1、活动组织类Part 1审题谋篇审题一审话题二审时态三审人称审题 假如你是班长李明,你将安排你班外教的儿子Tom来武汉的活动,请用电子邮件告知。假如你是李明,你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩。请根据提示语,给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写一封E-mail,邀请他一同前往。审题 假如你是李华,你们班同学决定进行一次野餐,请你用英语给外教Jack写封邮件,邀请他参加。英语课上,老师要求同学们介绍个人周末计划。假设下面这个表格内容是你的计划提纲,请根据表格提示的活动内容,写一篇发言稿,介绍你的周末计划,并在班上与同学交流。审题 即将毕业的你,将如何处理初中阶段的各种书籍和笔记呢?假如你是李华,请根据
2、以下提示,给学生英文报写一封电子邮件,分享你处理这些书籍和笔记的计划与理由。假如你是杨佩,你的外教Mr.Smith 想组织几名学生去一个学校进行一次助学和联谊活动。请你参考下列信息,以书信形式向Mr.Smith提出申请,说明你打算如何开展这次活动并陈述理由。审题 你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。你是一名中学生,你家隔壁住着一位老人,你打算为他做一些力所能及的事情。请就此写一篇短文。短文的开头已给出,但不计入总词数。审题活动组织类作文的“WiFi”信号词将(要)、打算、决定、计划、准备审题主要时态中心人称一般将来时
3、第一人称/第三人称will+V-原be going to +V-原活动组织类谋篇谋篇篇章结构:总分总段落结构:总分(T-D模型)T 主题句:主题句:Topic SentenceD 拓展句:拓展句:Developing Sentence谋篇总(活动背景)总+分(活动细节)总(评价、感受)总分总套总分谋篇写作框架引出时间及事件背景引出时间及事件背景描述打算做的具体事件描述打算做的具体事件活动期望活动期望首段中间段尾段Part 2连句成文 开门见山式连句成文见人观地参事连句成文见人观地型Sb will visit 某人地+(地点)+时间.练练习习假如你是李明,你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩。请根据
4、提示语,给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写一封E-mail,邀请他一同前往。I and my parents will visit a nearby village on this weekend.练练习习假如你是班长李明,你将安排你班外教的儿子Tom来武汉的活动,请用电子邮件告知。Im so glad that you will visit Wuhan.连句成文参事组织型Sb will have+活动(an activity/a trip/a picnic)+地点+时间.练练习习假如你是李华,你们班同学决定进行一次野餐,请你用英语给外教Jack写封邮件,邀请他参加。Our class wil
5、l have a picnic.练练习习你年级决定本周日进行一次外出活动(have a school trip),请你负责将此消息传达给来自英国的交换生。Our grade will have a school trip on this Sunday.连句成文Would you like to go with me/us?单刀直入款你过来呀连句成文你过来呀I want to invite you to go with us,and you can know/enjoy/learn真诚利诱款连句成文你过来呀I would like to invite you to go with us,beca
6、use we havent seen each other for a while.练练习习假如你是李华,你们班同学决定进行一次野餐,请你用英语给外教Jack写封邮件,邀请他参加。Would you like to go with us?练练习习假如你是李明,你准备和父母周末去附近的村庄游玩。请根据提示语,给恰逢来你校交流学习的David写一封E-mail,邀请他一同前往。I want to invite you to go with us,and you can enjoy the country life.I would like to invite you to go with us,b
7、ecause we havent seen each other for a while.连句成文Here is my plan for this weekend.We will/can do the following things to spend/enjoy/enrich our activity/trip/weekend/holiday.先后顺序At firstAfter that/ThenBesides/Whats more/At the same timeAt last /Finally时间序列词时间顺序In the morning/On Sunday morningAt noon
8、In the afternoonIn the evening 时间序列词连句成文 At first,we can do XX.Then,I have a plan to do XX.After that,it is a good idea to do sth.Besides,I think doing XX will be very meaningful.At last,lets do XX.together and we will enjoy ourselves.假如你是李明,你准备和父母去附近的村庄游玩,请根据提示语,给恰逢来你学校交流学习的David写一封e-mail,邀请他一同前往。提
9、示语:提示语:feed animals,pick fruit and vegetables,make tea,learn to cook,play gamesAt first,we can pick fruit and vegetables.Then,I have a plan to make tea.After that,it is a good idea to learn to cook.Besides,I think feeding animals is the most meaningful thing in our activity.At last,lets play games t
10、ogether and chat with the villagers.假如你是班长李明,你将安排你班外教的儿子Tom来武汉的活动,请用电子邮件告知。内容要点如下:1.参观城市博物馆,了解武汉文化;2.走进课堂,交流学习情况;3.去东湖划船,欣赏风景;4.在家举办朋友聚会,品尝美食;5.补充一至两点个人想法。At first,it is a good idea to visit City Museum to learn about Wuhan.After that,I have a plan to go boating in the East Lake and enjoy the beauti
11、ful views.Besides,I think inviting you to our class will be the most meaningful thing in our activity,and we can talk about school life.Then,my friends and I will have a party for you at home,and you can taste our traditional food as well.At last,its a good idea to watch Han Show and you must have f
12、un.时态升华时态升华一般将来时can do sth./be able to do sth.should do sth./be supposed to do sth.It is a good idea/a wise choice to do sth.decide/plan/hope/wish/expect to do sth.make a decision to do sth.have/make a plan to do sth.be looking forward to doing sth.will dobe going to do连句成文学必所获式人间喜乐式期待进行式连句成文Im sure
13、 that we must learn/benefit from this experience(the trip/the activity).连句成文Im sure we will have a good time.连句成文Im really looking forward to spending a wonderful/a pleasant/an unforgettable day with you.Part 3篇章训练假如你是李华,你们班同学决定进行一次野餐,请你用英语给外教Jack写封邮件,邀请他参加。内容包括:1.时间:本周日上午9:00到下午15:00;2.地点:劳动公园(the
14、Lao Dong Park);3.活动:做游戏、唱歌、吃午饭4.要求:上午8:00校门口集合、自带食品注意:1.词数:90词左右,开头和结尾已经写好,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯;3.文中不得出现反映考生信息的真实姓名、地名等内容。Dear Jack,How is it going?We will have a picnic this coming Sunday.I would like to invite you to go with us,because we havent seen each other for a while.Here is my/our plan fo
15、r this activity.At 8 oclock,we will meet at our school gate and then go to Laodong Park by bus.Then,we have a plan to play games.At the same time,a few classmates interested in music can sing songs together.At noon,it is a good idea to sit around and have a wonderful lunch.In the afternoon,I think c
16、ollecting rubbish thrown about by careless visitors will be the most meaningful thing.Im sure that we must learn a lot from this activity.Im looking forward to your reply.YoursLi Hua错误避雷1.半命题作文题目是否完整2.要点是否齐全3.人称是否一致4.时态是否正确、谓语动词是否连用5.句子结构是否完整、连词是否添加6.单复数是否正确,冠词是否遗漏7.每句话句首是否大写,句尾是否有句号,单词拼写是否正确Thank you!