1、缺点：缺点：1.1.审题不清楚（直接写成了建议信模板）审题不清楚（直接写成了建议信模板）2.2.过渡不自然（中间段落）过渡不自然（中间段落）3.3.自我介绍那句话仍然不熟，导致出错自我介绍那句话仍然不熟，导致出错 I am a studentI am a student，who studying in who studying in guangming national school.guangming national school.4.4.有一个同学分段，一点一段有一个同学分段，一点一段5.5.背的句子还是出现单词错误背的句子还是出现单词错误如如Here are my Here are m
2、y suggestions as follow.suggestions as follow.Im Im writtingwritting this letter.this letter.writting写写错错 suggestionssuggestions没加没加s s6.6.缺缺开头称呼结尾开头称呼结尾7.7.内容内容不够不够建议：背好模板建议：背好模板灵活运用灵活运用 仔细审题仔细审题 写对单词句子写对单词句子 写满写漂亮写满写漂亮(周测一）范周测一）范文：文：Dear editor，（自我介绍）（自我介绍）I am Li Hua,a student studying in Guangmi
3、ng International School.（写信背景（写信背景/原因）原因）In order to respond to protecting teenagers eyesight，our school English newspaper plans to call for papers on this topic，which I am extremely interested in.（写信目的）（写信目的）so Im wrting to participate in this writing contest.（与第三点保护视力的建议的过渡）（与第三点保护视力的建议的过渡）With th
4、e development of science and technology，nearsightedness is becoming more and more common and having a bad effect on peoples life，especially students at young age.Therefore，the whole society are supposed to take action to protect teenagers eyesight.（引出建议（引出建议123）To begin with，both local government an
5、d schools should pay more attention to our study burden.Besides，as students，its a good idea that we should take part in more outdoor activities，such as playing basketball，running and so on.Last but not least，the most important thing is that we must cut down on screen time and get rid of addiction to
6、 computers or smartphones.In a word，only in this way can we protect our eyesight and have a brighter future.（总结）（总结）I sincerely hope my essay can meet your qualifications exactly and I would appreciate it very much if you can adopt my article.（结合实（结合实际的结尾）际的结尾）广东一模拟作文 Dear editor，（自我介绍）（自我介绍）I am Li
7、 Hua,a high school student who is enthusiastic about reading the newspaper/journal called English Monthly set up by our School.（写信背景（写信背景/原原因）因）Knowing our school English newspaper plans to call for opinions,I am extremely interested in it.（写信目的）（写信目的）So Im writing to give my personal opinions on my
8、 favorite newspaper.该报的优点：该报的优点：In my opinion,English Monthly has many advantages.For one thing,its rich in content,ranging from economy to civilization.For another,its a guide to English learning.Through it,I can have a good knowledge of whats going on at home and abroad and Ive improved my English
9、 reading skills.建议：建议：If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column/section.For example,you could introduce more Chinese festivals origins and stories about the festivals.I hope my opinions can be of help to you.Here I really
10、hope English Monthly will attract more readers.约稿信是指报纸，杂志，文化栏目等媒体邀请别约稿信是指报纸，杂志，文化栏目等媒体邀请别人写稿的信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的栏目人写稿的信件。在信中需要介绍该媒体的栏目特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件特点和媒体的受众范围。在约稿时要指定稿件的内容（约稿发起人既可以规定要写作的内容，的内容（约稿发起人既可以规定要写作的内容，也可以让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己也可以让被约稿人根据媒体和栏目的性质自己拟定写作题目和内容），并且要约定稿件大致拟定写作题目和内容），并且要约定稿件大致的篇幅和交稿日期。
11、的篇幅和交稿日期。8.约稿信约稿信step1 写作思路写作思路 第一段：邀请对方写稿件第一段：邀请对方写稿件(或目的或目的)；第二段：介绍栏目或媒体的特点和受众范围。第二段：介绍栏目或媒体的特点和受众范围。稿件内容，标题。稿件内容，标题。长度和交稿日期。长度和交稿日期。第三段：表达希望得到对方的回复。第三段：表达希望得到对方的回复。约稿函约稿函1.我想请你为我想请你为写一篇文章写一篇文章 _2.你可以写一些关于你可以写一些关于 _3.是很受欢迎的是很受欢迎的 _4.它刊登由它刊登由写的文章写的文章 _5.你能写点关于你能写点关于吗？吗？_I would like to ask you to w
12、rite an article for.You can write something about is very popular among us studentsIt carries articles written by 常用语块常用语块 6.我们会特别欢迎有关我们会特别欢迎有关的文章。的文章。_7.你可以写与你可以写与相关的任何东西。相关的任何东西。_8.约约120个词就好。个词就好。_9.我们在我们在之前能收到你的文章吗？之前能收到你的文章吗？_10.体育专栏体育专栏/娱乐专栏娱乐专栏 _Would you please write something aboutWe would e
13、specially welcome articles aboutYou can write something relevant to About 120 words would be fine.11.使某人了解使某人了解 _13.请将文章发送至请将文章发送至._An article within 400 words would be fine.Could we have your article before?sports column/entertainment columnmake/help sb.know sth.aboutplease send your composition to
14、PracticePractice注意写作的思路框架注意写作的思路框架 假定你是李华，你校英文报假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化外国文化”栏目拟刊栏目拟刊登登美国节日风俗和中学生生活美国节日风俗和中学生生活的短文。请给美国朋友的短文。请给美国朋友Peter写信约稿，要点如下：写信约稿，要点如下：1.栏目介绍。栏目介绍。2.稿件内容；稿件内容；3.稿件长度：约稿件长度：约400词汇词汇4.交稿日期：交稿日期：4月月2日前天日前天注意：注意：1.词数词数100左右；左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的；3.开头语已为你写好。开头语已为你写好。约稿信：写作练习
15、约稿信：写作练习 1写作练习写作练习 1 要点整合：要点整合：第一步：第一步：邀请对方写稿件邀请对方写稿件(目的目的)；*我想请你为我校英文报写一篇文章。我想请你为我校英文报写一篇文章。第二步：第二步：介绍栏目或媒体的特点和受众范围。介绍栏目或媒体的特点和受众范围。*“外国文化外国文化”栏目栏目很受师生欢迎。很受师生欢迎。*它刊登很多外国友人写的关于国外文化的文章。它刊登很多外国友人写的关于国外文化的文章。第三步：第三步：稿件内容稿件内容,长度和交稿日期。长度和交稿日期。你能写点你能写点美国节日风俗方面美国节日风俗方面的东西吗？的东西吗？我们特别欢迎我们特别欢迎有关中学生生活有关中学生生活的文
16、章。的文章。顺便，约顺便，约400400个词就好。个词就好。我们能在我们能在4 4月月2 2日前日前收到你的文章吗？收到你的文章吗？第四步：第四步：期待回复。期待回复。spend their holidays and festivals，the life of American high school studentsDear Peter,I would like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper.The“Foreign Cultures”section in our newspaper is ve
17、ry popular among us students.It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.Would you please write something about the culture in your part of United States?And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spend their holidays and festivals and
18、the everyday life of American senior high students?You can write anything relevant so long as it is interesting and informative.400 words would be fine.Could I have your article before April 2nd?I am looking forward to hearing from you.Yours,Li Hua 参考范文参考范文1 1 广东一模的词汇 1.staff 2.crew 3.emergency powe
19、r supply 4.instead 5.make a big difference 6.immigrant 7.landmark 8.mainstream 9.search 10.research 11.explore/exploration 12.explode/explosion 13.be equipped with 14.remotely operated vehicle 15.weigh sb down 16.lift up 17.light up作者的态度 赞成：supportive,approve of/support/in favor of/favorable/agree w
20、ith 反对：disapprove,disagree,object to 中立：neutral,indifferent 怀疑 :doubtful,criticize 乐观：positive,optimistic,active 消极：negative,pessimistic,passive 幽默：humorous 羡慕：environs 关切：caring 不关心的、冷漠的：uncaring,indefferent 厌恶：disgusting/hate 担忧：concerned/worried 失望：disappointed 沮丧：upset 容忍：tolerant作文作文 1.一位在、学习的学
21、生一位在、学习的学生 2.为了响应、为了响应、3.征集、的文章征集、的文章/意见意见 4.减少屏幕时间减少屏幕时间 5.内容丰富，覆盖经济到文化内容丰富，覆盖经济到文化 6.掌握国内外发生的事情掌握国内外发生的事情 7.要是你可以在文化专栏中多介绍有关中国传统文化要是你可以在文化专栏中多介绍有关中国传统文化和励志的故事该多好啊！和励志的故事该多好啊！8.我真心地希望我的文章可以很好地达到你的要求！我真心地希望我的文章可以很好地达到你的要求！9.它刊登很多外国友人写的关于国外文化的文章它刊登很多外国友人写的关于国外文化的文章 10.我们特别欢迎我们特别欢迎.的文章的文章作文1.一位在、学习的学生
22、一位在、学习的学生a student studying in 2.为了响应、为了响应、In order to respond to doing/n 3.征集、的文章/意见call for papers on /call for opinions 4.减少屏幕时间cut down on screen time 5.内容丰富，覆盖经济到文化its rich in content,ranging from economy to civilization 6.掌握国内外发生的事情have a good knowledge of whats going on at home and abroad 7.要
23、是你可以在文化专栏中多介绍有关中国传统文化和励志的故事该多好啊！If only you could introduce some more about Chinese traditional culture and inspirational stories in the culture column/section8.我真心地希望我的文章可以很好地达到你的要求！我真心地希望我的文章可以很好地达到你的要求！I sincerely hope my essay can meet your qualifications exactly.9.它刊登很多外国友人写的关于国外文化的文章它刊登很多外国友人写的关于国外文化的文章It carries/published articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries.10.我们特别欢迎我们特别欢迎.的文章的文章we would especially welcome articles about.
