1、沐彬中学高三英语备课组沐彬中学高三英语备课组英语书面表达的英语书面表达的解题要求解题要求1.切中题意、覆盖所有的语言要点切中题意、覆盖所有的语言要点 2.语言准确、得当语言准确、得当3 条理清楚、行文连贯条理清楚、行文连贯4.高分高分(21-25分分)要求要求:较多地使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇较多地使用较复杂的结构或较高级词汇 具备较强的语言运用能力具备较强的语言运用能力 常见错误举例分析常见错误举例分析【动词错误】【动词错误】1.There were hundreds of students couldnt go to school because they were poor.2.He
2、wouldnt able to work out the problem.3.He managed to swim across the river,but failed.常见错误举例分析(续)【中式英语】【中式英语】1.He cost five yuan to buy a new dictionary.2.Recently our village has taken place great changes.3.I was very difficult to refuse and had to receive her invitation.常见错误举例分析（续）【结构错误】【结构错误】1.He
3、 wrote about 300 stories,some of them had been translated into Chinese.2.Each year many people die and are hurt on road accidents.3.We should teach children dont play and ride bikes on the road.技技 巧巧1.使用较高级的使用较高级的词汇词汇3.使用恰当的连使用恰当的连接词接词词汇反映你知识贮存量词汇反映你知识贮存量的多少，也是衡量英语的多少，也是衡量英语水平的一个重要标志。水平的一个重要标志。运用得当的
4、句子结构可以给运用得当的句子结构可以给文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章增色不少，从而使整篇文章因此而生辉文章因此而生辉。使用恰当连接词，对写一使用恰当连接词，对写一篇有篇有“英语味英语味”的文章很的文章很重要，能使文章上下衔接重要，能使文章上下衔接自然、紧凑。自然、紧凑。2.使用较丰富的使用较丰富的句式句式1.Because the weather was good,our journey was comfortable.2.We all think he is a great man.3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea.4.The students ther
5、e neednt pay for their books.5.You can find my house easily.Thanks to the good weather,our journey was comfortable.We all think highly of him.A good idea occurred to me.A good idea suddenly struck me.Books are free for the students there.Youll have no trouble finding my house.【例句】【例句】利用以下各招可给句子润色利用以
6、下各招可给句子润色,让句式丰让句式丰富起来。富起来。1.使用并列句使用并列句2.使用强调句使用强调句3.使用倒装句使用倒装句3.恰当使用被动句恰当使用被动句4.使用使用with的复合结构的复合结构5.使用各类从句使用各类从句6.使用非谓语动词使用非谓语动词1 When he arrives,please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式）.2.To his surprise,the little girl knows so many things.（使用名词性从句）3.Though Im weak,Ill make the effort.(使用倒装句)4.He did
7、not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型)On his arriving,please give me an e-mail.What surprises him is that the little girl knows so many things.Weak as I am,Ill make the effort.It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happen
8、ed.【例句】【例句】1.On one side of the road there is a new classroom building.On the other side,where the playground used to be now stands another new buildingour library.2.As far as I know,everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things.3.Whats more,I can go to bed earlier.【例句】【例句】如何算是一篇好文章？如何算是一篇好
9、文章？覆盖了所有的要点应用了较多的语法结构和词汇有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。要点全词汇,句型（高级）和语法多样化（较复杂）连接词 联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：1)大小：近100户人家，约500口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78年后变化很大。人们生活比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有4层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100词左右。任务：润色下面的一篇书面表达。任务：润
10、色下面的一篇书面表达。Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school.This village is very small.It has nearly 100 families and about 500 people.It used to be very poor.It has changed a lot since 1978.People here are richer than before.Now it is taking on a new look.The school here was very small.Now it has been rebuilt.The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys.It is the most beautiful building in the village.All the school-age children can study here.They enjoy free education in it.Thank you.
