1、School LifeTeaching type:a writing lessonLearning Aims1.Be able to describe an experience.学会描述一次经历学会描述一次经历2.Be able to learn some skills to write better.学会写作技巧以便更好地写文章学会写作技巧以便更好地写文章3.Be grateful and learn how to get on well with others.常怀感恩之心并与人和谐相处常怀感恩之心并与人和谐相处TimeActivitiesTimeActivities6:00get up
2、3:30play basketball6:40have breakfast4:40go home7:05go to school5:20have dinner11:30have lunch8:15go to bedsubjectsactivitiestimetableWhen we talk about school life,what can you think of?We would like to _(参加参加)a lot of after-school activities.take part inWe live a happy life at school because we ca
3、n _(与与和谐相处和谐相处)each other.get on well withWe worked so hard at our lessons that we could _(取得好成绩取得好成绩)at last.get good gradesWhat did your classmates do when you were in trouble at school?Please describe your experience.在校园中,当你有困难时,你的同在校园中,当你有困难时,你的同学曾经为你做了什么?请描述一下学曾经为你做了什么?请描述一下你的经历。你的经历。Think&writ
4、e&shareHow to describe your experience?For example:Last week,I failed my English exam.I was unhappy because my English was always good.When my classmate Lily knew it,she cheered me up and said some encouraging words to me.I felt happy by her words.From then on,I overcame my failure and kept working
5、hard.时间时间事件事件经过经过结果结果1.Time 时间时间 2.Incident 事件事件3.Process 经过经过4.Result 结果结果Last year;When I was in Grade 7;On a rainy afternoon;I was ill and missed many lessons I failed an exam I didnt win the singing competition I got hurt when playing football I lost my meal cardhelp with/do;with the help of;enc
6、ourageto do;cheer up;make;pass by;send to hospital;ask for help;callas a result;at last;in the end;from then on;overcame;catch up with;get well soon;feel confident;feel moved;Please use the points to describe your experience.每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处,共同学习和生活一起,每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处,共同学习和生活一起,一定有很多感触吧,国际中学生论坛上有一个主题一定有很多
7、感触吧,国际中学生论坛上有一个主题“Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important”的帖子,请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。的帖子,请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。内容包括:内容包括:1.你和班级同学们相处的总体感受;你和班级同学们相处的总体感受;2.写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让 你感动的一件事;你感动的一件事;3.谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important It is important t
8、o get on well with our classmates.I get on well with my classmates._.Writing Task basic rules(写作基本规则写作基本规则)1.search(审题)(审题)2.list(列提纲)(列提纲)3.draw(画思维导图画思维导图)4.add(加内容加内容)每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处,共同学习和生活一起,每天在学校与同学们朝夕相处,共同学习和生活一起,一定有很多感触吧,国际中学生论坛上有一个主题一定有很多感触吧,国际中学生论坛上有一个主题“Getting on Well with Our Classmates I
9、s Important”的帖子,请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。的帖子,请你根据以下要点谈谈你的看法。内容包括:内容包括:1.你和班级同学们相处的总体感受;你和班级同学们相处的总体感受;2.写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让写出一件你和同学们在学校生活中的最让 你感动的一件事;你感动的一件事;3.谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。谈谈怎样才能和同学们和睦相处。Getting on Well with Our Classmates Is Important It is important to get on well with our classmates.I get on well with my
10、 classmates._.Step 1:Search审题审题根据题目关键词根据题目关键词简单列出文章的结构和要点。简单列出文章的结构和要点。Step 2:List 列提纲列提纲(总)第一段:(总)第一段:I feel(总体感受)(总体感受)(分)第二段:(分)第二段:Last week,(一件事)(一件事)(总)第三段:(总)第三段:In my opinion,(建议)(建议)ExperienceAdviceFeelingsTimebe friendly help eath othergratefulhappyIncident(事件)Process(经过)luckyResultHow to
11、get on well with our classmates Step 3:Draw a Mind-map思维导图思维导图PK第二回合:第二回合:1.Group A 和和Group B的同学的同学自由上台自由上台在白纸在白纸相应位置相应位置写出写出“Feelings”和和”Advice”相关相关的词或短语;的词或短语;2.Group A用黑笔写,用黑笔写,Group B用蓝笔写用蓝笔写;3.每人每次只能写一个,同一人可多次上台;每人每次只能写一个,同一人可多次上台;4.两组同学写的答案不能一样,先写先得;两组同学写的答案不能一样,先写先得;5.每个有效答案得每个有效答案得1分。分。In my
12、 opinion,(建议建议)Last week(时间、事件、经过、结果时间、事件、经过、结果)It is important to get on well with our classmates.I get on well with my classmates.I feel(总体感受总体感受)123Step 4:Add 加内容加内容查查分分段段信信息息点点卷卷面面书书写写语法&表达School Life参考范文:参考范文:It is important to get on well with our classmates.I get on well with my classmates.I
13、feel very lucky that I have such lovely classmates.I will never forget the touching thing that my classmates did for me.When I was in Grade 8,I got very bad grades in one mid-term exam.I was so upset that I was afraid to go to school.I told my teacher that I needed to rest at home because I was sick
14、.All my classmates wrote wishes on a card and sent it to me.Some of them even lend their notes to me.I was really moved and encouraged.From now on,I will help my classmates who need help.In my opinion,if we can help each other,we will get on well with each other.School Life 审、列、画、加审、列、画、加Experience:时间、事件、时间、事件、经过、结果经过、结果 How to get on well with our classmates Basic rules:Ways:1.Exchange the drafts with your partner and help to make some revisions.2.Complete your writing.School LifeThanksfor listening!