my mind and take the responsibility for the housework.规划3 take part in more social activitiesI am going to take part in more s
23、ocial activities so that I can improve myself in many ways.In order to improve my abilities,I am going to take part in more social activities.第三步&第四步:写&美(Write and beautify)总结 Im sure the Double Reduction Policy will help us grow up healthily and happily.As long as we can use our free time wisely,ou
24、r life will be better and better.第三步&第四步:写&美(Write and beautify)Im glad that Double Reduction Policy will be carried out in our city.Now I cant wait to plan my after-school life in advance._,I would like to take up some healthy and meaningful hobbies to enrich my after-school life and gain some usef
25、ul life skills at the same time._,I will make full use of the time to read more books and help my parents with housework._,I am going to take part in more social activities so that I can improve myself in many ways._,Im sure the Double Reduction Policy will help us grow up healthily and happily.Firs
26、tlySecondlyLastlyIn my opinion6.5.4.3.2.1.书面表达Summary注意添加关联词，过渡句！书面要整洁！表并列 and,also,as well as,both and,Whats more(而且),besides,in addition.表对比 but,however,yet,although,while,.表条件 if,unless,as long as表原因 because,because of,for,since ,as表结果 so,therefore,as a result,sothat,suchthat表说明 like,such as,for
27、example.表顺序 first(ly),second(ly),first of all,then,after that next,finally.表总结 in a word,in my opinion(以我之见)表目的 in order to,so that 写作提升策略一 巧用连接词：写作提升策略三 句式提升：感叹句：What a meaningful lesson!How interesting the book is!比较级、最高级句型：比较级+and+比较级（越来越.）the+比较级，the+比较级（越.,就越.）one of the+最高级+名词复数（最.之一）it作形式主语：I
28、t seems that something bad has happened to him.被动语态：Chinese is spoken by many people around the world.名言：Never say die.（永不言败）Where there is a will,there is a way.（有志者事竟成）God help those who help themselves.（天道酬勤）写作提升策略三 句式提升：宾语从句：The lesson has told me that we should never give up.定语从句：This is the best film that I have ever seen.状语从句：结果状语从句（so.that./such.that.）目的状语从句（so that.）条件状语从句（if/unless/as long as）时间状语从句（before/after/while/when/since/until）比较状语从句（as.as/not as.as）原因状语从句（because/since/as）让步状语从句（although/though/even though/even if）Thank you for listening!
