1、高考英语读后续写成长类故事构造专题复习一、成长前的苦恼（负面情绪塑造）（一）孤独I never made friends easily(从不容易交朋友), and for a time I did little more than get on speaking terms with some boys. （二）伤心1.我在口袋里什么也没发现，这个事实就像一把长矛刺进我的心脏，立刻开始流血。I found nothing in my pocket, a fact that seemed like a spear piercing into my heart which started to b
2、leed immediately. 2.看了看周围，我焦急地几乎哭了起来。Looking around anxiously, I almost burst into crying.3.就在我崩溃的时候，克劳利带领的一群男孩从我身边走过Just at the time I broke down, a group of boys led by Crawley passed me.（三）惭愧1. She was overwhelmed / overcome/ consumed with guilt and shame (被内疚和羞愧淹没). 2. Suddenly she came alive（精神
3、就为之一振）,waving her arthritic(关节炎的) hands.3. A wave of guilt swept over me(一阵恐惧向我袭来) and I had to admit the fact that I had gone to the movies and that was the real reason why I was late.（四）嘲笑他们大声地笑着，像是在尖叫“多漂亮的破表啊！”They laughed loudly with Crawley screaming words like “What a finest broken watch!”（五）绝
4、望我妈妈不让我带，”我撒谎，绝望在我心中沸腾。“My mother wouldnt let me bring it,” I lied, desperation boiling inside me.（六）紧张1. Meanwhile, Karie sat restlessly in her seat with her fingers crossed (她的手指交叉着). 2. She told the teacher the truth , with her heart thumping / pounding/ pumping like a drum(她的心跳得像打鼓一样). 3. Having
5、 paced up and down restlessly(不安地来回走动) in front of the the teachers office, she finally gathered courage and plodded in.（七）害怕I unknowingly (不知不觉地) avoided interacting (interact) with anyone because I was afraid theyd laugh in my face(我很害怕他们会当面取笑我) .二、成长中（蜕变塑造）（一）惊讶Raising her eyebrows in surprise, M
6、rs Rossi froze, as if rooted on the ground（仿佛定格在那里）.（二）希望Jayce looked up to him, his eyes sparkling with hope and determination（闪烁着希望和决心）.（三）教育与成长1. “Thats not the right way. Patience, Will. Patience,” a voice echoed in my ears (一个声音在我耳边回响)after the boys left.2. “What was done was done,” thought I t
7、o myself. “What is important now is to do correct things next(现在重要的是下一步要做正确的事情).” 3. 尽管愤怒、尴尬和悲伤重重地笼罩在空气中，但这个声音还是让我意识到我在试图给同学留下深刻印象时犯下的错误。Though anger, embarrassment and sadness hung heavily in the air, the voice drew me to the awareness of the mistakes I had made when I attempted to impress the boys
8、.三、成长后的升华（喜悦+感激+升华）（一）喜悦1. Karie grinned(grin) as she read the label on the box.2. Dad looked at the paper, with his lips curving into a smile（他的嘴唇弯成了微笑）. 3. Hearing that, Karie grinned from ear to ear, a wave of happiness flooding over her（幸福的浪潮涌上她的心头）. （二）感激I looked at her, tears of love and grati
9、tude(感动和爱的泪水)welling up in my eyes.（三）升华句1. 我确信，将来每当我失去耐心时，我都会记住祖父的话。I knew for sure that every time I lost patience in the future I would remember my grandfathers words.2. 这是我第一次真正体会到这份礼物的意义耐心。It was the first time that I had truly realized the meaning of the gift - patience.然而，从那时起，我保证这只破表会一直提醒我耐心
10、等待，直到真相出现。3、Aram said, “Thanks, Mrs Rossi, for teaching me how to make a cake to realize my dream（实现我的梦想）.” Mrs Rossi held his hands, saying, “ It is you who teach me how to stick to my dream(坚持我的梦想).”4、It dawned on Aram that（Aram突然想到） “One should stick to his/her dream no matter what happens.”四、成长类
11、场景描写（一）学习知识而成长知识就是力量！在改变的过程中，学习不同的知识，然后才能面对各种困难和挑战。比如屏幕前的你，不就是在学习读后续写的技巧吗？请看下面的例句，也是我送给正在学习的你。Its never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make moreattempts.学习永远为时不晚。每个人都应该并且有权利去接受更多的挑战，做更多的尝试。【分析】individual这里表示“个人，个体”。make moreattempts 做更多尝试。（二）发挥天赋促成长认识自
12、身天赋，并且发挥天赋，这是改变我们的现状的一个重要条件。请看下面的例句。Actually, every individual possesses talent. Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.事实上，每个人都有天赋，发现它的时候要勇敢，也要付出努力，最终你会创造奇迹。【分析】possess 拥有。create miracles表示创造奇迹。读后续写专题：成长类故事构造5宋老师 英语学习你我他 2023-03-26 06:00 发表于江西（三）追逐梦想而成长永
13、远不要忽视了梦想的力量！“做人如果没有理想,跟咸鱼有什么区别呢”。请看下面两个例句。Its never too late to go for your dream. As long as you grasp every opportunity and take full advantage of it, you will stand a chance to realize your dreams.追梦永远不晚。只要你抓住机会，充分利用机会，你就有机会实现梦想。As long as we dare to dream and dont let difficulties get in our way
14、, anything is possible.只要我们敢于梦想，不被困难所阻挡，一切皆有可能。【分析】take full advantage of 充分利用， realize your dreams表示“实现梦想”（四）克服困难促而成长只有克服各种苦难，才能改变现状。请看下面的例句。The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we dont give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goal (success) finally.通往成功的路不会平坦，充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难，我们最终会实现我们的目标（成功）。【分析】smooth 表示“平坦的”overcome all the difficulties 表示“克服困难”；make every effort 表示“做出努力”；as long as，表示“只要”，引导条件状语从句。3
