1、An Introduction to Online An Introduction to Online ShoppingShoppingSpeaking&Writingxxx中学中学 xxxDo you know the four great inventions of ancient China?compasspaper makinggunpowderprinting techniqueWhat are the four new“inventions”of modern China?Online shoppingHigh-speed TrainOnline paymentShared bik
2、eenjoy a boom 繁荣发展繁荣发展 sb.have access to sth.唾手可得唾手可得a variety of 各种各样的各种各样的find a better deal淘到物美价廉的交易淘到物美价廉的交易have sth.delivered to让让被送到被送到(pay)by credit card用信用卡（付款）用信用卡（付款）pay(bills)online网上支付网上支付make a contribution to对对做出贡献做出贡献delivery industry 快递业快递业overseas goods海外商品海外商品give discounts to给给折扣折
3、扣Useful expressionsIt is convenient for sb.to do做做很方便很方便It is likely that 很可能很可能Doing saves us time and moneysb.find it+adj.to do be of poor quality 质量好质量好/差差fake buyers reviews 虚假买家评价虚假买家评价have a negative effect on对对有有消极的影响消极的影响the lack of face-to-face deal面对面面对面交易的缺失交易的缺失put sb.at risk of doing让让处
4、处于于的风险的风险let out/leak 泄露泄露after-sale service 售后服务售后服务be addicted toAdvantagesDisadvantagesSentence patternsAdvantagesAdvantages It is convenient for us tohave access to whatever we wantIt is likely thatget products of poor qualityDisadvantagesDisadvantagesG1:Alibaba staff(员工)G2:Critics(批评家)online on
5、line shoppingshoppingDebate(辩论辩论)G1:Alibaba staff(员工)G2:Critics(批评家)List the Advantages Point out the disadvantagesLinking wordsOn the one hand,/Besides,/Whats more,On the other hand,/In addition,/Whats worse,Firstly,/Secondly,/Thirdly,/Last but not least,Sentence patterns:It is convenient for sb.to
6、 do做做很方便很方便It is likely that 很可能很可能Doing saves us time and moneysb.find it+adj.to do As“Double Eleven”is coming,our English friend Jim has much interest in“online shopping”and wants us to write a letter to introduce it to him.Attention：1.About 100 words.2.Pay attention to coherence(连贯连贯)and handwrit
7、ing.Structure Beginning:Ending:BodySummary&Your wishGreeting&Writing purposeAdvantagesAdvantagesDisadvantagesDisadvantagessb.have access to sth.唾手可得唾手可得a variety of 各种各样的各种各样的find a better deal淘到物美价廉的交易淘到物美价廉的交易have sth.delivered to让让被送到被送到(pay)by credit card用信用卡（付款）用信用卡（付款）pay(bills)online网上支付网上支付m
8、ake a contribution to对对做出贡献做出贡献delivery industry 快递业快递业overseas goods海外商品海外商品give discounts toUseful expressionsIt is convenient for sb.to do做做很方便很方便It is likely that 很可能很可能Doing saves us time and energysb.find it+adj.to dobe of poor quality 质量好质量好/差差fake buyers reviews 虚假买家评价虚假买家评价have a negative e
9、ffect on对对有有消极的影响消极的影响the lack of face-to-face deal面对面面对面交易的缺失交易的缺失put sb.at risk of doing让让处处于于的风险的风险let out/leak 泄露泄露after-sale service 售后服务售后服务be addicted toOn the one hand,On the other hand,Whats more,/Besides,/In addition,Whats worse,/Therefore,Linking words 评价内容评价内容分数分数(满分满分25)Max 23 Complete
10、Structure(3 parts)Complete structure&Exact language&Good Logic (15points)Higher level sentences and good words(+2points for each)Spelling/Grammar mistakes and bad handwriting(-2points)Exact Language Good Logic(linking words)Evaluation StandardWriting outlineDear Jim,Hows everything going?I am more t
11、han delighted to know that_.Now let me _.Compared with other countries,China has enjoyed a boom in_.Although it is _,online shopping has both its _.(Advantages)_._.(Disadvantages)_._.All in all,every coin has two sides.As for me,_.And Im looking forward to_.Yours,X XPurposeat least 2 advantagesat le
12、ast 2 disadvantagesSummary&Your wish 1.Underline beautiful words and sentences.2.Correct the mistakes.3.Grade it by giving it a score.Evaluate your articles for each other.评价内容评价内容分数分数(满分满分25)Max 23 Complete Structure(3 parts)Complete structure&Exact language&Good Logic (15points)Higher level senten
13、ces and good words(+2points for each)Spelling/Grammar mistakes and bad handwriting(-2points)Exact Language Good Logic(linking words)Sample WritingDear Jim,Im more than delighted to know that you have much interest in online shopping.Now let me introduce it to you in detail.Compared with other countr
14、ies,China has enjoyed a boom in online shopping.Popular as it is,online shopping has both advantages and disadvantages.On the one hand,it is convenient for us to have access to a variety of products online without hanging around.Besides,we can compare the prices to find a better deal and have our go
15、ods delivered toour home.On the other hand,the lack of face-to-face deal makes online shopping less reliable.Sometimes we receive something of poor quality or unsuitable for us.Whats worse,it is possible that our personal information may be let out while paying online so that our money will be stole
16、n.All in all,every coin has two sides.As for me,the benefits of online shopping greatly overweigh its drawbacks.Im sincerely looking forward to your coming and experiencing it in person.Yours,JennyWe firmly believe that with everyones efforts,wewill present more impressive inventions to the world in the future.1.Polish your writing after class.2.Surf the Internet for more information about new inventions of modern China.
