1、英语书面表达英语书面表达English Composition Writing 正确使用有关连接词 时间先后：时间先后：first,then,later,in the end,eventually,since then,after a while 转折关系：转折关系：but,however,on the contrary,nevertheless因果关系：因果关系：because,since,as,thanks to,owing to,as a result of,for the reason that让步关系：让步关系：though,although,even if,even though,
2、in spite of the fact that递进关系：递进关系：whats more,in addition,furthermoreon the one hand on the other hand,条件关系：条件关系：if,unless,as long as,on condition that 表表 列列 举：举：for example/instance,takefor example,thats to say,in other words,as follows表表 总总 结：结：in short,in brief,in conclusion,in a word,on the whol
3、e,as has been stated丰富的句式：丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增加文章的文采。e.g.What a kind boy he is!How disappointed he was!感叹句感叹句强调句强调句e.g.It was this young boy that helped the old granny.I do hope you can come if possible.e.g.Only in this way can you solve this problem.There comes the police car
4、.Hardly had they got to the station when they met the young man.e.g.They read while walking or riding on a bus.Come to me if necessary.e.g.I saw a young lady walking slowly in the street with a handbag in her hand.倒装句倒装句省略句省略句with短语短语 e.g.In my opinion,cyber cafes should be a place where we can find
5、 much useful information.Lets come to the main teaching building,at the back of which stands the school library.定语从句定语从句e.g.Thats what I should do.We should do a favour to whoever needs help at present.各种名词性从句各种名词性从句 e.g.Time passed quickly before we knew it.The moment we reached the farm,we got dow
6、n to harvesting.So long as we work harder at our lessons,well catch up sooner or later.各种状语从句各种状语从句1.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）2.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句)3.He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)4.I p
7、assed the physics exam because of your help.(用虚拟语气）What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Practice 怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇怎样使用较丰富的句式和高级词汇Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.I couldnt have passed the p
8、hysics exam but for your help.5.She walked out of the lab and many students followed her.(使用过去分词)6.They sang and laughed as they went back to school.(使用V-ing形式)7.I wont believe what he says.（no matter what状语从句）8.If you study hard,you will make rapid progress.（祈使句+and）Followed by many students,she wa
9、lked out of the lab.Singing and laughing,they went back to school.No matter what he says,I wont believe.Study hard and youll make rapid progress.9He had no sooner come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.(使用倒装句使用倒装句)10.We all think he is a great man.(think highly of)11.As a result the plan was
10、 a failure.(turn out)12.When he spoke,he felt more and more excited.(the morethe more)No sooner had he come back from Beijing than he was sent abroad.We all think highly of him.The plan turned out to be a failure.The more he spoke,the more excited he felt.Summary:ASSESSMENTstructureIs the essay divi
11、ded into parts?Does each part have a topic sentence?contentAre all the details stated?Is everything to the point(切题切题)?LanguageDoes the writer use any linking words?Are there any mistakes?Is there any advanced vocabulary（高级词汇）（高级词汇）?Are there any good sentence patterns（句式）（句式）?Lets improve it:Good a
12、fternoon,everyone!The topic of my speech today is“My Attitude to Pursuit of Fashion in School”.Now in our school there is a hot pursuit of fashion.Somestudents live a very expensive life _._,they hope to look smart and special._,they want to win others admiration and respect.In addition,it makes the
13、m feel cool._,we students should hold the right sense of values.We should practice thrift in our daily life._,it is advisable for us to donate some pocket money to the Hope Project so that those poor children in rural areas can return to school._,it is the inner beauty rather than our appearance tha
14、t makes us respectable.Thank you for listening!A.the reasons why they do so are as follows B.firstly C.last but not least D.whats more E.as far as I am concerned F.SecondlyABCDEF苏州市苏州市2009届高三教学调研测试届高三教学调研测试 最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活最近，国家教育部要求中小学生参加冬季长跑活动：建议小学生每天跑动：建议小学生每天跑1000米，初中生米，初中生1500米，米，高中生高中生200
15、0米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人米。对此，有些人表示支持，有些人表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以表示反对。请你根据以下材料，写一篇以“Should we give more attention to students health or grades?”为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。为题的短文，谈谈你的看法。支持方的理由 反对方的理由 你的看法及理由 1可以促进对体育的重视；2可以增强学生的体魄；3更有利于提高学习效率。1学生以学习为主，考试成绩决定个人前途；2过高的要求学生难以达到；3长跑可能引起感冒或伤害。(考生自行发挥23点)注意：注意：1词数词数150左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计
16、入总词数；左右。短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数；2对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。对所给要点，逐一陈述，设当发挥，不要简单翻译。第一段：第一段：1.Some people agree to NO.One,because they usually think that.In the meantime,.In addition.2.Some people think that A is right because.3.Some people suggest/say that.At the same time they point out the fact that.Whats m
17、ore.4.Some people prefer NO.One.In their opinion A.In addition.第二段：第二段：1.On the other hand,some people hold that B is right.They think.2.But many more people dont agree with them.They prefer B.They say that.The reason is that.3.On the contrary,some people hold that.4.Some people think that B is bett
18、er.It is clear that.Whats more,.Also.在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式在第一段和第二段中一定要用原因或列举等方式展开段落。展开段落。第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证第三段：提出自己的见解并且加以论证1.In my opinion B is better than A.There is no doubt that.2.I support A.The reason goes as follows.3.As far as I am concerned,I agree to the latter.First.Second.Finally.4.It is
19、likely that people will go on arguing over these questions.I think that everything has both its positive and negative sides.We should keep an open mind.5.People will continue to argue over the questions,I think wed better keep an open mind because everything has two sides.It all relies on.6.Of these
20、 two ways of.I prefer.First of all,.Second,.Should we give more attention to students health or grades?The Ministry of Education of China has urged all the students to participate in the winter long-distance running activity.It is suggested that primary school students should run 1,000 meters a day,
21、junior school students,1,500 and senior school students,2,000.Different people always offer various views.Some people say yes to this activity.They think,for one thing,it can make people pay more attention to physical education;for another,running can improve students health and help them study effi
22、ciently so they can have good grades.However,others hold opposite opinions about the activity.They believe that learning is the most important task for students and their future depends on their grades in their subjects.Meanwhile,many cant meet the high requirements.Whats worse,some will suffer cold
23、 and injuries.In my opinion,its all right for schools to care about students health and carry out the activity step by step.Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.What do you think about the concluding paragraph?Is it a good one?If not,how can you improve it?In my opinion,its all right for
24、schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step.Remember a good body helps make high efficiency.In my opinion,its better for schools to pay more attention to students health and carry out the activity step by step,because a good body helps make high efficiency.Whats more,it not noly helps students get relaxed,but also will benefit them in their future life.
