1、Writing Class老师阅卷看什么？一看字体（字体工整）二看语言（语言高级）三看内容（要点齐全）四看结构（三段式结构）一看字体二看语言（语言高级）高级词汇与句式修辞手法有效的连词 名人名句、谚语的运用1.高级词汇短语基本原则词组优先原则避免重复原则后高长原则 后学到、较高级、较长词汇1.词组优先原则词组优先原则【原文】A new railway is being built in my hometown.修正 A new railway is under construction in my hometown.2.避免重复原则原文 I like reading while my brot
2、her likes watching television.【修正】I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television3.后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇原词：Hard Very Pay attention to HappyMore and more替换词：DiligentlyRather,extremelyAttach importance to Delighted enjoyable The increasing number of 电脑在我们的生活中是十分重要的。1.Computers are very importan
3、t in our life.2.Computers play a very important role in our life.3.Computers are of great importance in our life.为了学习音乐，她去了美国 She went to America in order to study music.She went to America for the purpose of studying music.l我突然想到了个好主意lSuddenly I thought out a good idea.lSuddenly I came up with a go
4、od idea.lA good idea suddenly struck me.2.句式多样，文章增“靓”l各种从句l非谓语动词l倒装句l强调句l被动句lWith 的复合结构l.l 他昨天下午来的。l He came here yesterday afternoon.l He didnt come here until yesterday afternoon.l Not until yesterday afternoon did he come here.(倒装句）l It was yesterday afternoon that he came here.（强调句）Game:连词滚雪球每人拿
5、一张写有连词的纸条，向后一个同学传达自己的连词，后一个同学给后面的同学传达时需要先讲前面同学的连词再讲自己的连词。最后一个同学，把自己一组所有的连词讲出来，对一个加小组加一分，漏了不扣分。第一组：At first(首先）;firstly（首先）;beside(此外）;secondly(第二）；After all(毕竟）；fortunately(幸运地）；As a result(结果）；finally（最后);第二组：First of all(首先）；now（现在）In fact(事实上）；for example（例如）Luckily（幸运地）；in spite of（尽管）At last(最后
6、）；in a word(总之）第三组：Lately(最近）；to start with(首先）In order to(为了）；then(然后）Anyway（无论如何）；however(然而）All in all(总之);finally（最后）第四组：As a result(结果）therefore（最后）In fact(事实上）；unfortunately(不幸福地）Beside(除此）；for example(例如）Firstly(首先）；recently(最近）3.连词一）表示“起”的词/词组：用于开篇引出扩展句。at first 最初 ；firstly第一；in the beginnin
7、g 起初 first of all 首先；one the one handon the other hand 一方面.另一方面 （二）有关“承”的常用词语：用来承接上文。Besides/whats more 而且；此外in other words 换句话说 in fact 事实上 .（三）有关“转”的常用词语：用来表示不同或相反的意见 luckily 幸运地 however 然而；无论如何 though/although 尽管.（四）有关“合”的常用词语：用于小结上文或结束本段落的内容。eventually 最后 in conclusion 总之，最后 in a word 总之 .名人名言、谚
8、语There is an old saying that.(常言道，）Game:将打乱的单词组成一句完整的名言或谚语。抢答，哪个小组对了加一分，错了不扣分。1.mother success of is the failure Failure is the mother of success.失败是成功之母。2.will a is there there where ,way a is Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。3.Rome roads to lead allAll roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。4.loud
9、er speak than words actionAction speak louder than words 事实胜于雄辩5.impossible to a mind is willing nothing Nothing is impossible to a willing mind 世上无难事，只怕有心人6.is half well done begun half Well begun is half done 好的开端是成功的一半7.than done said easier Easier said than done 说起来容易做起来难 Failure is the mother o
10、f success.失败是成功之母。Where there is a will,there is a way.有志者,事竟成。All roads lead to Rome.条条大路通罗马。Action speak louder than words 事实胜于雄辩Nothing is impossible to a willing mind 世上无难事，只怕有心人Well begun is half done 好的开端是成功的一半Easier said than done 说起来容易做起来难一看字体（字体工整）一看语言（语言高级）二看内容（要点齐全）三看结构（三段式结构）二看语言（语言高级）高级词汇与句式修辞手法有效的连词 名人名句、谚语的运用积累单词熟读，熟透课文学会整理积累好的句型句式练字建议建议Thank you
