1、高考英语复习写作指导（讲阅评）讲义：应用文之介绍信题目假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国朋友Jim来信说他在英国学校参加了中国书法俱乐部。擅长书法的你决定写一幅书法作品寄给他，并附上一封信。信的内容包括： 1.该作品的内容；2.送该作品的原因；3.表示愿意提供帮助。提示词：书法 calligraphy全文呈现（208字）I am glad to know that you have joined your schools calligraphy club. The calligraphy piece I sent to you was written by myself. I really
2、 hope you will like it.The Chinese characters on the piece are “天道酬勤” (Tian Dao Chou Qin), meaning “Hard work pays off.” It is a well-known Chinese idiom, widely adopted as a motto by Chinese people. There is a similar calligraphy piece hanging in the study at my home, which was written by my grandf
3、ather. He gave it to me when I started to learn calligraphy at age six in hopes that I would practise it often and learn it well. You see now my efforts have paid off. I hope it can serve as an encouragement to you at all times. I wrote this piece in the calligraphic style of my favorite calligraphe
4、r, Yan Zhenqing, a renowned master of the Tang Dynasty. His style is Kaishu, a standard script, suitable for beginners. I guess maybe it is the style that you are practising.I know it is not easy to learn Chinese calligraphy. If you have any problems during your study, I would be happy to help you.
5、I sincerely hope you enjoy learning Chinese calligraphy!题目简析我并不认为“介绍书法作品”这种比较偏的主题会在正式高考中出现考查，但是介绍某个事物及其背后的含义，是各位需要掌握的写作能力。所以这篇文章我们主要注意两点：1、介绍内容的构思；2、重点短语和句型的积累。文章的开头并非重点，“calligraphy 书法”要求掌握拼写。I am glad to know thatyou have joined your schools calligraphy club. The calligraphy piece I sent to you wa
6、s written by myself. I really hope you will like it.很高兴得知你加入了学校的书法俱乐部。我寄给你的书法作品是我自己写的。希望你喜欢。文章的结尾涉及第三个写作要点“愿意提供帮助”，其实就是常规的交际句式的应用，内容逻辑就是“某事不容易如果遇到问题愿意提供帮助表达祝愿”。I know it is not easy tolearn Chinese calligraphy.If you have any problemsduring your study,I would be happy to help you. I sincerely hopeyo
7、u enjoy learning Chinese calligraphy!我知道学习中国书法很不容易。如果你在学习中遇到任何问题，我很乐意提供帮助。真心希望你喜欢学习中国书法！文章的第二段是对书法作品的介绍，可以拆分为三个内容部分：1、基本含义；2、过往经历；3、具体细节。“基本含义”的部分只需要作为素材积累即可。The Chinese characters on the piece are “天道酬勤” (Tian Dao Chou Qin), meaning“Hard work pays off.”It isa well-known Chinese idiom,widely adopted
8、 as a motto by Chinese people.这幅作品上的汉字是“天道酬勤”，意思是“努力就有回报”。这是一个著名的中国谚语，被中国人广泛作为座右铭。重点短语句型如下：“Hard work pays off.” 天道酬勤a well-known Chinese idiom 著名的中国谚语widely adopted as a motto by Chinese people 被中国人广泛作为座右铭“过往经历”在其它写作题目中涉及的可能性比较低，基本按照记叙文的写作要点“时间、地点、人物、事件”呈现即可。There is a similar calligraphy piece han
9、ging in the study at my home, which was written by my grandfather. He gave it to me when I started to learn calligraphy at age six in hopes that I would practise it often and learn it well. You see now my efforts have paid off. I hope it can serve as an encouragement to you at all times.我家的书房里挂着一幅类似
10、的书法作品，是我祖父写的。在我六岁开始学习书法时，他把它送给了我，希望我经常练习学好书法。现在我的努力得到了回报。希望它能作为对你平时的一种鼓励。“具体细节”作为补充，可以涉及各种方面。如果是书法，可以谈论风格类型；如果是地点，可以介绍历史背景；如果是书籍，可以分享作者生平，以此类推。I wrote this piece in the calligraphic style of my favorite calligrapher, Yan Zhenqing, a renowned master of the Tang Dynasty. His style is Kaishu, a standar
11、d script, suitable for beginners. I guess maybe it is the style that you are practising.我是用我最喜欢的书法家颜真卿的风格写下的这幅字。颜真卿是唐代著名的书法大师。他的风格是楷书，是一种适合初学者的标准书法体。我觉得也许这就是你在练习的风格。作文批改文章整体写作思路顺畅，有三个地方需要修改：1、“take part in 参加”往往用于某个单次的活动或项目，如果是加入某个组织或群体，建议使用“join in”或“become a member of”；2、“favorate”拼写错误，应为“favorite
12、”；3、“youre bound to success”词性不当，to后面需要使用动词，所以应该改为“youre bound to succeed”或“youre bound to be successful”。在接下来的写作训练中，应该更多注重应用表述更加确切具体的动词短语，同时提高用词质量。比如“if you have a will to do a thing well”中，涉及的两个动词短语都可以进行更有效的替换“have a will”可以加入形容词变为“have a strong will”，或者更换为更准确的词意“are really determined”；“do a thing well”可以改写为“accomplish your goal”或者“make an achievement”，都可以显著提高语言质量。你可以自己感受一下“if you have a will to do a thing well”和“if you are really determined to make an achievement”这两种写法的差异，这就是你的写作能否继续提升的关键所在。
